I Just Want to Torture You to Death, Don't Force Me to Beat You to Death

It's amazing at first glance, but becomes duller the more you look at it. Especially after it was published, it felt like a different person had written it.

When I first read it, I thought it was Gou Dao's novel. It was quite good before Chapter 50, but as soon as it was published, it became addictive. It felt like a different person. As a result, the protagonist was hunted down for no apparent reason. He and his master, a quasi-military general and a fifth-level general, killed more than a dozen sixth-level generals. The emotional sixth-level generals suddenly became a cabbage. According to his description, the enemies are sent in waves like gourd babies. It's really frustrating Author, you'd better listen to others' advice. If you do this, you say how many of the ten readers will leave. If one person talks about you, if he has a problem, everyone will scold him. If a group of people talks about you, but you still don't change, then you deserve the bad grades in your book.

Talk about your impressions after reading a few chapters. Many people in the comment area are very confused about the growth of the protagonist's strength. On the surface, it seems that the author deliberately suppresses his strength. In fact, I think this can be attributed to the author's fundamentally imperfect settings.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       " Is it the rule of three pounds per day? Is it related to physical fitness, the stronger the more? Is it an explosive body transformation? These settings are very easy to understand and can be understood at a glance. What about the author's setting? It is to open the floodgates, but it also comes up with an inexplicable formula m related to the four items of food subsistence allowance, etc., Which is extremely unfriendly to readers.                                                                                                                          can be said to be a synonym for complexity. If we simply write about opening the gate to release water, then it is obvious that the stronger the physique, the larger the opening that can be opened. The better the physique, the greater the growth. However, the protagonist does not meet the requirements, so there is a problem with the description of opening the gate and releasing water. As for the strength growth formula, in my opinion, it is completely a failure of the author to round out the setting. You said it was acceptable at the beginning, but later it was placed at the beginning of a separate chapter, which can only show that it is not effective. It is obvious that there is a conflict between the author's setting of the alien fruit adding strength and the advancement of the plot, which makes it illogical to add as much alien fruit as you want.                                                               I heard that the more powerful settings later have been solved by some means. If there is, this is probably a good thing. Not sure, I'll tell you when I have time. PS: In order to post, I subscribed to a chapter first. I wanted to vote monthly, but I thought I might as well reward 100 points.

You'll start charging after you finish fifty chapters. I think you can write better. It's not worth it to write at the same level as before. But how dare you start to write so poisonously? You really treat readers as fools. In the early stage, you have the problem of forcing the drama, but after that, I will directly add it. I will leave directly after chapter seventy.

Oops, your update speed is like a snail😓💨

The title of the book is so ridiculous, but the content is quite good! Are you trying to be cute by contrast?

When I first started reading: Great book! The beginning is exciting, the subsequent development trend is also good, and the description of the protagonist is also very good After reading for a while: This is not the routine of writing fantasy novels in the past. The people around me are those who like to pretend to be pigs and eat tigers 😥, and slowly I feel that the following plot is not interesting anymore.

After it was put on the shelves... In one sentence, I am a historian, and this is history

Three major poisonous points 1. Buying and selling lifespan, although the conditions set by the author are unreasonable, if lifespan can be bought and sold, the consequences will be disastrous; 2. Suppressing the growth of the protagonist, forcibly binding the black snake is annoying, deliberately slowing down the pace and increasing the difficulty. The protagonist gradually becomes a waste with low talent and requires a lot of resources, and the fun point disappears; 3. The amazing beginning, the plot of crotch pulling, gradually degenerates into a cliché map plot, like a patchwork of several Tomato novels, nondescript.

Maybe I didn't look at it carefully. Isn't it the lifespan of a pill and its strength increases with each passing day? Why didn't I see any signs of strength later?

This book was well written before it was put on the shelves. You can take a look at it. I suggest you delete the book and run away when you see "Advancing to the Immortal Realm through the Teleportation Formation Under the Palace" here! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Of course, if new readers who are new to the Internet can continue reading, it is also beneficial to eat more poison 🙂

Are you really not going to fix such a big bug? In the alchemy competition, didn't the protagonist assume someone else's identity? Why did the people in Windy City know that the person who made the alchemy was actually the protagonist? Of course, if you patch it later, just pretend I didn't tell you. It's really uncomfortable to see such a big bug 😰

The writing is good, but it's a pity that the protagonist turned into a greedy and cheap villain in the later stage for resources, and could not escape the fate of cultivating immortal novels.

Do you like deleting so much? Can you delete so many bad reviews?

It's too greasy, and I always do what I did in my previous life. Being rich and rich is better than being an internet celebrity. A martial arts fighting story was written for the main character, who is a greasy middle-aged man in his forties and plays petty tricks all day long. The author must be playing tricks on himself. The confrontation between the good and the bad factions is all about shameful and underhanded tactics. Can't write a little about a character who is upright and proud

Run! Run! All I can say is that he is worthy of being a great master. Really. He started poisoning as soon as he put it on the shelves. If you don't know how to write about conspiracy and calculation, don't write about it. It's purely abstract. Did you agree with the studio to just write the beginning? It's about to be put on the shelves and someone will be replaced. I still have the nerve to lick my face and say that I cried while writing it.

The protagonist really goes wherever he goes. The plot is somewhat similar to what we have seen so far. In the new map, he becomes a teacher and becomes a enemy and runs away. In the new map, he becomes a teacher and becomes a enemy and runs away.

Ever since I got Snake, the entire novel has been poisonous, a mindless and abusive protagonist, and then all kinds of delays have slowed down the progress. It has lost all the feeling of a cool novel, and I can basically give it up.

I feel like I changed the title of the book because someone else wrote it. At first I thought it was fairy grass, but the more I read it, the more stupid I became. The setting of adding enemies inexplicably is really stupid.

I want to ask if you have been ghostwriting since you fell out with the Huang family? Rapid decline in quality

It's really a waste of talents. This so-called master charges a fee as soon as he arrives, and the whole process of palace fighting and tricks is so vomiting that it makes people vomit. It is better than a third-level author who can only watch the plot. Although the writing is not good.

Fortunately, I abandoned it early. In the early stage, working as a catcher in Xiafeng Town was the best place to watch. There were fireworks and silent development, so it was still very attractive. What follows becomes more and more rubbish, and what follows is a pure waste of readers' time.

The free chapter is carefully written, but the paid chapter is more rough.

This book was well written in the first few dozen chapters, but since it was put on the shelves, the plot has gradually fallen into a cliché. If newbies see this post, I suggest you order ten chapters and read ten chapters, so as not to regret it after reading the whole book at the beginning. Oh yes, I am the one who regrets it🙂

The plot changed dramatically as soon as this book was released. Before it was put on the shelves, the overall plot was funny, rigorous, and the IQ was online. As soon as it was put on the shelves, it was forcibly reduced in intelligence. It was obvious that it could survive, but it jumped out. The overall curve was that it beat the young and the old. When it was concentrating, it was chased and beaten by the foundation building, and when it was building the foundation, it was chased and beaten by the golden elixir. It is suspected that the shooter has been changed.

I specially created a plot to persuade people to quit when I put it on the shelves. There were too many flaws in that plot. Although I couldn't stand it, I couldn't help but comment on it. First of all, when the Huang family couldn't afford to offend the sect elder, why should the daughter of a loser in the fight for the head of the family let the elder's son listen? Her words were so unpleasant that no one in the Huang family cared about her, and she was able to bring her to the protagonist. The elder's son had no protection around him, and a guard was a weakling. He himself had no protection and was killed by a woman. In addition, the protagonist's previous settings were very... When Chu Qing hit the door in front of him, he was doing it in a friendly manner but behind the scenes, now he kills the guards directly in public, which is not consistent with the character he revealed earlier. This plot is obviously to forcefully create conflicts and change the map for the protagonist, and the author still insists on writing about this woman's plan. Being too deep can damage the relationship between the protagonist and the Huang family no matter what. This part is just too funny. I know the protagonist is asked to change the map, but this method is too blunt. Even if you write that after the protagonist's elders die, the Huang family fights with other families and the protagonist is involved, so leaving is better than this.

After reading the first three chapters, the author vividly describes the sophistication of people and the IQ of the supporting characters. What a great book! Let me sigh, there are so many weird things in the comments, don't you have any social experience? Or is it simply due to IQ and tax debt...

This book is said to be fluently written, so why are there so few reviews? Could it be because there is no plot of bitterness and deep hatred...

The first novel about catching up with an eunuch, fuck

Some personal opinions: The protagonist has the longevity fruit and is the only one in the sealed world whose cultivation of immortality is not affected. It can be said that he can quickly cultivate to the point of establishing foundation and become the first person. But the author arranged for the protagonist to leave the sealed world early and go to the outside world, and then live by selling his lifespan, working as a Danu and pushing the realm. To advance to the foundation building level, he had to take a lot of pills! In the end, the seal world was broken by a fight between two Nascent Souls, and the co-author did nothing!