The World of Gramming Begins with the Mechanical Master

Comparing extraordinary people with professional boxers, they are a bit weak. People who can be stabbed in the neck and not die, go to boxing and become boxing champions.

The thin young protagonist fights hand-to-hand with the black boxer prisoner. He stabs the enemy through the neck with a pickaxe and the heart does not die twice. It is amazing. I can't watch it anymore.

Whether you read more or not, you can accept only one, depending on the author's writing skills.

I've seen Chapter 73, but the world of Ke is not interesting enough Mechanical Master... It has basically nothing to do with it. In the entire 73 chapters, those who have something to do with mechanics just rub bicycles with their hands. The more we look at the main plot, the more unclear it becomes. The protagonist also works part-time as a potion master... Don't start with a mechanic... Those who want to see the mechanic element can basically leave.

The ability of Mechanical Master is basically useless, why write it?

I saw more than a dozen of them, all of which were played in prison. The ability of the mechanical master is incomparable.

The title of your book doesn't quite match what you're writing. Or it's just that the foreplay is too long, and the plot isn't very good, so it won't attract people.

I didn't get the potion formula until Chapter 47, it was too slow

I feel like the protagonist's strength has improved too slowly.

Is there a main plot? If the main plot is not seen in a hundred chapters, it will be broken in less than two hundred chapters.

The plot is incomprehensible, one escapes from prison and then goes back to prison, focusing on a history

Can anyone tell me what the main plot of this book is? I've watched more than 40 pictures and I still don't know what the main plot is and the plot progress is a bit too slow.

After watching it, I felt that the protagonist was becoming more and more mentally retarded.

After reading 30% of the chapters, I felt that it was very confusing from the beginning. The system functions were unclear, the main plot was confusing, the progress was slow, and a lot of different forces were thrown in at once. I can't stand it anymore

From the current point of view, there is absolutely no need to add a system, it has no existence value, and the things given do not improve much. It is better to let the protagonist slowly improve like the natives. The main and branch lines are not clear, and he is busy starting the next thing before finishing one thing. Isn't it a bit random to write like this?

What the hell stuff, I can't stand it

This mechanic hero is really weak

As long as there is a system, I don't want to watch it now, I don't know why! I always feel that system writing is annoying, the same, and has no intention at all, just like what Al wrote! Most system writers are too lazy to use their brains, and their capital letters are ordinary and ugly!

Please polish the plot a bit, some of the photos on the shelves are too cliche, almost like they were written by a different person.

There is absolutely no problem with the quality, but the updates are just average. Come on, the author.

First time first

You have this foundation, and you also have the story of the novel, but what is it? You can't tell what is primary and secondary. Well, take a look at the dozens of photos above. Although there is a fixed story line, the driving force of the protagonist cannot be seen. It's a little bit messy. I feel that the previous plot in the prison is okay, it could be polished and modified a bit.

Is there a Shen Nong 🙂