My Family Cultivates Immortality, and I Have Resources in Another World

Brother, the first 3 chapters of yours are too poisonous.

This is too poisonous, who can stand to watch it?

I'm not trying to knock you, author. With your writing skills, just imitate one or two books first. The writing is terrible, and the plot settings are very awkward.

Don't criticize me, my writing is okay so far, and I won't say it, but what? Let me tell you what I think, and an interesting idea I have. The part where you get the jade pendant is just like in the first few pictures. I feel it is better to let the girl get married. Maybe she will become a (rich) person and her father will come over. Brothers, do you think this is possible?