Witcher: Starting from Training a Female Witcher

The character and plot explanations in the previous cheating are a bit vague, but it's not a bad point. On the contrary, the latest plot is well written and shows the power of writing. Overall, it is worth looking forward to.

There is no background introduction, no explanation of relevant concepts, it is just a self-deprecating soliloquy. After reading it for a long time, I felt dizzy and made all the mistakes that a newbie should make. I did not listen to any readers' advice and suggestions. Eunuch and street rush, these are the two possibilities of this book.

I suggest cutting it out and rewriting it. Those who have never played The Witcher will not be able to understand it at all. Moreover, the plot is all about character dialogue, and the other descriptions are very poor and look like a running account.

The writing of "Venom" is a mess. I don't know what the author was thinking. Could he not write a difficult beginning? It doesn't give the protagonist any chance to grow. This kind of book is really difficult to read. The male protagonist is also useless. He wrote a doctoral student and didn't see the effect at all? Was it written to be funny?

It's a pretty good Witcher 3 fan novel, not nearly as good as Ascart and Lords of the Empire, but the author is a newcomer, the writing is good, and the outline should be there. He has a good understanding of the background of The Witcher 3. The second main plot is about the country of negative teaching materials for victims who do not abide by the law of accidents mentioned in The Witcher 3. Through a series of "coincidences" (the hand of God by a certain sail), the country of Medina, a country rich in magic-blocking gold, became the basic base for its early development. "Farming! Start!!" Moreover, the book mentions the warlock's foreshadowing method of removing resistance from the magic golden handcuffs. Although I don't seem to remember whether the original book has such a setting, it is certainly not impressive. After all, it can be seen that the protagonist is a Gandalf-type talent. Since his physical fitness is so good, it makes no sense not to play Gwent and vent the energy of the wizard. All in all, stick with it and support it all.

I have read less than 4 chapters in the beginning, and they are all full of confusing settings and poisonous points that are inconsistent with the settings. I highlight one point: you set yours, and I express mine. I suggest readers who want to read a rational wizard and have rational thinking not to read it.

Do you have to write Mirror Master so early? Do you like writing about threatened protagonists that much? So disgusting

🌚How can I put it this way? I can't see that it's written as a witcher fanfic. The overall impression of the novel to me is that it is a combination of domestic immortality and Chinese-style Western fantasy wizards. It tastes too strong at first. It is a type of writing without any sarcastic skills. It is completely based on the domestic immortality routine. Looking for the plot is even more confusing. A bunch of NPCs attack the protagonist like Shi Lezhi. The protagonist is in trouble. He is either in trouble or looking for trouble. The warlock here is even more ridiculous. They just try to make it into a Chinese-style Western fantasy. From behind, there are level 1 to 9 arcanists, knight breathing techniques, level 10 igniting divine fire and conferring gods. I wouldn't be surprised at all the self-propelled humanoid turrets of the warlock.

I looked confused and confused.

It's too confusing, the content is too out of the ordinary, and it's very unfriendly to readers who don't understand the Witcher. Basically, the content of each chapter does not seem to be connected very smoothly, making it very difficult to read. Feeling is the product of self-entertainment

Why does the protagonist run away? A lonely wizard, running out to be beheaded? The normal way is to kill the old wizard and become the leader of the school, and then what? You just want to run and run during this time travel. The key is that you don't have the power to run, you can't run, and you can't level up well. It's an inexplicable idea.

Your writing is not strong enough to support the structure of your article, and you often act like a Riddler.

The writing is not good, it looks too messy, the details and transitions are also very different, and it's uncomfortable to look at.

The writing is cryptic, and you have to find the plot from the complicated text, which makes the reading threshold high. Some people are confused after reading the comments, don't worry.

After reading Chapter 30, I have one feeling: it's not smooth. The protagonist is a mess The plot characters are also in a mess It's hard for me to continue reading I hope you can achieve better results in the future

The system is not written clearly, I don't know what the main plot is doing, and the narrative is very tiring to read. I should have played The Witcher 3 and understand the world view, but the specific settings are a bit arbitrary.

I haven't read it yet, but the title of this book feels like a pick-up story. If the title lacks a female character, it would be better to just say witcher. It's more pure. The protagonist's route is like a teacher teaching students to train witchers, teaching both men and women. Maybe I can take a look, but only teaching women, it's like a stud book about finding a wife and a harem.

The writing is really bad, the key information is given in one sentence, and the minor parts are confusing. The author just writes whatever comes to his mind. The characters who appear in one chapter are not even introduced. They just assume that the readers know. If they want to understand, they have to change their minds with the author.

Don't learn from foreigners' writing style, which is like the Riddler, looking at the flowers in the fog and unable to understand. Just make it easy to understand and concise. After all, the readers are Chinese.

It's boring and self-righteous. Keep suppressing it. What's the use of the system? Just ask the Destiny Man to find another time traveler. It's disgusting. The most special personality is trapped in a cocoon. It's all bells and whistles. It's useless. Destiny? How many divisions does he have? Throw the system away. Playing with potions is no longer a joke. Playing with combat power is also a hammer. Playing with development is even more abstract.

Doesn't it say in the original novel that the witcher has unparalleled credibility? How to deal with the female witcher? Do you want to buckle the happy beans?

There aren't many witcher fans, but this one is pretty good, keep it up 💪

Now that I have finished reading the latest chapter, maybe because I read it over several days, I did not feel as strong a discomfort as other comments mentioned when I was reading it. Overall, it's pretty good, and I can see some of the author's ideas. But what I personally feel is lacking is that some of the plot transitions are too fast, resulting in the growth and appearance of some characters being a bit abrupt. But in fact, I think this problem can only be solved perfectly in the book "Double Harmony". Overall, it can be seen that the author wanted to write a wonderful story, a fully grown character, and some good ideas and twists. I believe this story is still very long, and it's just the beginning. There's nothing to comment on. I look forward to the author's next stories. Then I have read a lot of Witcher fan fiction, and only one or two of them have been completed. It seems that many of the problems with too much information are actually due to the cumbersomeness of the original novel. This has a lot to do with the fact that some readers play The Witcher deeply/only lightly, some watch American TV series, and some watch the original Witcher/The Witcher. Therefore, I personally feel that wizard fan fiction should be written as original, to show readers a complete world, rather than purely as fan fiction. I personally think this book has great potential. The author can insist on revising the previous text and constantly improving the work instead of leaving the flaws alone. Come on, author. Then the anti-Japanese part is best changed. In terms of characters, it may be to portray the identity of the time traveler, but it is really low-key and affects the perception. At least it made me hesitate to watch it and made me make a choice, which could have been avoided. Provincial flow: current grain and grass

The coat of arms may be slightly different depending on the era, but the positions of the countries have not changed (except for Soden being cut in the later stages of the original work). Livia is still a small country with no ranking. The geographical location of Matina is between Sintra and Toussaint, separated by Nasser (the country where the failure of water control in the book added a canal to Toussaint, and also the direction of the escape of the sister of the descendant of the duchess two hundred years later in the game) Modified source: The Witcher Chinese wi ki Timeline: The truth of Lebiolda should be introduced to Toussaint (that is, the daughter of the duchess in this book) through his followers after his death. I asked him to come first. It is a second creation, but the core theme of the shepherd has not changed. It is my understanding of many contents in novels, games, and Gwent. Vesemir, the birth time in the game is different from that in the novel. I chose the earlier one. Madoc, the official witcher has left an open ending. If he survives the Maribor incident in Arzu, it would be the least inconsistent to appear in Toussaint. In this book, he is pestering the prophet to use precognition to help him find someone, a warlock who he believes is the most evil person. The "Fables and Stories" that appeared in The Witch of Lynx Cliff have not even been finished yet, because the game dialogue in "The Witcher 3" mentioned that the venue for "Gutterfield and the Knight of the Chessboard" was a tourney, and the tourney was founded by the current duchess (laughs Evil Beast, reminded Dishamuna many times, yes, Kargma . Knight Goliath is a second-generation character. He has two left legs. His sister is the demon who eats with Geralt in the game (not yet in this battle). The younger control attribute is also a second-generation character.

You can make suggestions here. I hope readers who like this book can read the latest chapter. I recommend it now Just read it. It is indeed important for the new book. I promise to keep it up! Grateful!

I have never played The Witcher 3 and I want to continue reading it. Can anyone provide a map?