Naruto: This Sasuke Has a Narration

🐮Cup! A rare and passionate Naruto fanfic, Sasuke's writing is so exciting! Similar novels: cookie-cutter conspiracy theories, powerful BT gold-finger routines, super shadows that bully the natives at every turn... But they are not as good as the ideological progress and growth of the protagonist, even if they follow the original main line of the anime, they will be a mess In my opinion, no matter how powerful the super power system is, it is just a piece of gravel in front of the great power of the mind, not even half a point!

This book is really good-looking, and the plot is smooth and interesting. I have also read many Naruto-related novels (just not at Qidian). This book is the first paid novel I followed at Qidian. I have also read other types of Naruto novels, but they are all too OOC and I can't accept many of them. This is the only one I can accept at the moment, so I must finish it. I am really looking forward to the follow-up. This book is really good. He is not like the protagonists in other Naruto novels. He feels that he is very powerful. He exudes in his bones that I am very powerful, and you are just rubbish and gesticulating. I feel that the best thing about this book is that the protagonist does not feel that he is superior. He works hard and recognizes the efforts of others. There is no excessive deification of the protagonist, and the original protagonist is not always in the dark. The descriptions of Naruto, Sakura, and other original characters are quite good. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up. 🌹🌹🌹

The work is not bad, it can be regarded as fodder, the description angle is novel, and if it is not out of touch, it can stand out In addition, the story tends to be dull in the early stage, the character portrayal is not bad, there are not many awkward jokes about crotch lifting Finally, I hope that the period of the original work's defection can be written before it is put on the shelves, it is very suitable for the original plot

It seems that Konoha's start is on the right track... Although I'm tired of seeing Konoha's bad start, at least the protagonist's position is roughly consistent with the main characters, that is, the Hokage Village, and it can also meet the needs of readers. In other villages, it's understandable that you can't kill the main character at the beginning, but you still have to show off the main character all day long, hinder the protagonist in various ways, abuse the protagonist... After reading several books of this kind, it will really make people angry.

After watching this, even though I didn't cook Uchiha before, the filter still felt shattered.

Damn, that's so cool, 3D version of Naruto😭

After reading the first 70 chapters, I feel like Sasuke is not going to school but cultivating immortality. Cultivate one's moral character: learn and practice in the most natural way of life. Refining the Heart in the Red Dust: Be kind to others, miss your loved ones, and understand the suffering of the people. Understand magical powers and understand the world: With my unique talents and plug-ins, and through study and observation, I can find deeper skills and knowledge. Treat everything like a spectator, being in it but staying out of it, a banished immortal who has descended to earth to experience.

The kaleidoscope's skills will produce different abilities according to the abilities that the awakened person is good at. What kind of kaleidoscope skills will this almighty Sasuke have?

It seems a bit strange, why does Sasuke want to help Konoha change for the better? Isn't Sasuke's dream about resurrection and revenge? Seeing Sasuke talking about the roots without any psychological fluctuations, and at this time still talking to Kabuto about some big principles, I feel a little speechless. It feels like the author made Sasuke like an emotionless robot in order to write an emotionally stable Sasuke.

It's too long-winded. It was already long-winded before, but it's even more serious after the second update. I want to write about Reincarnation in the Dirty Land and wish I had to expand on each character's feelings. It's off the mark.

The interpersonal relationships are written very bluntly, especially the part about Naruto and Sasuke. They really shouldn't be playing together. They are just the product of Asura and Indra's chakra. There is no element of distraction at all. In short, the writing is quite awkward.

It's okay (*≧∪≦)👌🏻, Sasuke won't be in such pain with the help of the system, come on! About Itachi: Itachi did indeed make a mistake. This cannot be refuted, nor can we forgive him on behalf of the dead tribesmen. However, in this article, Sasuke wants to resurrect the tribesmen. It depends on how the resurrected tribesmen view this matter! (PS: I definitely object to the reality, but in Naruto's fucked-up world, no ninja has clean hands, and cannibalism is the main theme of that world) (Nagato and Obito can wash it, but why Itachi can't, it depends on how you write it) Itachi was a rebellious ninja at the age of 13. Calculated, we are in the first and second grade of junior high school. Alas, even in the war years, his personality is completely immature. To be honest, his parents did not guide their children well. (Going to the battlefield at the age of 4 and killing the first person, I really...) About those old climbers in Konoha 1. Danzo will definitely die, no doubt There is nothing to say 2. The third generation Good politicians, (Orochimaru is also good at taking action) (He was definitely one of the promoters of the Uchiha genocide.) He did nothing, but he was so hateful because he did nothing. He had long known that Uchiha wanted to rebel, but the answer he gave was to wait, wait, and he would give a solution. Everyone would die. He had a stupid plan! (He just strengthened the monitoring of Uchiha, waiting for them to be unable to bear it any longer. Besides, it is indeed an evil Uchiha, your mother's) He doesn't have to do anything, Danzo will take action, he just needs to sit on the high platform. Doesn't he know what's going on with Danzo? Is he really stupid? I don't believe it anyway. Itachi definitely has the element of being deceived by the higher-ups. (You have the Hokage's thinking at the age of 7? It makes other people laugh to death when they hear it. Your Hokage level is the same as that of a 7-year-old child. I don't know, I thought you were a Naruto fan. Isn't this flattering to Itachi.) How fucking disgusting. The so-called "Will of Fire" allowed two minors to burn and the hero who founded the village to burn? Let Hinata burn voluntarily? Why don't the roots burn? Why didn't I burn you Whether it was intentional or a waste, choose for yourself! 3. Being too old to die is a thief Advisor Lao Teng, get offline as soon as possible About Konoha and the country Our little Sasuke cannot become the defender of the old system! If you work hard and work overtime every day (that's right, it's the Seventh Generation of Diss on a Boruto) As for a big company leader, if you work hard and work overtime every day, then we will suspect that the system is not good or your ability is not good enough. And there is Hinata's caged bird (this is the cage song) (Bamboo cage, bamboo cage, when, when will it come out, the crane and the turtle slipped, who is facing you from behind?) It's so funny, the scapegoat's child is still the scapegoat, nothing has changed. (Ningji died in vain) In the country, the daimyo are more troublesome. The trouble is not the daimyo, but the ruling class of the entire world, which must be dealt with properly. The ninja world is indeed quite rubbish, and the ninja village is essentially a mercenary group. It would be difficult to deal with it without changing the professional attribute of ninja. Alas (┳◇┳), if you do something wrong, you do something wrong. People will always pay the price for it. (Little Sasuke is a good boy, he shouldn't have to suffer so much) (As for Itachi, alas, the child who went astray, if you want to kill the author, sharpen the knife, and don't want him to suffer too much) (For the old ones, it is recommended that the knife be blunted) Finally, let me say one more thing, Konoha garbage (੭ •_•)🚮, Ninja world garbage (੭ •_•)🚮

Everyone doesn't like the system with emotions. This is a poisonous point. I think we can change the settings and replace the system with time travellers. The time travelers cross over and become cats and only have spiritual bodies. They can only obtain bodies by helping Sasuke grow and take revenge. Isn't this better than the system?

I feel like your book is better written than Sasuke's love for visiting forums. That book says it's Sasuke, but it's not Sasuke at all.

It's not that it doesn't look good, I just feel like the title is not very accurate. It is said to be a narration, but in fact it is more like the so-called detection technique and other intelligence gathering types Maybe we can consider changing the narration to Intelligence Sasuke

I just want to ask if you are still involved with Naruto and don't you want to take revenge?

This operation... My crotch is rotten before the climax of the plot, psychedelic 😅

Now the book can't live without killing Itachi, hey

I'm chasing him, I hope there won't be a female protagonist

After all, if it's not written out, there are still expectations. If it's written out and it's unsatisfactory, it'll be a waste.

It's well written, but the pace is too slow. I feel better after reading it in one sitting. Reading it every day feels like squeezing out toothpaste.

I can accept the development of the plot, but it is just a lot of nonsense, endlessly repeating the nonsense that has been said ten thousand times, the plot advances as slowly as a cricket, and it is obviously a bad ending, but it still claims that it is not bad.

The author wants to give everything, and Sasuke becomes omniscient and omnipotent, which makes people panic. He said that Jiraiya should go to jail, but the Third Generation, Danzo, and Konoha advisors didn't respond? Too arrogant.

The narration system cannot be simply used as a reason for the protagonist to be omniscient and omnipotent. It is recommended to describe in more detail the unique interactions that are triggered after the protagonist comes into contact with certain people or objects, or to complain or ridicule. Xiaobai is indeed very naive. The description of the cat character is very shallow, with no sense of three-dimensionality, and no sense of participation in the story. Why not make it a poisonous cat with a strong subjective consciousness? In addition, instead of describing concepts, thoughts and prospects in large paragraphs, attention should also be paid to details and the characterization of specific things. The revenge of a clan, the liquidation of villains, the replacement of the old with the new, order and fairness, and the prospect of peace can really make people excited. The premise is that there is something to say, and specific people can use specific methods to implement it at a specific time and place.

Based on the comics, in fact, what Itachi can change cannot change the dissatisfied clan members cannot change the position of the higher-ups (not to mention anything else, what the clan could do at that time. Being able to solve Danzo after the protagonist grows up does not necessarily mean that the Uchiha clan has the ability to fight one against four (four ninja clans) at that time). And the problem lies here, Uchiha Fugaku played a huge negative role in the growth of his eldest son.

Where will Uchiha go after his resurrection? You can't stay in Konoha, right?

First of all, the problem is always the top management of Konoha, not one or two people. The attitude towards rule and power is decided, as long as Uchiha does not give up the idea of ​​"seizing power in Konoha by force", even if the third generation expresses opposition, it is impossible. The third generation is not like the second generation and the first generation who can arbitrarily dominate the ninja clan. (I think it doesn't matter whether you kill Itachi or not, because Itachi himself gave up saving the clan. If you don't do it, this is the fate and reputation of the Uchiha clan. As for Sasuke... The reason why Sasuke survived back then is that he did not have the ability to become a threat in the short term.)

It's hard to find the ability to read it. Come on, author.

I think the protagonist should think about that conflict between Itachi and his tribe (in my opinion, it was just Fugaku and the tribesmen who directly convicted him without any evidence (to be honest, Sasuke's ability may not have been available to the tribe at the time)) As for the Will of Fire? Itachi may not believe it, but in fact, at that time, the Uchiha clan only had one guard unit. (Based on the attitudes of Shisui and Itachi at that time, they could only rely on the masked man)

I voted for recommendation, come on author