The Outcast: Laying Low at the Company

It is indeed one of the better one-person fanfics I have seen on Dianjia. I also like this kind of writing style that unites the country. Although the author's IP is unknown, he is not from Shandong~! The only regret is that the protagonist likes to show off Zhang Chulan's intelligence and sophistication so much that it makes Bi Lian a bit stupid. Although Bi Lian is a novice in officialdom, his tact and sophistication are his strengths. It is unreasonable for the protagonist to point him out over and over again and use the same method to pretend to be stupid. This should be played Cheating when you are cheating, being sincere when you should be sincere, using the emotional card when you should use the emotional card, wrapping up in many aspects is Bilian, chewing up the mistakes you have made and grinding them into final products is the source of Bilian's sense of security. Bilian's image is a bit thin... The author who is also responsible for the wisdom of the original work always writes well, don't be too biased~

The author should change the company's attitude and be stronger. The company in the novel is too weak. The fact that the company looks easy to talk to in the comics may just be a matter of looking down on things in the alien world. After all, the company is the spokesperson of the state machine.

I have never understood why among the authors who write about being inferior to one person, none of them write about being stubborn.

It is said that the protagonist seeks strength, but it does not explain the protagonist's specific methods, nor does it describe how to practice. Let's say the protagonist wants power, but he is just the director of the general office and has no power to fight. Let's just say the protagonist is strong. He can compete with the Four Crazy and Barron when he appears. Let's call the protagonist weak. He didn't catch anyone, even if there was a plot of catching one of the four madmen and then escaping on the way. In the end, after more than fifty chapters, the protagonist has no sense of presence or participation. Without the protagonist, the plot advances and goes the same way. The protagonist met the four crazy people and was run away, which had no impact on the overall plot. He met Liu Qing of Valencia and was run away, which had no impact on the overall plot. Comparing with Wang Ye, the point is over, and it has no impact on the overall plot. The confrontation with Lu Ci and Wang Ai was fine without the protagonist Zhang Chulan, and it had no impact. Maybe it's just like the protagonist's suspected ability to see in the Daluo Cave. The problem is that the fan fiction is the same as the original work. What else should I read? It's as light as water.

The comments are deleted so harshly that I don't dare to read them. Let's be a serious Shennong!

More than 200 chapters and more than 40 comments, Real Jill is scary! Don't be so cruel when deleting comments. At least the whole thing looks better if it's almost a hundred.

The success reminded me of Su Haha, the beheaded girl The author should try not to write emotional scenes that would make me jumpy Reasonable, ruthless, and decisive in killing

I was speechless after reading the beginning. I encountered all kinds of evil characters, but I didn't catch him and let him go. Don't tell me why I was afraid of affecting the main plot. In this case, why did you write him out? If you don't know the protagonist's methods, you just brag about it. Zz If you want to read about the art of speaking, just read official novels. To survive under one person is to increase the interest of the story. Have you increased

At the beginning, the protagonist met the villain several times, and then threw a few broken needles to drive the opponent away. Later, while talking about the protagonist having sex, Barron was disturbed. . . . Written with a hammer

I thought it was a book, but it turned out to be a piece of shit I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 9. I wrote a fanfic without even reading the original novel, or did I just watch the anime? At the beginning, it was said that the protagonist was very skilled and was entrusted with important tasks, but in the end he ended up working as a few miscellaneous soldiers. I was speechless.