Rebirth: Starting from Snatching the Fate of Immortality

My evaluation is average! In the past, it was definitely a masterpiece, but now I disagree... A lot of the author's thinking remains in the past, such as the name of the exercise method is too long, and some details are not handled logically. Let me talk about what I think is the poisonous point: "I have practiced the same technique to the soul, but there is still a bottleneck after rebirth... A better start, the memory of the first to sixth grade, do you still have questions that you can't master after learning the first grade again? Exactly the same thing, you have studied it for six years, dimensionality reduction attack! There are still people who can't,,, what do you think?

How to put it, because it is a rebirth stream, it is understandable to hurry up in the early stage, but how to put it, you have never reached the golden elixir in your previous life, and your backhand is all kinds of participation. To put it bluntly, if you raise your hand, you will be gone. If you participate, you can also control the golden elixir. Is this what a fledgling immortal cultivator can do? The writing is okay, but the plot is stiff and all sorts of things are too far-fetched.

The writing is okay, but the plot leans towards the ancient genre It's not very popular at the starting point, you can try other websites! Come on

It's okay, the pace is not sluggish, and the protagonist's cultivation is not deliberately suppressed. A genius should look like a genius. If you plan ahead and have a lot of food, you should be superior to others.

This is obviously a cultivating immortality with a xinxing stream, but the protagonist who is both responsible and established really makes me speechless, especially the chapter about the named disciple. . .

It's a pity that I didn't write it anymore.

The writing is quite good, my favorite type, the writing is excellent, not wordy, no hard turns, no big flaws, better than most writing, the plot is reasonable and smooth, come onｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧The author is great!

Self-recommendation: "Begin to become stronger by fulfilling your last wish" [Gold Finger] + [Secret Technique] + [Alien Beast] + [Spirit Seed] + [Martial Arts] ... In the world of high martial arts, powerful warriors fly into the sky and escape from the earth... Huge alien beasts are as tall as mountains, and their power can lift mountains... …And heaven and earth breed spiritual seeds, which are magical and extraordinary... … Fulfill the last wish of the deceased, obtain the ability that the other person is most proud of, and embark on the path of practice... … [Complete a successful robbery... Last wish reward: innate realm. ] …… [Abolish Li Yuanyi's cultivation... Last wish reward: Shura Blood Transformation Sutra. ] … [Guard until the Yin Shen flowers bloom... Last wish reward: Five Poisons Herbs Sutra. …… [Kill the Golden-winged Peng King... Last wish reward: Cave Sky Fragments] …… Realm division: 1. Inner Qi 2. Innate 3. Spiritual Transformation 4. Yuan Dan 5. Dharma 6. Nirvana 7. Cave Heaven ……

No, did the author confirm the heroine in the second chapter? I thought it was a novel without a heroine

These exercises have great names, but they are inexplicably embarrassing.

Write a higher IQ for the villain 😭. I feel you can write it better, but you just don't pay attention and just make it casually.

Can the name not be so long? The longer the name, the more awesome it is? It's hard to read and feels like the number of words is too high.

Is there a heroine? It's time to prepare early.

Some people say that the level is high. The story is obviously very good, but if the concept is strengthened, it will not be perfect.

The book is well written, why are there so many bad reviews?

The main line is not clear and it seems a bit confusing.

The writing is quite good, but I found two shortcomings. First, there are many typos. I don't know if the author found them. Second, it often contains private information to export thinking and cognition. Except for these two points, it is close to fairy grass.

What is Chapter 74 about? It seems like this book is going to be eunuch?

Doesn't it mean that your cultivation level was not high in your previous life? Why do you always encounter people and monsters who have not yet begun to practice? How long has the protagonist lived in his previous life and where is his cultivation level?