Uncle Jiu: My Disciple Fang Han Has the Appearance of Becoming an Immortal!

The protagonist's name is Fang Han? Aren't you afraid of eating up the entire zombie world? Did the ancestor of cannibalism gain his reputation in vain?

The protagonist's name is Fang Han. When I watched it, I always thought of the Gate of Eternal Life.

Uncle Jiu taught a basket of immortals, but he himself did not become an immortal. It can only be said that all of his immortal disciples were the God Kings of Tang Dynasty.

I thought it was Fang Han from the eternal world.

Uncle Jiu is running out of apprentices, why don't he ask his senior brother to learn Lightning Running Fist? ? This seems to be very exciting. There are too many apprenticeship parties.

You're driving high and driving low. You're doing well in front, but suddenly you're wandering in the back, and your combat power suddenly shoots out of the sky. Is it necessary? I still plan to finish the book.

The protagonist should either have a background of reincarnation of the boss's clone, or he should just be like the legendary masters who have become immortals and have to practice hard for decades to get a chance to become immortals. Don't just practice for a few months and be 50-50 close to someone like Uncle Jiu who can become a ghost or immortal.

Don't touch a dead date or a first commandment. It's too conflicting. In the future, you can add some Japanese, Korean, and Thai ghost movies.

(Do you want me to write about a dead date or a zombie priest?) Wow, what the author writes is really beautiful! ! ! It's so beautiful! ! ! 😁😁😁

At the beginning of the second chapter, the author writes about Uncle Jiu's delusion that he regretted accepting Wen Cai Qiusheng as his disciple. Uncle Jiu accepted the disciple based on his character, so he might have such thoughts. It can be seen from the movie that Wencai is like Uncle Jiu's half-idiot son. Yes, there is even a part in the movie where he was worried about whether he could find a wife. Qiu Sheng has no problem with his character and good talent, but he likes to be lazy. It can be seen from the movie that Qiu Sheng is good at martial arts and likes to practice martial arts but not Taoism. I got this understanding from watching Uncle Jiu's movies countless times. If you have any ideas, you can discuss them and squirt.

A common question, degree. It can be seen that the author has many wonderful ideas and many great stories that he wants to tell readers. There are many good ideas in his little head. Unfortunately, the author cannot control the degree well. Generally speaking, a normal novel needs to have three levels. First level: The level in the book. No matter how grand the world view is in the book or how outrageous the characters are, he is still at this first level. The second level: the reader level, this is an awkward level, it can also be said to be a Schrödinger level, it is separated from the first and third levels. Readers can observe the entire world in the book from a God's perspective, or they can be deceived by the first-level characters in the book and have many surprises. Third level: It is also the most important level. This is an existence that has completely mastered the first, second and third levels. It is the only level that belongs to the author. The author needs to lower himself to the first level at the third level and narrate the story to people at the second level. That is the author's perspective from God. The author has a unique perspective of God. He knows everything about this book, even the future. But what about the readers? The reader's God's perspective can only act on the world in the book. If the reader sees fifty chapters, then the reader will only know the world view and story line within these fifty chapters. What will happen in the future is a mystery to the reader. For example, if the protagonist travels to the fantasy world of Hong Kong, why does he and the cheating duo have to encounter mysterious ghosts for no reason? Isn't it wrong for him to just focus on collecting the cultivation methods of this world without paying attention to anything else? When this incident happened, there was no explanation and the plot development started inexplicably. It took several events in Chapter 21 to come up with a setting explanation that was barely acceptable to the readers. Another example is the rice store owner in Chapter 50. Why did the protagonist become so determined that he thought this owner was Yan Chixia. The same face is Master Ikkyu on the other side of the four eyes. Compared to the rice store owner, Master Yixiu has profound magical power. Like Yan Chixia, he leads a disciple to practice in the wilderness. He also hates evil and fights with evil throughout his life. It is not so much that the owner of the rice store is Yan Chixia, but that it is Yan Chixia who was unsatisfactory in her religious life and finally saw through the world of mortals and escaped into Buddhism. Isn't this more reasonable? The protagonist also inexplicably feels that he is related to Yan Chixia, and even speculates that he has returned to the past in the future. These are all because the author has opened his own God's perspective to write the book. You know the answers to all these and all the settings and explanations, so you write it like this. Where are the readers? Readers haven't gotten on the bus yet! Maybe you will say, ah, I will explain later. But you didn't say it! Readers don't resist the author's foreshadowing, but either you bury it quietly, or you tell the reader "Hey, hey, this is a little secret, don't be too careful" Otherwise, the result will be the author's self-pleasure. This is very scary. Readers will look at you as if you are a snake. You have no preface and follow-up, and you are talking about a hammer here and there. They have no idea what you are going to do or what you are going to say. Once readers have this kind of mentality, it's useless. At this time, no matter how many creative ideas you have, it will be useless. Readers have already finished running. I sincerely hope that after reading this review, the author will be vaguely sure that he has many good ideas, but unfortunately he cannot show them. It's a pity that I have to sigh.

I thought it was Fang Laomo, Lord of the Era.

After reading four or five chapters, the protagonist used to be awesome and knew a little bit about everything. I know a little about fighting, a little about Chinese medicine, and I personally feel that there is something wrong with your sentence fragmentation. It is very uncomfortable to read. It is just a few words, arranged in two or three rows. The protagonist is also described as having thoughts that often jump around. The psychological description plus this sentence fragmentation makes it really a bit of a headache.

I thought the protagonist's name was Door to Eternal Life. By the way, is there any success in Uncle Jiu's attempt to close the gate of eternal life?

The three pure states in Taoist mythology are the Taishang Great Heavenly Lord who transforms the three pure states in one breath. To put it bluntly, it's just that the ancestors cultivated different dharma lines, and they are all worshiped by the Supreme Being. The author is really good at it. Speechless. Have you read too many ancient novels?

In fact, many authors who read Taoist propaganda now have misunderstandings about many folklore stories. Stories like Mr. Zombie are actually based on folklore ghosts and are closer to folk history and culture. Maoshan Taoist priests are not Taoist priests who are national tourist attractions on Maoshan Mountain as many people understand now. In the past, there were actually many temples and Taoist temples on one mountain. Just like Shaoshi Mountain actually has a gym. There is not only one mountain, but one family. And many people worship the Patriarch, but in fact they don't worship Sanqing too much. Because the current Sanqing Dynasty actually came into being later. Yuanshi Tianzun only appeared in the Song Dynasty. Then there are Taoist priests like Uncle Jiu. In fact, they are more Taoist priests in folklore stories, not the Taoist priests who started to confer priests on themselves now that Tiantian people are still alive. If understood by many authors, they are actually wild Taoist priests standing opposite the official Taoist priests. Many of them do things professionally, and even their lives are indistinguishable from those in the market. There is no prohibition on getting married, it means learning a trade from a master. I prefer Yuko. Inheritance is also diverse, including inheritance from teachers and family education. For example, many viewers will find that Uncle Jiu's Dharma Hall often only has the Patriarch and not the Sanqing. Although there are three Qings in Mao Xiaofang's hall, the main one is the Patriarch. It's very simple, because their magic inheritance is not the so-called Three Pure Ones, and no one of them is still alive, so they have a strange behavior of conferring priests on themselves. Even Lin Fengjiao's underworld boss came here through his own conspiracy.

The world view goes back and forth, without any foreshadowing It gives me a headache If it doesn't work, you can divide it into separate volumes.

This book should be titled, Uncle Jiu: My disciple Fang Han has the door to eternal life, Uncle Jiu: My disciple Fang Han has the appearance of eternal life

The red rope glutinous rice is still there today, but the black bean paste is nowhere to be found. 🙂

I just want to ask, is there a female protagonist? How many are there? If there are more, I will watch it.

The stories in this book include the Jiu Shu series, the Hong Kong variety series, the Liaozhai series, the Lotus Lantern series, the Fairy Sword series, the Magic Phone, the Battle of Heaven and Earth, Sun Wukong, etc... (You can also tell me if there are any movies or TV series you want to watch, although I may not be able to write them well, and I may not be able to write them!) The above worlds appear in no particular order. They are purely cute and don't understand anything. I can only write step by step. That's it. Good morning, noon and night, dear readers! 😁😁😁

Is this a mess? Later on, I was promoted as fast as I was a helicopter.

The Small Thousand World cannot bear gods and demons, and the Middle Thousand World cannot bear powerful gods and demons. At best, the Dead Covenant is a Middle Thousand World. The Nuwa Empress, Great Sun Tathagata, Guanyin Bodhisattva, Ksitigarbha Bodhisattva, and Rahu in the Dead Covenant must be projection bodies or thought incarnations, so they are so weak. The Golden Immortal is the ceiling of the Dead Covenant World. It can kick red-eyed zombies with its feet, grasp the destiny and refine it instantly, and can live forever.

I want to know if the author writes about eternal life?

When will Big Brother's new book be released?

Author, your plot and the one where everything started with apprenticeship to Uncle Ninth cannot be said to be the same. They are basically the same. Was it written by your trumpet?

Too slow to update

It's a little bit good-looking, just a little bit, come on

The author must have read Duan Xiaohuang's book. I feel that he was more influenced by it. His writing style is a bit immature, but overall it's okay and you can read it.

It was okay in the early stages, but the more I wrote, the worse it became.