Under One Person: I, Zhang Sanfeng's Template for the Opening

It's too verbose, too much nonsense, and the word count is deliberately increased 😡

Good guy, Tianshi leads the team to lead Zhang Zhiwei and the protagonist. The Wang family still dares to do evil to the protagonist? Don't be too ridiculous

The writing of Wang Ai and Lu Ci is too stupid. There is no need to force hatred so early. It is obvious that writing step by step can be very brilliant, but if you insist on superfluous, it will look very poisonous.

It's so stupid. You can delay a plot so much that you don't even dare to think about it later. Just go down the mountain to cultivate your nature. I'm afraid you will become a fool if you don't go up the mountain. How can these two people be so stupid? Really disgusting

Do you know what makes me most speechless? Because a common problem with many of your novels is that they are poorly written. No matter how many people the protagonist wins, no matter what talents the protagonist shows, no matter how powerful the protagonist is, others always think that the protagonist's opponent is more powerful and stronger. The number of people who support the bishop is not proportional to the number of people who support his opponents. It's like the whole world has been angered, and the whole world doesn't think favorably of the protagonist, just like it's full of hatred towards him. Every time someone else appears on the stage, they think that others can defeat the protagonist. Just like the protagonist has defeated Lu Ci and Wang Ai before, but no one still believes in the protagonist's ability. They don't necessarily all support the protagonist, but you have to write it reasonably, because some people wake up, some people know that the protagonist is very powerful, and some people say it's not necessarily true, but it is possible that the protagonist will win. Instead of like now, every time the protagonist appears. There are always people who don't believe in the protagonist, and there are always people who ridicule the protagonist, as if he has a grudge against the whole world. And the writing is really good, there are some parts that don't need to be written at all, such as those that don't need to explain the origin of some parts.

Don't write that the template is Zhang Sanfeng. What you wrote is not worthy of carrying Zhang Sanfeng's shoes.

The protagonist has Zhang Sanfeng's understanding, and it's not Zhang Sanfeng who takes over, so there's no need to imitate him everywhere, right? Also, I was speechless when I said how evil the protagonist is, but in the end he developed a Tai Chi-attribute Earth Qi. It's like a parent talks about how talented and evil his son is every day, but the result is that he got a 90% in the ordinary school exam, which is not worthy of the name!

After writing four books, I am still at the first level, which is understandable.

Zhang Sanfeng has been a boy all his life and hopes that the male protagonist will keep it. 🙂

Zhang Sanfeng is basically one of the prototypes of Lao Tianshi, and can the protagonist be a little crazy and kill some Japanese? One of Zhang Sanfeng's nicknames is Zhang Sanfeng, the boss who went straight to Yuanting to kill people.

The description of Lu Ci and Wang Ai is too stupid.

Chapter 11 is really about persuading people to quit. It's so brainless. Just looking at the chapter name is extremely poisonous. ... Just by looking at the title, you can tell that this chapter is really a bit brainless. Isn't it brainless behavior to learn someone else's unique family secrets and then show it off in front of others to show off? Generally, this kind of family inheritance behavior cannot be passed on to others. Isn't this the intention to make enemies with others and fight to the death?

You don't even need to read the content. Just look at the simplicity and you won't be interested. The settings under one person are lower than Fengyun and they barely belong to Gaowu. Yang Wulei, Yuwu and Fenghouqimen all belong to Gaowu no matter how you look at them. The Nine Yang Divine Art is from Zhongwu's Legend of Heaven and Dragon Slaying, so how can it be compared to Zhang Zhiwei 🤫

The old lady's foot-binding cloth is smelly and long

Just one hand of Tai Chi, Yin and Yang and two Qi are enough to defeat the invincible hand in the world. Deducing the Eight Magic Skills, what are the bells and whistles? What is the use of so many bells and whistles. . . Create something else, just for the less talented disciples and disciples, just make them casually.

Playing Zhang Sanfeng? Then you can't say that you are an old man from the Yuan Dynasty and don't recognize the Han family.

I think a disclaimer should be added to the introduction. If your EQ exceeds 80, please watch with caution. The author will not be held responsible if it causes physical and psychological discomfort.

The situation is too small. When life and death are at stake, if you write about personal grudges, you will feel a little petty.

There are too many narrations and you're writing a replay novel.