Konoha: Peace Begins with Persuading Jiraiya

I have only read four chapters. The protagonist is described as a wise man, but if the author does not give wisdom based on the background, the protagonist will have died long ago. No matter how good Jiraiya is, he will not fight against the master for the protagonist.

The author has learned from Mao Xuan at a glance. There are not many people who can analyze the system so clearly. Come on, author. With tens of thousands of platinum resources, the style of customization

The type of Unhokage who knows everything. The writing is good, but for those who have watched Naruto, many things will be taken for granted. There are also too many secondary assumptions, and it is even less interesting to whitewash them.

It's impossible for Jiraiya to be with you. Do you really think he is a good old man? You can't possibly explain it to me. You can tell by watching anime. I have never cared about celebrities. Later, when I taught celebrities, I probably thought he was the son of the prophecy.

It is better to unify the ninja world first and make it look like you want to run away if you can't walk.

Don't the time travelers know the plot of Naruto at all...

Chapter 6: Writing as a time traveler, reading as a great native

There are six levels in Doomed Science, unless you don't write Fu Renzhuan,

Comparable to the book "One Piece: Rampage of the Fire Mountain".

It's awkward to read. It seems like the author's God perspective has replaced the character's perspective, lacking a sense of immersion.

Good guys, direct 404 warning, is it necessary?

The writing style is okay, but the description of Jiraiya is actually too weak. Naruto is also called the Eye Legend and the Blood Legend. Jiraiya and Kai are the mortal geniuses who have truly gone through hardships and blossomed into brilliance. I know the first few chapters are meant to speed up the plot, but it's better to describe it more so that readers can really relate to it instead of just complaining about it. The plot from 1 to 100 is easy to write, and can even be written down or skipped. The process from 0 to 1 is when readers understand the tone of the whole book. After all, the beginning is "The Legend of Heroes - Jiraiya"

The author has watched Naruto, but the protagonist does not know Naruto, so the readers of the article who have watched Naruto will have a sense of fragmentation, and there are some places that you can't get around.

The author has watched Black Ice or Tiandao

This is the timeline I used for reference, if you are interested you can take a look. In view of the confusion in part of Naruto's timeline, the specific reference pictures

It has nothing to do with good or bad, but Jiraiya's concept is the biggest protective umbrella for the conservative forces.

Good Guys 404 I just started watching

I just said, don't say sensitive words, it's a pity

Haven't watched it yet! Jiraiya can convince! Pigs can read!