The Old Immortal of the Stars, the Dharma Controls the Heavens

It's not bad at the beginning, and the writing is okay, but the writing gets messier and messier. He's basically invincible after he comes out of the escort agency. He doesn't know what the protagonist's purpose is, which makes people confused. There is too little introduction to the system. At least you have to tell in advance what martial arts you have learned through the system. Don't always say that this is the martial arts you exchanged before, which is confusing. What's wonderful, not to mention that some martial arts are in unpopular novels and are not introduced; there are too many narrations and the plot is too slow. There is still a lot of content that has not been written in the copy of Swordsman with more than a hundred chapters. This is the biggest shortcoming. If you want to make money, it will be difficult if you don't change this. There is not much content after one chapter. Which reader will give you a monthly recommendation?

If the protagonist hadn't had an affair with his master's wife and knocked Yue Buqun off a cliff, causing him to become paralyzed, he wouldn't be worthy of being called Ding Chunqiu.

Actually, the plug-in martial arts in Jin Yong's novels have big flaws. It's not a modifier after all. Take the famous Beiming Divine Skill as an example: Xu Zhu's Beiming internal strength could not defeat Ding Chunqiu for nearly 300 years, while Qiao Feng's Dragon Subduing internal strength failed to defeat his opponent in less than 30 years. There are two understandings: 1. 10 Points of Beiming's internal strength is not as good as 1 point of Jianglong's internal strength. The second understanding is that Beiming Shengong works like a battery. It cannot be discharged when it is fully charged. Based on the original work, I personally think the second one is correct. Similarly, Duan Yu's 6-selling Divine Sword is equivalent to a power output device. Each attack requires a lot of energy, which is why others can't practice it. But if you understand it this way, Qiao Feng's combat effectiveness is not easy to understand. But it can also be explained. It can be understood as similar to the principle of a power amplifier. In a normal battle between two people, everyone uses class A power output. Some powerful people or martial arts can change the output mode to class ab, but when Qiao Feng fights with others, he uses class b power output. The efficiency of converting internal force into attack power is several times that of Class A! When turning on the speaker mode, he can even use class d or class t power output, and the efficiency is infinitely close to 100%. Remarks: class a, ab, b, d, t are the physical working types of transistor amplifiers. They are not made up. If you don't understand, you can take a look. If you understand it this way, it can be explained. In Jin Yong's novel "The Heaven Slaying the Dragon" and the previous eras, the fighting method is: internal force - converter - attack power. The function of martial arts is actually a converter, and the function of the body is an internal force storage. Everyone has different talents, and the upper limit of internal strength determines the upper limit of martial arts. Kung Fu determines the upper limit of attack power. For example, Zhang Wuji's 9-Sheep Divine Skill, a plug-in method, can be understood as a charger (leaving aside other secondary functions), directly turning the human body's internal power battery into an internal power transformer! It can be said to be an absolute plug-in. Others are like batteries. When the power is exhausted, it must take time, whether it is cultivation, absorbing the spiritual energy of heaven and earth, or the essence of the sun and the moon, so that it can be slowly recharged. But 9 Yang is different. It is directly equivalent to carrying two cables with you and replenishing them as needed. But starting from Swordsman, the role of internal force is not so obvious. You see, Yang Guo and Feng Qingyang both use the Dugu Nine Swords in the same way. But the routes are completely different. Regardless of who uses it correctly, Yang Guo clearly beats Feng Qingyang and Linghu Chong in terms of combat effectiveness. But in Swordsman, Zuo Lengchan's Ice Qi, or Yue Buqun's Zixia Magic, this orthodox method of using internal energy has become less acceptable to everyone. Instead, it feels even worse than the Sunflower Book of Evil-Repelling Sword Techniques. Even Ren Woxing's heart-absorbing technique is severely limited in its effect. If you want to suck me, you have to be strong enough to be sucked! If you don't have the inner strength, just suck some wool. And it is basically impossible to find a martial arts function that is similar to the internal power-attack power conversion in the era before Yitian Slaying the Dragon. Whether it is the evil-proof swordsmanship, the Sunflower Book, the Dugu Nine Swords, or the various swordsmanship of the Five Mountains, including Tian Boguang's sharp knife, they are all pure attack output. The role of internal force can only be used to maintain strength and physical strength, and it is basically irrelevant to combat effectiveness. This is also the source of the tragedy of the Huashan Sect! For example, if a disciple enters Huashan to learn martial arts at the age of 15, according to the original book, Jian Zong is stronger than Qi Zong in the first 20 years, and Qi Zong will gradually become stronger than Jian Zong in the next 20 years. . He was already over 50 when he became a powerful airbender! I also want to worship a woolly airbender! This is probably the tragedy of the fault in the practice. . . . The internal force-converter mode martial arts of the previous era can no longer be found in the world. It is no wonder that the world has been swept away by martial arts such as the Dugu Nine Swords, the Sunflower Book, and the Evil-Repelling Sword Manual. Even the Qi Zong Yue Buqun himself doubted the legitimacy of the Qi Zong, and instead pursued the same evil-fighting sword technique as the Jian Zong. He himself betrayed his ideals, so why should he blame Linghu Chong for betraying him in advance? Anyone who has read the original work knows that Linghu Chong's talent for using martial arts similar to that of Jian Zong is really outstanding, just like a genius in mathematics, physics and chemistry but you just ask him to study liberal arts. On the contrary, Zuo Lengchan is the most talented person in the entire Swordsman. He can train those miscellaneous martial arts of the Songshan Sect to that level. He is also the only person in the original work who does not actively pursue evil-fighting sword skills. Later, when I practiced warding off evil spirits, I was just blind and had no other choice. It can be seen that Zuo Lengchan understands that internal strength + converter is the most reasonable way to improve combat effectiveness. This can be seen from his practice of ice energy. He has been looking for a technique that can transform internal energy into combat power, but unfortunately he has not found it, so he can only use the ice energy as a combat auxiliary. . . . .

Few martial arts heroes can compare to Ding Chunqiu's level of narcissism.

I think I need to leave for a few days; As an old bookworm, I am not qualified. The author's skills are too profound and my vitality is seriously damaged. When I see this book now, I think about calligraphy and brushes. It's not that I don't like watching it; the main thing is that I don't want to watch it with the sound of sirens in my head! Next time you drive, please don't hit anyone when you see someone;

I thought it was the old man from Xingxu in the Eight Parts of Demi- Dragons 🙂

To be honest, the opening chapter of Xiaoao made me vomit, why not change the map?

If you can't raise the upper limit, lower the lower limit.

You have written so many chapters about Yue Lingshan. Even if she is the protagonist, she is a dog licker. I have only one request: never give away a girl, and don't take advantage of others if you have more girls.

The protagonist becomes more and more perverted as she writes, and starts flirting with Futa. She smells Dongfang Bubai's clothes and touches Dongfang Bubai's breasts.

My suggestion is to hire 8 beggars to carry the sedan chair and sing Lotus Falling while carrying it. When it comes to praising people, you still have to look at the beggars. When it's dry, change the batch.

Personal feeling. The Heaven-Mending Tribulation and the Black Heaven Book, I feel a little overwhelmed after these things appear! The painting style was too different, giving him a strong sense of dissonance.

The previous chapters were very interesting, with a good combination of boasting and contrasting cuteness. However, after entering the Fuwei Escort Agency, the style suddenly changed drastically, and the strength of the protagonist and Yue Lingshan was inexplicably enhanced through the "poison of the human heart".                                                                                                                 She has to be unclear with Mrs. Wang for no reason. The key is that nothing happened, so several plots were used to set up the plot in advance (Songshan's undercover agent secretly threatened). I boldly predict that the book will be completely divided because of this plot point

There is too much water injection, one chapter has two to three thousand words, only two lines of dialogue, and the rest is all nonsense and water injection. One copy has to run to 1 million words. The money you spend to watch one copy can buy a movie ticket. Who can bear it?

😜Every time I see someone washing Linghu's face, I want to laugh. You are just a piece of shit who was eaten alive by the black and white bears. Hero Linghu has no time to deal with you.

As I said before, it is really interesting. It allowed me to see Swordsman from another perspective. The protagonist, Goldfinger, is also quite interesting, but the plot after entering the escort agency is really hard to describe. I have to get myself the buff of a good wife and a beautiful woman, and I sleep with that madam. I feel so sick.

Having such a golden finger but playing house in the so-called martial arts world is really begging for a golden rice bowl. Even if he grew up in Huashan, it doesn't mean he can't communicate with the outside world. It doesn't mean that the protagonist's body is a child's and his brain is also a child. In the early stage, you pretend to be a child prodigy or fool other children. When you are older, you can copy public magic tricks and join the media to create your own image and have magical powers. In the middle stage, the upper and lower levels work together to engage in religion. In the later stage, you learn from great teachers and shape yourself into the only incarnation of Jesus who is set to descend from heaven. In the later stage, the world is yours and you make a show of returning to heaven. God, I am one and you are heaven. There are only a few people in Wulin, and there are not as many people as any county in Wulin combined. And how many people care about martial arts "underworld" matters?

At first I thought it was a fun book, but suddenly it turned into a Machiavellian book, with all kinds of analysis. The feeling of neither going up nor down, feeling both good and unhappy. Collect it first, then look at it more and see if you can see it.

The author has no idea what kind of poison people have, and creates a debuff out of nowhere. The subsequent development of the plot is disappointing, and the writing is boring. It is obviously quite interesting according to the previous writing method.

Which father would name his son Ding Chunqiu?

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Whether it's good or not is another matter. This is a novel written with care, not a mere anecdote. It's worth reading.

It's quite good-looking. I said that when I read the original version of "Swordsman", I felt that something was wrong with the whole "Swordsman". But if I think about it from a political perspective, it suddenly felt right.

The artistic content of this chapter tonight is a bit high! 👏

If it can be written at this level, it will at least be a good martial arts product. It would be better if the author could be less clumsy. The recent chapters are really good. It is really not easy to find a comfortable martial arts book to read. The student party does not have much money, but if the author can ensure that it is written at this level, I will definitely support it✊✊✊

One point is that everyone's title must be long. Linghu Chong must be "Elder Brother Linghu Chong" Yue Lingshan must be "Junior Sister Yue Lingshan" This way, you can add three more words, right? It's up to you to do this. Listening to a book can be very strange and uncomfortable.

I haven't read it yet. Are you writing about the heavens? I looked at the table of contents and am you still smiling after 800,000 words?

The first part was pretty good, but the later part became more and more rubbish.

Good book, very interesting, but unfortunately slow-paced. There are very few slow-paced books popular at the beginning.

Well written! It would be better if there were less mental activities. Come on, author.