Dominate the Heavens: Starting from the Foreign History of Wulin

Bai Feifei and Lu Ye both transferred to other more powerful magic skills before Dacheng. This top magic skill (bottom place) with full survivability and severely insufficient attack power seems to have no real successor who can carry it forward and surpass others. Could the talented and evil Shi Guanyin and Li Qi be that person? After all, Lu Ye's investment in her has to recoup the cost. He himself can't master the magical secrets of the Grand Master level, so it is a shortcut for his woman to deduce and perfect them! It's not like he can't provide hundreds of martial arts as materials for progress. If he doesn't have enough understanding, he should find a way to use the power of other geniuses (protagonist or villain BOSS).

It can be seen that the author is trying hard to imitate Gu Long's writing style, especially in the latest chapter. Unfortunately, without that writing style, it seems nondescript and embarrassing. The author might as well write in his own writing style. After all, writing about Gu Long's fandom does not necessarily have to be written in Gu Long's writing style. Gu Long's writing style It's not just writing a few stories that are not only good, but most people can't grasp his writing style at all. The story is obviously very attractive, but he insists on imitating others, and the result is nondescript and annoying. The author should put more thought into making up the story, and just write in a normal writing style.

The protagonist has a variety of unique magical skills, plus cheats. There is no one who only practices one kind of martial arts. Is the author overpowering the protagonist, or is the protagonist just too useless?

The beginning is good, the writing is good, and it is very interesting, but after the destruction of Renyi Village, the plot really takes a sharp turn, completely stallion style. Especially to Zhu Qiqi, he said that he would not force her, but then pretended to have a relationship with Zhu Qiqi. In ancient times, what was the difference between ruining a woman's integrity and forcing a woman to do it? I just want to watch a martial arts fan, hoping to see heroes fighting for supremacy and heroic spirit. The protagonist starts off well, but suddenly turns into a sleazy one. I'm really disappointed. Personal opinion, don't spray if you don't like it 😅😅😅

Why do you feel that this protagonist is both responsible and established? More and more pulled

The golden finger of the protagonist, even if he cannot defend himself righteously, he should not resort to evil deeds. Gu Long's novels are very idealistic. No matter how much martial arts practice and deep internal strength this kind of person has, he will never be the enemy of Xiao Li's flying knife. In the world of low martial arts, you can't even stick to your heart, and the flaws in your soul are so big that there are no limits. When it comes to the middle martial arts and high martial arts like Huang Yi, it is estimated that killing him is no different from killing a dog by a small master. Either write about Jin Yong's world where internal strength is king, or write about Gu Long's idealistic world which can only appear nondescript.

A villain but also a bit of a virgin, naughty

The protagonist is dead? I found that the protagonist seemed to be dead, as if there was no such person. I thought it was the protagonist who defeated the future, but it turned out that Mrs. Ye Di defeated the future. The fun of the fan fiction is nothing more than the appearance of the saint in front of people and the beauties of the original work. It is not that you translate the original work. The point of fun is that you are not involved at all. If you don't take action in the siege of Laoshan, you will still not take action in future appearances. You might as well die and let the original characters continue to act.

I'm still waiting for everyone's feedback to see if I want to pursue it! What attracts me to this book: The early part of the Happy King where I was struggling to survive, and I had to be careful in order to survive, which is more vivid What I gradually stopped reading later: 1. When I got to the peerless double pride, I felt like a licking dog, and I had to show off my IQ to lick the two women. 2. Personality: the protagonist's The feeling of his character to me may not be as good as that of a hypocrite like Yue Buqun. How can he conquer so many villains in Gu Long's works? Anything can happen in Gulongjianghu. In order to survive, the waiter may poison the food and then feast on it, and die together with the so-called master. In general, the portrayal of the protagonist is relatively failed. There is neither the domineering power of Li Chenzhou who dominates the world, and power is the fist; nor the refreshing feeling of strategizing.

He didn't kill decisively, he only saw that he couldn't walk after seeing a woman.

There should be no distinction between third-rate masters and second-rate masters, just like Jin Yong and Gu Long. You can only know who is stronger after playing against him! Can a third-rate player outperform a second-rate player? If you can't beat it, then it's just a matter of comparing yourself to someone else. If you can beat it, classification is meaningless.

Because no official position can add glory to the great master, Fu Cailin and Bi Xuan also contributed to Goguryeo and the Turks, but they did not serve as officials! The protagonist seems to be targeting Grand Master Yuwen, but he also lacks momentum. The Golden Retriever Lion King Xie Xun stunned the heroes of the King Panshan Knife Appreciation Conference with his lion roar, and Huang Yaoshi defeated the Ten Thousand Snake Formation with the Blue Sea Tide song. It can be seen that the master-level masters used sound wave skills to clear the battlefield when they were outnumbered.

As far as martial arts outsiders can see, the Shuangjiao setting is separated from Dapu, and there are all kinds of forced additions, and all kinds of contradictory characters... It's just like looking at a psychopath.

To be honest, the plot is too twists and turns. Sometimes things that can be solved quickly and easily often end up unexpectedly. Just forget it once or twice. This is the case in every world. Moreover, every time the protagonist goes to a world, he will encounter characters who suppress him. Also, since you have time travel cheats and you have brought people with you, it will be a final battle in the Tang Dynasty world, so you can't push people around.

Chapter 248 said that Lu Ye did not understand the true meaning of Mingyu Gong, and only understood the superficial meaning. I was convinced. Is the protagonist like this? I have been practicing Mingyu Gong for decades, and with the wisdom and help of those who practice Mingyu Gong such as Yao Yue, my understanding of the nine-level Mingyu Gong is at least the eighth level. Chapter 248 also says "I haven't understood any of the principles of Mingyu Gong at all." Does the co-author rely entirely on practicing magic puppets? Really vomited

A first-rate person can be called a master, but a second-rate or third-rate expert can be called a master. Isn't it strange to read this? A second-rate or third-rate person, or a character, is better than an expert! Why are so many authors still using it? It looks really painful

I immediately gave up the book when I saw the plot of Xiao Li flying a knife! Li Xunhuan sends his daughter off! The protagonist is giving away his daughter!

I don't understand. The protagonist's so-called subordinates just send resources directly, and they don't see their own value at all. Even a dog can become a big boss with the protagonist's resources. The value of these people is not written at all, and their own talents are not written. Why does the latest protagonist Brian respect him so much? Send him resources for free? Does it make my balls ache? Where is the fun? He's not an old man, nor is he looking for sex. What is he trying to picture?

There is too much nonsense and it is too taken for granted. Chai Yuguan is a great tycoon who has never been born in the world. He must be sinister, domineering and suspicious. The protagonist should not be so talkative. He should expose Chai Yuguan's care and show off his cleverness before Chai Yuguan opens his mouth. He should not be so good. When you are so good that Chai Yuguan feels danger, you will die.

I have been chasing it until now, and I haven't seen any big poisonous points yet. Come on, author, please update it quickly. Looking forward to it!

I haven't watched it yet, but I voted for it after hearing that it has a lot of female recruits.

1. It can improve the speed of time passing in different worlds. For example, after reaching a certain level, you can control the time speed of other worlds or even stop time at will. If there is a next book, it must have this, otherwise the time of all worlds will pass at the same time. The more you write, the more loopholes you will have. 2. Don't take people through time travel. It's superfluous and has no use yet. 3. The description of female characters in the early stage is quite personalized, but later it becomes too facial-type. In addition, the protagonist can be described as both righteous and evil in the early stage, but in the later stage, it can be described as sanctimonious. This is also because there are too many characters and they are too facial-type.

Later in the writing, the main characters have changed. If you don't pounce, who will?

In fact, I feel quite numb. When writing about the division of martial arts realms in the world of martial arts, would people in the martial arts world still introduce themselves as so-and-so but a third-rate martial artist? 🤭🤭🤭

I've only looked at a little bit, and it's not like I can't look at the grain and grass. I've probably cut it by now. All I can say is that it's too rolled up now.