I Served as an Admonisher in the Song Dynasty

It feels pretty good. I have wanted to read this kind of admonishment novel for a long time, but most of them are brainless and cool novels like death admonition, all kinds of suicide attempts. To be honest, like this situation in ancient times, no matter which emperor values ​​​​face, Li Shimin is generous enough, right? Do you think Wei Zheng dares to say that Li Shimin killed his brother and his brother every day? The protagonist of that kind of brainless novel walks through minefields in court meetings every day. This kind of thing will greatly damage the majesty of the court, and no emperor will tolerate it. The advice in this novel is very tactful, and it does not advise everything. In fact, I feel that this is the normal practice of advice in ancient times. Normally, you can give advice on such things, but for such a big matter, will the emperor not know that he is wrong? You might be able to succeed with a little more enlightenment, but if you insist on forcing the emperor to admit his mistake, there is only a dead end. At present, I feel that the logic of the novel is rigorous and there are not many poisonous points. I feel that it is worth reading.

The idea is good, but the article seems to be dissatisfied with the mountains. Everyone follows the protagonist or the author's ideas for granted. The result is that on the one hand, the characters become puppets, and on the other hand, the plot is dull and they can only rack their brains to create a few more calm events.

How to put it, if I were still young, I might think that the author wrote well and that changing the system could save the Song Dynasty, but is this really the case? In fact, the human system has not made much progress. From slaves in the primitive era to feudalism and now, human rights are improving, but have they really reached equality? As long as it is a human society, it must be in the form of a pyramid. The progress of the system is only to maintain dominance. As for the improvement of the status of the bottom, it is just incidental (and it is mostly brought about by technology and has nothing to do with the system), not necessary. Therefore, in my opinion, the experience of the protagonist and the power of the opponents are a bit fake, so why do most time travel The protagonists of the article are all crushed by the trend of science and technology, because compared with the human spirits in ancient times, in fact, the reform that relies on the economic base to determine the superstructure is the most likely to happen, and time travelers can change the form of the economic base by climbing the technology tree, from farming to industry. Otherwise, how about relying on young time travelers who have never even been an official to fight against the old yin people who are proficient in conspiracy in ancient times?

I really don't understand why the author didn't start with official governance. If the problems of redundant officials and unclear powers and responsibilities are not solved, no matter how good your other measures are, you can't implement them. The classic example is Wang Anshi's reform failed miserably, and the Green Miao Law harmed the people The more successful reform in the middle and late dynasties was Zhang Juzheng's reform. Although people The government was overthrown, but at least when Zhang Juzheng was in power, he first tested the law to mobilize officials, and then whipped the law, and the situation was looking good Since the protagonist decided to take action slowly, and the protagonist is still young, and the emperor is not old, copying the law is the right sequence, and after another hundred years of achievements, there is no need to worry about the government being overthrown. As a result, the author now forcefully cheats to eliminate the resistance of officials and has no brains in politics and people. The situation of Xuzhou's three-year trial reform has not been written at all. What's the point? (Is it necessary for Zhao Zhen to write hundreds of thousands of words to give birth to a son?) The level of rigor is really much worse than other well-written novels on the History Channel. Other readers may find it quite interesting, but readers who are familiar with the history circle will see it as all bugs... It is particularly uncomfortable.

First of all, I am a history novice. I have only a partial understanding of the history and social conditions of various dynasties and generations, and my sensitivity to politics is shockingly low. Therefore, I did not feel too disconnected when reading this novel. I just felt that watching the protagonist realize his political ideas bit by bit would be very relaxing. I still remember that the reason why I clicked on this book at first was because I was attracted by the character of the male protagonist. Perhaps it's because I also have a bit of an idealist element, so when I see the protagonist using his own abilities to get rid of the corruption in the court, not only do I not feel that the plot is naive or too ideal, but I will have a kind of recognition of "yes, yes, this is how it should be". From this point of view, because the male protagonist's actions are embedded with my social ideals, I will be extremely tolerant of him and look forward to what impact he will have on the entire Song Dynasty in the future. In addition to the male protagonist himself, I also like other characters very much. Needless to say, Bao Zheng was an unselfish and gentle man who followed the laws of the Song Dynasty. However, in the author's writing, Bao Zheng was not only a majestic and unreasonable official of the capital, but also a man who spoke openly to his friends. He would also compete with two other scholar-bureaucrats for the title of "teacher" of Su Zimu. The second thing that surprised me was the shaping of a person, that is Song Renzong Zhao Zhen. From his early weakness to his current heroic appearance, his transformation is traceable and not too unreasonable (the armor is all ready, and I am already looking forward to the day of his personal expedition). Although I sometimes feel that Zhao Zhen and Su Jingming sometimes trust each other too much, I will lose my mind and ignore it. After all, my requirements for the novel are not strict, as long as it can be read (it's not that I don't pick anything, I hate collections of bad jokes the most. I can accept multiple female protagonists, but I cannot accept too many descriptions and self-imaginations of women's bodies, such as the most common ones: "When he lowered his head, he saw the other person's surging body close at hand" and "The long legs wrapped in black stockings are plump and well-proportioned, and a little bit of snow color can be seen faintly". When the character first appeared and wrote this, I would think that the protagonist had become obscene and obscene, but later on the emotion was revealed This kind of writing can be regarded as fun, but it was really not good at the beginning, even if it was to introduce the characteristics of the characters, Tang Wanmei was quite good in the author's book. She was a considerate, generous and decent woman, and a nagging but enlightened mother. Mainly in this ancient background, she still had pure love with the male protagonist, which is really rare, so when I saw the tenderness of their young couple, I didn't feel uncomfortable at all, I just smiled knowingly). Speaking of which, I personally think that the handling of the relationship between the male protagonist and various female characters in "Global Movie King" is very good. Maybe the image of the male protagonist is well established, so I think it is reasonable for the women written in the article to like him, rather than being put down by the author outside the scene. And it is in line with realistic logic (I don't think any normal woman would rush into sex when she knows the other person is interested). His feelings are in stages, from immature youth to thoughtful choices, and finally to the radiance of warmth and encouragement (I hope that I will be with Teacher Xiao Zhang for a long time). Of course, the above is a kind of shaping in a normal and realistic modern background. The kind of romance exchange love partners is not within this scope. There is also an ancient feudal background. In this background, the permission of three wives and four concubines makes it a matter of course to have a harem. I personally do not object to this behavior. What's more, when I play the Emperor's Growth Plan, I will take in several beautiful sisters, although there is always the most partial one. Ahem, the topic is off topic, back to this book, there is a plot in it, it is said that Mrs. Sima Guang had nothing to do, so she asked Sima Guang to take a concubine, but Sima Guang refused. It may be because I am also a girl. I saw that Mrs. Sima Guang could not bear the pain of letting Sima Guang's blood line continue because she had no children. Even when she quarreled with her husband and finally asked to come to the Su family, I still felt a little complicated in my heart. In that era, this was a sin. When Sima Guang refused her suggestion of taking a concubine, I didn't even know whether she felt more guilty, more fearful, or more bitter. Although the incident ended with the adoption of a child from Sima Guang's uncle's house, I still couldn't help but think about it a little more. Because this book is mainly about the court after all, I won't say much more. Let's talk about some of my expectations for the follow-up content. There is no doubt that the first thing is to recapture the sixteen states of Yanyun, which the author mentioned repeatedly in his own article, but I personally am not very interested in these recapture matters. What I prefer is the early development period when the king was slowly crowned king and Guangji Liang was accumulated. What I like to watch the most is the judgment and discussion of some key events by various dynasties and generations after the completion of the great cause of unification, or the analysis and debate of historical events by modern netizens. I don't know if anyone likes to read epitaphs or biographies, which are not official comments, but a few words accidentally revealed by his close friends or his descendants after his death. Or maybe one day, one month and one night, he suddenly remembered the days of arguing in the past, but now there is no one around him, and there is no one to talk to (Su Jingming is so young, and the others are so old, this day will definitely happen), he will definitely write something! Like "The Chronicles of Xiang Ji Xuan" and "Six Chapters of a Floating Life" after the loss of his wife, and "The Record of the Eight Immortals in Dreams" after the death of his friend (this is a made-up name based on "Song of the Eight Immortals in Drinking").                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         but I read historical novels just to see two things: one is to make up for the shortcomings of history, and the other is to see the final conclusion of new history. Finally, come on, author! Looking forward to your further development!

Come on, come on, come on, come on

Let me chase you from beginning to end, you are the first.

This author is probably not a newcomer. Newcomers are not of this level. They are either just a vest, or they have written a lot of street stories, and then they came up with this book. The writing is very humanistic and has a bit of historical charm. Especially about the promotion of officials in ancient times, it is very realistic. In many historical novels, the protagonists are promoted and knighted casually. It is really a fool's errand. It can't be that easy. From ancient times to the present, there are rules and regulations for promotion in any dynasty. It does not mean that you can be promoted immediately if the emperor wants you to be promoted. It is just that you have many opportunities, but you still need to be ranked based on seniority, especially in the middle of the dynasty, not counting the early days of the founding of the country and the end of the dynasty, when the system was incomplete and collapsed. The same is true in modern times. You also know the situation before the founding of the People's Republic of China and the early days of the founding of the People's Republic of China. You also know the current promotion situation. This is a law and will not change due to one person's will. Let's just say this, if the author writes well, if he keeps writing like this, there will definitely be no problem with this book! For me, an Internet literature enthusiast, it is not easy for the author to write such an article. He needs to consult a lot of information. The first 5,000 items in his browsing history are definitely about the Song Dynasty. Hahaha, because I have also tried to write online articles, it is a pure hobby, and I still have not given up. I do not ask to make money, because my writing is relatively poor, it is just a pure hobby.

In the historical text of the Song Dynasty, the protagonist begins with a small essay admonishing the officials, gathering the sages of the Song Dynasty, stirring up trouble in the court, triggering a wave of reforms, and striving to change the poor and weak Song Dynasty. Among them, Song Renzong, Bao Zheng, Ouyang Xiu and Wang Anshi are vividly portrayed. The protagonist is wise and affectionate, has no major poisonous points, and is identified as the best food and grass.

Yang Guang, one of the Ten Philosophers of Net Temple, has returned to the world again. I really didn't expect anyone to praise him now.

The book is a good book, but it is a bit too idealistic. I feel that because I am the protagonist, things can be done. Putting aside some applied policies that were not in line with the productivity of the times, the conflicts with Liao and Xixia were written in an idealistic way, just like playing house. If it could simply defend the city and consume tens of thousands of Liao troops, and simply go around and capture the enemy commander alive, the Song Dynasty would not have been suppressed by the Liao for so many years. If Yelu Chongyuan was so easy to deal with, Liao Xingzong and Daozong would not focus on appeasing him.

I feel that many policies are taken for granted, without taking into account the background of the times and productivity, and copying modern management systems mechanically. At the very least, in many cases the ancients were not without wisdom, but were unable to achieve efficient management due to communication methods.

Quan Song's question, what can a literati do?

Taiwan's remonstrances can't save the Song Dynasty. What officials say and do is decided by their butts. In the end, they just make the people suffer again.

The author's writing style is good, his angle is novel, and his skills are solid. The previous rating was 80+. Later, he failed because of excessive cheating, which caused a drama. If you, a beggar, can be trained as a Jinshi by a private private school and still be ranked high, I will treat you as if you have met an old grandfather and a hermit. Reform, can you push it forward so smoothly with just this little effort? Can a few words of verbal escape make the soldiers of the Song Dynasty realize their shame and become brave and passionate?

Pretty good. First of all, the perspective chosen is very innovative, and the choice of the Taiwanese admonitor is very good. Because in our traditional historical web articles, this kind of character is usually a villain or a boastful official, but in the author's writing, it has a different style. Secondly, don't be fooled by the introduction. I personally think that the introduction is not very well written. At first, I thought it was a mindless white article, and the author made the emperor die just by opening his mouth. In fact, the structure of the article is reasonable, the content is rigorously researched, and the knowledge reserve is very sufficient. The best thing is that the author's arrangement of female characters is very reasonable. It's very relaxed, not laggy, and very smooth, which is really rare. However, the pace of the article is quite fast. Although it is a very good advantage that it is not watered down, I am worried about the arrangements later because I don't know what the author has written before. I'm especially looking forward to writing about Jiayou's second year of the Dragon and Tiger List, where all the great gods will appear, and I don't know how it will turn out.

It's so well written. I haven't seen such a logical and non-conforming historical article in a long time. The author is definitely aiming for platinum at this level.

Seeing the policy of requiring officials to write monthly and annual reports, it can be said that it is too taken for granted and unreasonable. Go and see what sales people have written in order to cope with daily, weekly, monthly and annual reports. This policy will only make the imperial court finish faster.

Alas, I can't stand it anymore. At the end, what will happen to the protagonist in the end? Be a loyal minister of the Song Dynasty?

The author feels that you attach too much importance to the Baijia Academy. I understand that the protagonist has traveled through the past and is very clear about the impact that some technologies can have on a country. Therefore, in this description, the protagonist attaches great importance to the Baijia Academy and has personally stood up for the Baijia Academy many times. Therefore, there is a lot of emphasis on this aspect. But in fact, even the guns and cannons in Baijia College had very little impact on the feudal era. The real impact is on those who use weapons and technology. These people are still the current emperors and ministers. What I hope is that the plot describes more about how the protagonist changes the entire court, changes the emperor's thinking, changes the ministers' way of serving as ministers, formulates many policies that benefit the country and the people, and finally tries to change the thinking that leads the people of the entire country. The demise of the Qing Dynasty was never due to the backwardness of technological weapons. Similarly, the power of technological weapons will not allow a country to become civilized. The protagonist should have more important things waiting for him to do. As for the protagonist of Baijia Academy, he should pay a little attention and report good results to the court. If not, it will not have any impact.

The subject matter is good and the plot is okay, but the classical Chinese writing in it is really bad. If it doesn't work, don't write it. Look for ancient articles with similar meanings and tailor them. It's better than just writing it yourself and then bragging about it.

After studying abroad for ten years, it was very difficult for me to return to the Song Dynasty to become emperor and reform. Being a public official and trying to save the Song Dynasty was not much different from the difficulty of starting a dog rebellion.

The author likes to write about embarrassment as embarrassing. I didn't notice it at first, but later I found it awkward. I also looked it up, and there is no such word as embarrassing.

Please read it. Please use your little hands to read the latest chapter. Reading it will determine your life and death. Please don't keep books. Please🙏🙏🙏

The more I read historical articles, the less I come across them. It's rare to find an author who takes both plot and epic into account. He writes with a degree of integrity and doesn't make up nonsense. I'm optimistic about this book. Good luck to the author.

The protagonist's reform has no new ideas, no new talents, and the emperor is not strong. It is difficult to succeed in the reform with only some high-ranking officials.

Are there any similar good works?

"I have played with guns on the throne of Khorne, drank soup at the cauldron of Nurgle, shared spoils in the house of Tzeentch, and sold songs in front of Slaanesh's bed! This is me, the founder of the empire! The slayer of orcs! The resister of demons, the emperor of mankind, Sigmar!" Sigmar introduced himself to the banquet with his warhammer, and by the way told all the guests how bad he was. "Fellow prophets, who can tell me the future destiny of the human empire! Can it suppress all races and be glorious forever?" The muscular man asked arrogantly. The prophet of Ulric the White Wolf came out first and said: "I see that the future of the empire will be filled with bald priests. They have scriptures in one hand and hammers in the other. They chant the name of Sigmar and brutally surround and suppress Ulric believers. After the civil war, the empire was destroyed." "Heresy! As a devout believer in Ulric, I don't believe your sowing discord!" Sigma was furious and smashed the White Wolf Prophet's head with a hammer. The Great Necromancer stood up again and said: "I saw countless warriors fighting with muskets and giant swords. Soldiers were cut down, priests were bewitched, and the empire was destroyed. Only the world of undead and bones will last forever." "Bastard! Humans will never accept a dead world!" Sigma smashed the bones of the Necromancer with another hammer. The rat prophet took a step forward, and the green crystal ball in his hand projected a picture of the bliss of the world: humans and rats coexist harmoniously, and the future will be prosperous; they provoke wars and sell military disasters, but criticize normal trade; they eat chicken and shoot each other in American style, but they are called They love life; their hands are full of blood, but they claim that they are the victims; they party together on the island, but claim to be human role models who take care of Luo Li... "This future seems pretty good. How can we realize it?" The big golden man asked humbly. "We lie, we cheat, we steal, and we have a course to teach these. With such continuous exploration and progress, the glory of the human empire will surely be realized." "What a wonderful future, I really want to see it with my own eyes." Sigma sighed happily. "Yes, when the empire is about to be destroyed and the last emperor, Karl Franz, dies in battle, you can be resurrected in his body and experience it all for yourself."

Finished spreading flowers, I hope the extra episode will have a modern perspective on what the protagonist does.

What is Jiao's background? Is he a Jinshi or a Jinshi? And the protagonist lives so comfortably in the capital with just his salary without doing business? Everyone says that living in the capital is not easy!