The Original Ocean in the Fish Tank

Deleted the post directly? If you can't accept any suggestions, then you really shouldn't be a fan of Internet writing. I told you that you wrote the protagonist as a creator, but you didn't take creation seriously, just as a tool, and you also wanted to write a heroic plot like Homer's epic. Can readers sympathize with you? Divine grace is like the sea, divine power is like prison, without divine grace, you are the creator but just like Nuwa, you are just a decoration. God loves the world, let alone loves the world. Your first creations and the ancestors of various races call the protagonist's father, but does the protagonist think that they are close to them? You are not as good as a stranger. You might as well let them call you boss or boss. You are just a tool. If your performance is not up to standard, it would be more natural to fire you. You want to show the majesty of God, but you don't regard creation as a human being. Who will pay attention to you?

No one reads the novel, which is the most painful thing.

In fact, I originally wanted to create a marine world, a magical marine ecological world like Deep Sea Trek and Abyssal Syndrome. But the protagonist's plan is to create a Western fantasy world, with humans, beasts, elves, and all the elements of the old version of Western fantasy. Feels a bit stale. Nowadays, the mortal race is a bit boring. Their creativity is not as good as that of the ancient races. Their psychic abilities have been developed for thousands of years, so they came up with a knight training method. The same goes for wizards. The psychic sea servers are all laid out by the protagonist. Wizards only know how to surf the Internet. Even if the network cable is broken, no spells can be used. Knights can still store psychic energy in their bodies. At first, I thought the plot would use a different race as the protagonist, such as the Sea Tribe and the Elemental Tribe. In fact, Qidian's creation story of a different race has changed the soup but not the medicine. Many people have read it and it is quite popular. But the mainstream in the book is already human civilization. I think the protagonist should also create many fantastic things. Can you write about them in detail, such as merging monsters and demons into a new species? Maybe this kind of creation is more interesting.

Come on. I am speechless if I ask if the only extraordinary review has been blocked by Qidian.

I've been poisoned 😏

I hope it doesn't turn into a dog-licking or nanny-style novel

The author wrote 3,000 words in a row for thirty days, which earned me seventeen points. Thanks to the author. Although my taste is spoiled by some sophisticated and well-educated writers, this kind of hard-working new author must be well supported! Provide reserve talents for me to read the creation text in the future! Come on, author! ! ! !

Sprinkle some pure natural urea into the fish tank, add some of the ultimate fragrance recognized by human beings, and light a cigarette in it.

The relationship between gods and believers, if believers are a necessity, then God needs to love the world and give both grace and power If believers are just important items, then the relationship between the two parties is an exchange of interests. If there can be some heroes and saints, then we can focus on cultivating the feelings of this small group of people If gods do not need believers, then they can be happy and angry as they please, and do not be constrained by the secular concepts of believers If God is the Creator, then only immortal species are qualified to be His descendants. Everything else is treated equally, regardless of love, good or evil If God is omnipotent, then He is omnipresent. Another angle is that He does not exist in the world and cannot be recognized. There is no trace of his existence in the world, or he is aloof and suppresses the vast ages. It is an incomprehensible civilization

Come on

Compared with Eastern fantasy creation stories, I prefer Western fantasy magic. People in the comment area want to read a creation story with an oriental fantasy color. I recommend you to read Feeding All Humans Author Three Hundred Catties of Smile. 4 Different creation series. Take a look at the completely different stories. There is always one that suits you. Oh, by the way, there is also a book called "Only God"

The writing is very good, but the updates are too slow. What can you do with two chapters a day? Of course, quality is the most important thing.

I really don't understand. You're Chinese, and the origins of mythology are all written about foreign countries. It's so difficult to read Chinese stories. You just have to move them from mountains to seas. The giant Long Bo, the giant turtle holding up the sky, Bi Fang, Jian Yi Hua 4 zombies, don't write about the creation of the world, just start with mountains and seas. No better than magic.

In the later stage, the protagonist should be imprisoned and dissected. After all, the wizard is very strong, and the protagonist is only a god. If he is a god, he will be imprisoned and dissected by the wizard. This is the routine of the wizard system. Wizard's special attack bonus against gods.

I like this style very much. There are not many novels that I can read now. Please keep it up and I hope I can finish it.

I would like to ask, what does the author think about the heroine?

There has been no update for a day. Will the author cut it? (⋟⋞)

There has never been one before, and there will be no one after. Unverifiable dark energy application version of spiritual energy recovery

I hope the author will work hard and look at it now. It seems to be pretty good overall.

I haven't read it yet, it's just another idea, I don't know how it's written. The theme of unknown fun and fun should be very exciting, but I don't know how effective the author's writing will be. As far as the plot is concerned, as soon as I saw Chapter 3, I knew the author was lazy. This kind of laziness means that the protagonist is arranged in place all at once. Instead of relying on the protagonist to develop independently. There's a lot less fun in this. A simple explanation is that the protagonist has no organizational and planning skills. The protagonist's efforts and development, ideas. It's not very acceptable. It seems reasonable, but in fact it's a bit of an inexplicable development. Actually, many things can be seen. There are several similar books. I don't know if the author has read them. However, the author's ideological and cultural background is not enough, although the writing cannot be tasteful. In fact, it is a question of satisfaction levels for people. Therefore, there are many false stories about heroes and heroines having problems in virtual world novels. However, many people and novel authors, including many novel authors, cannot meet the five levels of respect. Therefore, plots such as slaps in the face will inevitably appear in novels. It doesn't matter if you are rampant, but the more rampant you are, the more mistakes will be made, so there will be a lot of problems later. But I will find some books for you, and you can read them yourself. High-dimensional shuttle, deep space ball leader, low-dimensional game, my mythical world, my bottle universe, human brain ranch (with bugs) Then it is the first time to write a novel, etc. In fact, there will be more than 300 chapters, and problems will basically occur. If you continue to write, it is a limit for many authors.

If there's nothing new, it's just old wine in a new bottle. The writing is mediocre. It seems to be okay so far, but it's not considered toxic.

I think if you have wisdom, the biggest thing is to be able to overcome difficulties. For example, if you are in the ocean, why not? Just like the mainland, wisdom, the best thing here, is desire

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!