Clan Cultivation: The Chen Immortal Clan

Author, the main character has an earth element spiritual root and you have a water element magical power. What earth element can you set to protect the mountain, crack the ground, break the mountain, metamagnetic aura, and escape from the earth?

They are all cultivating immortals, but they still favor boys over girls. They all have the same blood. How can they look at men and women if not their qualifications?

A single earth spiritual root, magical power to call rain, weird

Is it necessary to cultivate immortality even if a single spiritual root has been broken through by taking medicine for the other three, four or five spiritual roots? Geniuses need to have a genius pattern at the beginning. It's boring to build foundations and suppress them. If you like to suppress you, write four or five spiritual roots. And since your spiritual roots are using the old routine, you can just use it. You insist on slightly changing it without introducing it. It's confusing to read.

The author sacrificed the protagonist's wife and must abandon it

I've read almost half of it, and here are some suggestions for you: First of all: the plot and narration are not coherent, just like when you were writing, you thought about half of the entire plot and then wrote the other half. The problem is that we don't know what you omitted, don't tell me and leave room for the reader's imagination! Secondly: There are some typos that others have pointed out to you. Wouldn't it be faster to correct them if you have time to check this chapter yourself? Finally: Change the introduction. I saw that your introduction said it was a group portrait, but you ended up with a protagonist who traveled through time. It does not mean that you write the protagonist and add a little description of the supporting characters to form a group portrait. I am afraid that your introduction will be beaten. Many readers who like group portraits will only think that you are selling sheep over others.

Finally, there is a family cultivator who can watch

The author must be a smoker, but the protagonist of a novel about cultivating immortals actually smokes? Might as well make incense!

It felt like the protagonist's family was going too smoothly, and the plot had no sense of urgency. I like the kind of plot that is always forced by the situation. It would be better to kill a few supporting characters...

The writing is very good, surpassing most of the family stories on the market. As long as you don't supervise, the results will definitely not be bad. The author sticks to it and has the potential to become a god. As long as you don't supervise, I will definitely continue to follow it and recommend it to you.