
Tennis King: My Skills Come from Death
网王:我的球技来自死神
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 732k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It's still a bit of a bottleneck, The protagonist's pretending to be B is already a little bit awkward. On the one hand, there are frequent games, and there are almost no off-site adjustments recently. The second is the old rivals. There is not much freshness in many games. The third is that the protagonist's mode is too fixed. He keeps his hands wildly and then crushes and fights. If he keeps using one mode, the feeling of B will be greatly reduced. The previous chapter of Dolls was a breakthrough, but the degree of weirdness can indeed be better. This is one direction, The other direction I can think of is to focus more on breaking the opponent's will. Currently, it is just to use ball skills to attack the opponent, plus a little ridicule from the protagonist, It is far from playing with the opponent's mind and letting the court The degree to which the opponent loses the fighting spirit (it is also known as making the opponent unable to break or stand) For example, since tennis is no longer scientific, the protagonist directly uses a prediction technique, such as: you will fall after three balls Then the opponent's body is out of control like a puppet on a string and falls lamely, or the opponent is overly nervous and mistakes are superimposed. I fell down... Only one kind of prediction can actually play many tricks, because there should not be too many things that can be predicted, etc., Etc., They can all be superimposed with psychological fear, Then let me mention something that is easy to change, reduce the words shock, terror, uproar, astonishment... In the title. Although the content of the text is not as embarrassing as the horror, the title is still a bit harsh. In addition, almost the titles of blockbusters are shocking, which makes me a little tired of aesthetics.
It's finally here. Following Naruto Tennis, Pirate Tennis, Demon Slayer Tennis, and Saint Seiya Tennis, I knew someone would write about Bleach Tennis.
Qidian should be allowed to add a eunuch refund mechanism 😡
After reading the first few chapters, to be honest, I am a little afraid that my fighting power will collapse later According to time, I have just been promoted to junior high school, and I can fight Phoenix with my basic skills and breakthrough, even though I have a good location. According to this, the swastika is invincible when fighting against another dimension. Moreover, according to the introduction, there is more than one Zanpakutō ability. If there is someone like the Hongyoku Spirit King, he can rush out of the earth directly, but it is all speculation. It depends on how the author arranges it in the future. I hope it will not collapse.
The biggest problem of the King of Nets is that his combat power in the later period is off the charts. How to round it up, or in other words, keep it from collapsing and make people laugh, if this is solved, it can really be written.
It would be better to write about King of Net traveling through time to go to the Shinigami. The Zanpakutō is a racket. The swastika can hit black hole balls and destroy the world of the shinigami. The swastika is banned.
It feels like a pretentious and slap-in-the-face article. I look down on the protagonist and I can win. - The protagonist exerts his strength and others say it's terrible. Should I stop the game? It's the protagonist who wins easily. - Another person who looks down on the protagonist keeps reincarnating.
It looks like a eunuch. It's a pity that the book that was on the top of the bookshelf after catching up with me has to be deleted again.
Instead of breaking 2 chapters in one day, it's better to change it to 1 chapter with 4k. It's not much written, but it also likes to break. It's really tiring to follow it every day. And what I have been wanting to complain about for so long is that the protagonist provides his teammates with professional equipment and team, the skills of the god of death, and brings in Nanjiro as a coach, and many first-army training partners. Those top-end talented teammates have not been able to open up the gap with the other teams. I don't know if it is to suppress the strength of the teammates or just to let the protagonist show off. Reading it every day is getting a bit boring now. Now I don't want to follow this book every day. I read it once every half month and it's a pleasure to read it. It's too torturous to follow it every day. The last bit is my feeling. The dispute with Rikkaida should end as soon as possible. They really don't deserve the protagonist to spend so much time playing with them. If you have this time, you might as well play more with the people at Shitenhoji Temple, or go to U17 as soon as possible. It's really boring to write it now, just leave it there every day to show off, it's still boring.
I just want to ask, have you seen Prince of Tennis?
I haven't read many Wangwang fanfics, but I personally feel that this one is the best one. Do you have any recommendations of similar genres?
Others have one skill that is popular, but the protagonist has to use a bunch of skills to fight one, and the B block can't keep up. I have the same initial solution, the swastika solution, and it's just like that.
I still drink poison to quench my thirst in different time and space, It is indeed not possible to write forever, And if many of the same characters are put together, the difficulty will rise by more than one level. The most important thing now is to be able to develop a main line to save the plot, Besides opening a dual main line as I mentioned before, I really can't think of any other way, But I have to say that the update has been discontinued and the reputation has collapsed. If it were me, I would still try if I could. Of course I can suppress it by discontinuing the update, no problem, and those who change to pursue will still pursue it.
It's not a good start for the author to start with such a photo. 1. Why should the protagonist's strength be suppressed at the beginning? Why don't you write the protagonist to be so strong? The protagonist has been trained professionally since childhood, plus talents and plug-ins. He has received Mifune training in advance. You can tell me whether he will be able to compete with Phoenix 55 or not be able to beat Phoenix in 2 years. I would like the author to take a closer look at Net King. In the World Championships, he will still fight for the basic 5D. The protagonist's basics are so high that not many can beat him in 2 years. Don't tell me that the protagonist was casually fighting Phoenix 2 years ago and was asleep the rest of the time.
I thought it was "Death: My skills come from Net King"...
If it is really Lan Da's character, he will definitely not bother to use the abilities of these defeated generals and low-level imaginary people when he has his own mirror flower and water moon: D
I don't have to write another Dragon Ball King of Network in the future. The early Dragon Ball still has a lot of moves. Let's have a Saiyan transformation from another dimension. One, two, three 😏
To be honest, the second chapter was a bit uncomfortable to read. I wanted to write something very powerful and powerful, but I had to hold back and suppress my strength. I was speechless. I didn't find the right balance.
Has the author reached a bottleneck? The content and update speed are too slow.
Is the author still writing? If I had known about the eunuch, I wouldn't have booked it. It was a waste of money.
In fact, it's a bit like the book Thunder Gossip. The protagonist has a big past, and the opponent can't catch it, and then a big hole is blown out of the opposite wall. Repeat, repeat, repeat, Writing hundreds of chapters like this will definitely finish the game. This book is also a bit similar. The protagonist's battle (tennis) mode, repeat a certain number of times, It's very easy to get tired of aesthetics. As the previous comment said, the weird aspect can be strengthened. This aspect can be written at once. For example, as written before, the opposite side turned into bones. This number one is consistent with the title of the protagonist: after all, no one in this world has seen a comic with handsome men and beautiful women everywhere. Secondly, a slightly dark underbelly is more suitable for a character with a gentle appearance. For example, in the history of animation, there have been many squinting monsters depicted, and there are many homogeneous characters who are black when cut open. Currently, the protagonist has shown quite a lot of motherly qualities. He has been caring for the growth of others. He has bad taste and other things, but he has not shown much. In addition, the supporting role has always appeared on the stage to play, and the scenes have been assigned to the supporting role. Every game is written, and the protagonist has a light color. Transformation, a bit like it is just a demonstration machine for ball skills, In addition, the improvement of the protagonist's own strength has not been mentioned at all for a while (↑This sentence is off-topic) (After all, cheating at any time is also a way of writing)
Are there any novels similar to this internet king's? It's invincible. If you don't want to read it and feel aggrieved, it's okay if your family has money.
In terms of weirdness, I mean that I can write something with a bit of horror elements, not just weird means, expressiveness, or oppression, but also more illogical, weird, and chilling aspects, similar to the sense of atmosphere, just like Like the soundtrack of a horror movie, the camera zooms in and makes people's hair stand on end. The author, when you write about the doll, your writing is a little weaker. The supporting character Momo City still said that he was scared to death. But as a reader, I didn't feel it at all. This is a pity. , Of course, how strong it is, whether readers can eat it, how to adjust the taste, and how to add condiments are all different opinions, As for how the protagonist can get out of the dilemma of being a nanny for the supporting character, it is indeed a bit tricky, I can't think of a suitable solution for the time being. One is to use "incarnation" to break the situation. If the protagonist wants to develop a clone that can think independently and help him deal with some things, it is natural for him to let him fight for him. No problem, but there shouldn't be too many clones. After all, the multiple perspectives of the clone flow are double-edged swords. The ideal state is the stage where the protagonist needs to go out into the world, leaving the clones to continue education and cultivate domestic players, and become famous in the world competition (but How the supporting characters chase the protagonist, we can't force them to trick them, it's another problem) The other solution is a last resort, This is to find a reason to let the protagonist seal his own violence, It's like Aizen's seal is lifted, hairspray Hands, You can also learn, wear glasses, Normally, you are gentle, and you can also guide the ball when you don't take off the glasses. But when you take off the glasses, it becomes so scary, how can it make people chill, So peaceful and peaceful at ordinary times. Angry, for example, the opponent has made a great breakthrough, or the limelight has overshadowed the protagonist. At this time, it is reversed and the protagonist explodes, which should be a bit more exciting This is the rationality, why do you do this? It's not easy to do
Short and to the point, is it necessary?
Which team is the protagonist of the World Championship on?
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