Tianguandujie: This World Is Too Difficult

Novels like this one with a golden finger that guarantees permanent certification will generally become popular if you stick to it, but anything with the slightest side effects will basically become a eunuch in a short time.

I suggest you change your profile. It can easily be misunderstood as Seseven. The subject matter of this book is very novel, and it will be popular if it is stable.

Except for some words that are a little fluent, there are no big problems. The setting is a little complicated, but the world view is large enough. Overall, it's pretty good.

After reading the first few chapters, I feel that it is the routine of the rise of loser, and the templates of various heroines are similar to those of fantasy heroines in previous years, but the author has removed those mindless pretentious plots.

What about ai? You should at least revise what you write in ai! Not even mentioning the main text, your tm introduction is not smooth! You have no professional attitude at all. You can be popular unless God is blind.

The writing is okay, but I always feel something is wrong when I read it. I suggest you check the sentences carefully.

I only saw two words from this introduction: "Fuck!"

How come every novel with multiple female protagonists always has a witch, either a saint of a demon sect or a sect leader, either aloof or charming, with similar routines and similar personalities. It's really not good for old bookworms. I have read many of them many times and am not interested. Writers, come on, strive for the title of god, you can learn from the typing speed of an eagle

Can you read it yourself? Many places don't make sense.

The author's worldview is quite broad. I suggest that the author take a good look at the refining methods (methods, elixirs, weapons, formations) corresponding to each level of animals, plants and minerals, and the difference in combat power of each level, and the corresponding techniques. I feel whether I have written it down or not, and I can't remember it. I have no impression. As for readers' complaints, controversy is the only way to gain popularity. Didn't Jin Laomingzi also get scolded?

Not bad (●°u°●)​", with high-quality resources, come on, be domineering, and speed up the evolution and update 😡

It's really good, the story is good and interesting, the protagonist is smart and resourceful and I love it, and the heroine is a badass sister, which is very interesting to write. The other one is also a little silly and cute, more to come.

The imagination is good, the writing is also good, the emotions are carefully written, and the natural encounters and entanglements of interests will not disgust the readers. Nowadays, many readers are tired of the heroine, not tired of the relationship. For people like this kind of Taoist cultivators, they have a long time to slowly write about the heroine. There is no need to throw away the setting all at once, and keep writing about psychology. The author is most afraid that the author will collapse.

Yes, there are a lot of women, even an old lady can be the main character, the harem is for all ages.

Just change my name, my journey to the harem

I only express my feelings and do not represent other people's. It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.