Divers Under the High Wall

One person, one dog and one motorcycle

To be honest. Good. At least it looks good now. You could say it's a cliche story about an amnesiac hero who is seriously ill and wants to stay alive but inadvertently saves the world (the latter part is my guess, not necessarily correct), but I have to say it's well written, and if it can be made into an anime, it can be regarded as a qualified passionate anime. A hero with amnesia, a dilapidated motorcycle, a bad good doctor with a gloomy personality and inner pain, a timid but independent and strong tavern owner, a funny, ridiculous, and lucky supporting minion, a Machiavellian who is ambitious but keeps his promises and has great ideals, and a bloody An ordinary character with flesh, a bold, kind-hearted, sin-bearing, conscience-filled mutant who is full of hatred, and selflessly helps the protagonist. The first heavyweight opponent is full of steampunk, iron-blooded, lonely but foolish loyalty. In short, it fits the elements of a hot-blooded series. Come on, author, if you can write a complete book with the current quality, I believe someone will adapt it into an animation. What kind of reincarnation anime is not inferior to Little Days? No big deal, just a recommendation vote. Here you go. 😊

Brother, this is what you eat. The text is very graphic, and the metaphors are smooth and innovative.

Thanks for pointing out the author's typos. Thank you everyone. I feel like an illiterate. It has been revised. I have a complete outline and I don't know how to be a eunuch.

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Smooth and comfortable, a rare thing to see. Even now, Internet articles are all based on memes, and each joke is a kind of article. It has no memes and is not popular.

Have you ever considered moving the Age of Discovery into space? Human beings used the power of science and magic to build floating ships, breaking away from the shackles of gravity and sailing to the star sea. Recommended animated movie "Xingyin Island"! That's the subject. After sailing to the star sea, humans encountered other intelligent races: elves and orcs. Many humans have also transformed into dwarves and halflings due to their long-term reproduction in an environment different from the earth. When humans sailed among the stars, they discovered that the source of magic power comes from the "star power" emitted by the stars. And some people awakened some "superpowers" after sailing among the stars for a long time and bathing in star power. High-concentration star power will solidify into star stones. This material has a wide range of uses: 1. Star stones with low purity are generally used to power magic instruments. 2. High-purity star stones will be used to make the core of magic instruments. The mage draws a magic circle to constrain the flow of star power in the magic circle. Different flow methods of star power will produce different effects. The mage can interfere with the flow of star power to a certain extent through his own mental power and thus affect the effect of the spell. This is the principle of magic. After the great development of human science and technology, mages have become less popular. After all, learning magic requires magic affinity. If you don't have magic talent, you won't be able to mobilize star power to perform magic. But in some fields, the role of mages is still irreplaceable. Technology doesn't have many barriers to learning. As long as your brain is not too stupid, you can learn a little bit. After humans set foot on the Star Sea, they found that their physical bodies were very fragile in the harsh environment of the Star Sea. Mages and technicians teamed up to develop "armor" powered by star stones to enhance the human body. The armor needs to follow the human body to complete various complex movements, so it is not operated through a mechanical structure. The mechanical results cannot complete such fine operations, so people want to control the armor through star power. After all, star power can achieve various complex effects through magic, and it is not a big problem to use it to transmit signals to operate the armor. The point is that ordinary people can barely influence Star Power. But a long time ago, mages discovered that after implanting star stones into the human body so that the star stones are in direct contact with flesh and blood, the person's mental activities can affect the star power activities in the star stones (this influence is two-way). Some mages have enhanced their spellcasting ability by implanting star stones. This move can indeed enhance the magician's spellcasting ability, but it will also bring huge mental pressure (after all, the influence of star stones and spirit is two-way), and many mages have burned out their brains and become idiots. Inspired by this, the technician worked with the mage to install a reading array on the armor that could read the changes in the star power in the star stone, so that the driver could roughly drive the armor through his mind. With the help of some uncomplicated mechanical structures, humans were finally able to drive the armor. But this also brings problems. If you want to control the armor flexibly and accurately, you can't do it with just one or two reading arrays. The action signal provided by each star stone node implanted in the body is limited, so if you want to control the armor accurately, you need to install multiple reading arrays, and the driver also needs to implant multiple star stones. But just implanting a star stone is already a burden on people's spirit. When driving armor, you have to operate it by affecting the star stone, which puts even greater pressure on the spirit. Implanting one star stone is already the limit for ordinary people. Those who can implant multiple star stones are all talented people who are different from ordinary people. There are many pilots who cannot bear the huge mental burden in fierce battles and burn out their brains. Star stones are usually implanted along the spine from top to bottom. The armor is roughly divided into the following levels: 1. Skeleton level: Like a skeleton, it can only support the limbs and trunk of the human body, improving strength to a certain extent. Implanting a star stone is enough to operate. 2. Warrior level: fully armored, looks like an ancient armored warrior, can barely operate with a star stone implanted. 3. Knight level: Medium armor, shaped like a giant ancient knight, with 2 star stones implanted for basic operations. 4. Titan level: Large armor, too much mental pressure when driving, unable to be driven by one person, usually driven by two people. 5. Titan class: Giant armor, complex operating system, requires at least 3 people to drive, and the driver is responsible for different systems. 6. Golem class: The output is extremely high, and the relative mental pressure is also extremely high. In order to share the mental pressure, the Golem class will be equipped with a "buffer": that is, ordinary people will be connected to share the mental pressure, while the driver can concentrate on operating the armor. The huge mental pressure will burn out the "buffer"'s brain in a short period of time. In order to continue fighting, the "buffer" will be replaced batch by batch. Some navigators also discovered "star streams": star forces gathering among the stars, just like ocean currents in the earth's oceans. Relying on star currents, the speed of the floating ship will be greatly increased. There are even madmen who are not satisfied with driving on the surface of the star stream. They drive floating ships to dive into the star stream to obtain faster speeds. But this approach is no different from risking one's life. Although diving into the star stream can achieve extremely fast speeds, the strong turbulence deep in the star stream can easily tear the hull apart; if it encounters turbulence, the ship will be taken to a random star field; there are also giant void creatures inhabiting the deep star stream. If they have an appetite for floating ships, they are basically doomed. While exploring the Star Sea, people formed different organizations. Among them, the ones with greater influence are: Navigation Association: Anyone who makes a living among the stars is basically a member of the Navigation Association. The association has affiliated organizations such as the Sailors Association, the Navigators Association, the Captains Association, the Gunners Association, the Maritime Traders Association, the Lighthouse Association, etc. Basically, wherever there is an airport, there will be a sailing association. Members can obtain various information here: recruitment, rewards, current affairs, commodity prices, etc.; They can rent the association's rooms at low prices; they can entrust the association to buy and sell commodities, etc. These books cover all aspects of seafarers' lives. The logo is a sail and an anchor The most important one is the Lighthouse Association. The lighthouse uses star stones as fuel to release special light to point the direction of the sailing floating ship so that it will not get lost. Lighthouses are usually manned by 1 to 5 keepers, equipped with small boats and various supplies. In addition to the daily maintenance of the lighthouse operation, when receiving a distress signal from a ship in distress, the tower keeper will also sail to the rescue and guide the ship in distress to the lighthouse. Ships can use the supplies stored in the lighthouse for repairs, but they must not use up all the supplies they consume the next time they pass by. Otherwise, they will be blacklisted and notified by the association. At that time, anyone who runs a boat will despise him as a human being and refuse to deal with him. They will be removed from the blacklist only after they have replenished supplies and paid fines. In remote star areas that deviate from the main waterways, there are many unmanned lighthouses, which also store supplies. If an unlucky person in distress is lucky enough to find an unmanned lighthouse and use the supplies to escape, no matter how far the lighthouse is from the port where he set sail, he will sail here again to provide supplies. I hope the next unlucky person in danger can encounter the lighthouse and use the supplies inside to escape. Royal Society: A scientific and magic research and teaching institution funded by the royal family. Among them are masters in various fields. Their research results have greatly promoted the development of human civilization. The Society is also an educational institution. After strict selection, geniuses from all over the empire will enter the Royal Society to study. However, even the funds approved by the royal family are barely used for the research of the masters, and there is no extra funds for education. Therefore, if you want to study in the Royal Society, you must not only be a genius, but also have money. After all, how can the knowledge taught by the masters be cheap? The Royal Society has multiple branches: the Royal Scientific and Technical Society, the Royal Magical Society, the Royal Society of Medicine, the Royal Society of Biology, etc., And will add or remove branches when necessary. The Royal Society has branches in every major city in the Empire, with its headquarters on Earth. The Royal Society does not exclude cooperation with outside parties, but the cooperation standards are extremely demanding. The logo is a crown and a book Royal Bank: a bank funded by the government and the royal family. The logo is a crown and gold coins Pirate Association: Yes, pirates also have organizations. You know, pirates, people on the fringes of society who are yelled at by everyone, need to join a group to keep warm. It is not difficult to understand that pirates will also have their own organizations. The Pirates Association is basically a degraded sailing association, but in some aspects it has special features due to the special status of its members: 1. The location of the Pirates Association is generally very secretive. After all, most pirates carry bounties on their backs. If the location of the association is not secretive enough, the risk of being blamed is greatly increased. The headquarters of the Pirate Association is said to be located in a floating ship cemetery deep in a certain star stream. It is impossible to reach it without the guidance of a sea chart. 2. Use secret words extensively. The logo is the man-eating shark Black Gold Trading Company: A chamber of commerce that specializes in illegal business. Most of the pirates' stolen goods are entrusted to the Black Gold Trading Company. Although the Black Gold Trading Company's commission is high, the most important thing is safety. It is said that behind the success of the Black Gold Trading Company, there is the secret support of the empire, the church, the royal family, and the navigation association. The logo is a black gold coin United Society: With the development of human society, the demand for scientific and technical talents in all walks of life is increasing, but the number of talents is far from enough. Either you are looking for technical talents yourself, but when you, as a boss, come to your door, you will find that most of the so-called technical talents are not worthy of the name, and the knowledge they possess is incomplete and cannot be put into production immediately. Or you can only turn to the Royal Society for help. The Royal Society looks down on ordinary corporate organizations, and it is not that difficult to cooperate with them. However, the demand for technical magic talents by various business organizations does exist. In this dilemma, various business organizations have united to establish their own society "United Society" to cultivate their own technical magic talents. The level of the United Society is not as high as that of the Royal Society, but it is more valuable because of its large quantity. The United Society has very low standards for recruiting students, and tuition fees are also very low. For some poor students, there is no tuition fee. You only need to sign an employment contract called a "sale contract" with them: you are guaranteed to work in a company designated by the society after graduation and use your own salary to repay the tuition. However, the repayment fees required by this contract may be a large amount of money, so that many people can pay off the money after working for many years. People from the Royal Society laugh at the people from the United Society as "people's sciences", but it has to be said that these "people's sciences" do meet the society's demand for scientific and magic talents to a large extent. Unlike the Royal Society, which only has branches in important cities, the United Society basically covers medium-sized and above towns in the empire. The headquarters of the United Society is located in the industrialized Mars. The logo is a magnifying glass. Church: After humans stepped into the sea of ​​stars, they became more and more aware of their own insignificance and powerlessness. People in urgent need of spiritual comfort naturally found the church, and the power of the church expanded rapidly after humans sailed to the star sea. Human prayers can also affect star power to a certain extent, causing various effects. This technology is called a miracle by the church. Its working principle is different from that of magic. Miracles produce effects by causing the resonance of star power. There are not so many types of miracles compared to magic, but everyone can cause the resonance of star power. However, the magnitude of the resonance of star power caused by most people is too small to trigger miracles. However, the resonance of star power can be superimposed. As long as there are enough people, the weak resonance of star power can trigger huge miracles. But this requires guidance. Star power resonance can not only be superimposed, but also offset. Without the guidance of clergy, even if there are many people praying, most of the star power resonances will cancel each other out and cannot be used to trigger miracles. The church believes that the sea of ​​stars has a soul, and star power is a manifestation of the soul of the sea of ​​stars. Human beings can perform miracles because their own souls resonate with the souls of the sea of ​​stars. The mage believes that star power is just a simple energy that interferes with the spiritual power of living things to a certain extent. The church headquarters is located in the Himalayas of Earth. Countless believers want to worship in the Himalayas. Unfortunately, there are too many people, and most people can only draw lots layer by layer. In the end, believers will gather in the sky of the moon and look at the earth, waiting for the church to draw lots to decide who is eligible to set foot on the Himalayas. After completing the pilgrimage, these lucky people will get a pendant embedded with Himalayan stones to prove their piety. This pendant will most likely be regarded as a family heirloom or even a sacred object enshrined in the pilgrim's local church. Most believers will never be able to draw this lot in their lifetime. All believers will be moved to tears when they set foot on the lunar airport, so this airport is also called the Port of Tears. Because it is too difficult to qualify for a pilgrimage to the Himalayas, most believers turn to the next best thing. When they come to the Port of Tears and look at the Himalayas, their pilgrimage is considered completed. They will get a thumb-sized copper bottle containing lunar soil, proving that they have made a pilgrimage to the moon and look at the earth. The emblem is the eagle in the sky The Imperial Navy: the main military force of the empire The emblem is the wolf pack among the stars The Imperial Police: the imperial security force The emblem is the hound The Imperial Bureau of Investigation: the imperial intelligence agency The emblem is the owl The Royal Shadow Guard: the royal intelligence assassination agency The emblem is the crow The Emperor House Guards: Elite troops directly under the royal family The logo is the negative sun lion Imperial local troops: The military force stationed in the place The logo is the giant bear Humanity expanded rapidly after gaining the ability to travel among the stars. However, with the expansion of power, humans formed different forces to attack each other. After a hundred years of "unification war", the forces from the earth were unified and established the Galactic Empire.

I beg those who have collected it to read it so that the author can be hired to sign a contract. Kowtow.

The end of this first chapter feels a bit long, I hope I can end it when it's done, start a new chapter, and get out of Novice Village 😁

Brother, I recommend your book everywhere, and I just ask you to update it steadily😭 The writing is really strong, and it is the first time I read such a long supporting character recollection and I still read it with gusto (but I don't recommend doing this) I like this writing very much, I wish you a good sale

It feels great, come on 🤓

Come on 😗 It feels good at the beginning

This book is really great, I look forward to the follow-up 😁

I feel like I have to say a few words. It's eighty chapters now. I don't like to write about supporting characters like this. So many words are used to describe supporting characters. This is not like writing about supporting characters. To put it bluntly, it's called indiscriminate. To be honest, I won't go back and watch it again. I can't even remember the scene where the protagonist was. Even if I go back and watch it again, the reader's psychology will be different from the first time. The fresh and exciting feeling has passed. There are only so many words in front of the frame, so what's the point of describing the scene? The protagonist's image is not fully erect, and the background is a mess. If the author is just enjoying himself and pretending that I didn't say it, you will be dead if you want to come up with results. A dispensable content that should be written in the extra chapter is placed at the front of the most important text. Chapter 80's content is about fishermen. It took a long paragraph, and now it takes another big paragraph. Is this the way to write a group portrait? Good group portraits and good descriptions of supporting characters are reflected in the details, rather than not writing the main plot. Creating a sub-plot is like changing the protagonist.

Recommend a "Warhammer" brother game "Iron Kingdom"! I transfer some settings: In a corner of the continent of Caen, we have been sitting in a well and observing the sky for many centuries, and have long forgotten that there are more things outside the territory. West Immoren is our home, and we are proud of the work of our ancestors. Our kingdom was built on the ruins of fragmented feudal states, on the shoulders of warring warlords. Every plant, every tree, every household here has experienced the baptism of blood, massacre, famine, disease, and war. There are also occasional shining moments of political clarity and self-awareness. We built ourselves a shelter and wrote a long—but war-scarred—history. I have fought bloody battles in countless wars, seen the rise and fall of kings, and traveled to every corner of this land. Believe me when I say that we have only the faintest understanding of the powerful dark forces that shape our history from the shadows. Staying in a city guarded by high walls, people can easily fall into complacency and think that the outside world is under their control. It was an illusion, an illusion that was shaking under the weight of recent events, an illusion that might soon be crushed to pieces. Savage lands have always existed, and there are armed forces with powerful power. Some of them are so powerful that even major civilized countries are unwilling to admit them. The people of West Immoren are so desperate for stability that they refuse to acknowledge how fragile civilization actually is. All kingdoms and empires may fall, and the wilderness will rise again to reclaim the abandoned and destroyed cities. I have always had a feeling of impending disaster, and I smell the breath of change. We are entering a new era. Such transitional periods are always marked by the tears of widows and the grief of mothers who have lost their children: the specter of death is always with us, and the fire that consumes everything we know makes way for something new. Even though some different evidence has been discovered recently, we always believe that human beings are always and inevitably making progress. Just four hundred years ago, we emerged from a long and terrifying Dark Age brought about by alien invaders. So I don't think it's that weird to fall back into that state. Twelve centuries ago, when the brutal Orgoth invaded across the western seas and began to conquer the continent of western Immoren, our land was in the midst of an important period of progress and development. Although the original Thousand Cities era was an era of division as its name suggests, the foundations of emerging nations took root in this chaotic situation as powerful rulers unified the nations. No matter what progress we might have made, these dreams evaporated in the face of those black years. We know nothing about where the Orgoth came from, except that it lies far west, across the vast sea of ​​Meredius, far beyond what our ancestors believed to be the end of the world. No one born on the coast of West Immoren has ever attempted such an east-to-west trek; the Meredith Sea remains an abyss that we lack the knowledge and skills to cross. Orgoth landed ashore with an endless procession of longships, and the invading troops surged out and captured one city after another, massacring everyone who dared to resist. The Orgoth discovered that our ancestors were unprepared for such a huge threat. Although there are a few powerful kingdoms, their armies are completely unable to compete with the invading armies. They gain power by forming a pact with the darkness and can perform powerful witchcraft. Perhaps in this way we can understand that these insignificant and independent city-states have long been accustomed to staying in a corner. They simply do not understand the significance of this threat, and they cannot unite to resist these enemies of all mankind. One by one, these city-states were devoured. This difficult process of conquest lasted nearly two hundred years, but Orgoth's conquests never stopped. Orgoth changed everything. They enslaved the entire western Immoren continent with their strange dark magic. With a variety of torture methods, these alien races broke down our will to resist and almost completely ruled this land for four centuries. Even the residents of the wild lands cannot escape their clutches, but they prefer to enslave large cities with large populations, which allows some tribal people living in marginal areas to escape. The Orgoth continually plundered the land to build their blackstone citadels and offer sacrifices to the corrupted beings they served. They conquered the trollkin kriels and occupied the sacred sites of the blackclads. The Orgoth razed these places and defiled them, then built new Orgoth temples on them to capture and imprison thousands of souls. Obviously, people will grieve for war, conflict and oppression, and mourn for those who have died in this era of suffering. But make no mistake: pain is the path to power. Those who finally break free from the shackles of Orgoth are far superior to their former selves. If we had not endured those sufferings, we would not have the victory we have today. After four centuries of occupation, the Rebellion broke out. This was not one battle or a series of wars, but two centuries of brutal resistance and uprisings. The rebels won only minor victories each time, and the Orgoth slaughtered them - but those who survived scattered to plot again. The Great Uprising was a crucible that tested heroes. It eliminated all weak and meek people and created tough, persevering and decisive warriors that had never been seen before. You will find that there is no shortage of people in the world who want to gain fame and defeat Orgoth through the Great Rebellion. Perhaps we have wrapped the truth in too many flattering words. The victory of the Great Rebellion was actually the result of the joint efforts of every god, every secret society, every dark cult, every terrible treaty, and ten generations of brave Immorenians. Finally we have mastered the power of arcane and the mechanika of creativity and invention. We created weapons more powerful than ever before: firearms brought about by alchemical explosives, battle wizards and sorcerers who became warcasters in this era, and majestic mobile combat machines called colossals. With the Orgoth finally driven away, the surviving leaders of the Great Rebellion formed the Council of Ten and signed the Corvis Treaties. This treaty defined the borders of the nations we now call the Iron Kingdoms. Our ancestors believed that they had entered an era that would end all strife, discord, and bloody conquests. We can understand why they had such naive dreams at the end of that dark age; most of them were buried before they could see that human nature had never changed. Without the alliance that comes with fighting a common enemy, our kingdom immediately reverted to its original state of war. We even see war conjuring up lifeless corpses to continue waging war after death, carrying out the orders of the gods they believed in in life. Like breathing, violence is part of what makes us human. Peace is always short-lived. The time for countries to recuperate and strengthen their troops is just to postpone the war before restarting the war with warlike enthusiasm. However, after defeating Orgoth, we have obtained better weapons than before. It would be great if there were fewer people willing to seek answers in the darkness. Iron Nation The so-called "Iron Nation" promoted by the signing of the Treaty of Corvis includes: Khador, Ord, Llael and Cygnar. Centuries later, Cygnar was shaken by the great civil war caused by religion and gave birth to the Protectorate of Menoth, which became the fifth Iron Kingdom. These are the major kingdoms that have emerged in our wars today, but more and more countries around them are starting to get involved. The forces that came from outside the wasteland and occupied the wild lands were also taking advantage of the chaos.

Brother author, do you have a group? If there is no group, I will create one. Are you willing to join?

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It's pretty good. Well, if you wrote this novel for your own pleasure, then think of what I say below as nonsense First of all, the two techniques of inserting and reversing order are not used by novices if they can. If you can't, don't write them. Secondly, well, it's hard to say the specific plot setting. After all, neither the world view nor the extraordinary settings have been developed so far. The fighting is pretty good, but I recommend it. I suggest cutting it down appropriately, writing about daily life or expanding it to a map, etc. Writing about fighting is quite brain-consuming. A novice can write this with passion at the beginning. The more he writes later, the easier it is to run out of inspiration. After playing with it, he becomes an eunuch. So far, this book is quite interesting, and it is quite to my liking. I still hope that the author can finish it, and the details are appropriate.