After Clearing the Level with All Achievements, Something Is Wrong with the Heroine

🙂Moreover, I can write well, but the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like you. I know it is difficult to write novels, and it is difficult to maintain the writing style and plot. I am a reader. I will lock you in a small dark room. If you don't code, I will find a tall and majestic man, two meters tall, wearing a black stocking maid uniform, and a delicate voice to punish you 🙂

No, 🐶that's how the author cut it?

I haven't read it yet. Does it meet the following criteria?

The writing is decent, but no one commented.

There is no sense of contrast and it is impossible to attract others to look at it.

Dear author, if you are interested, please tell me the new account number. The writing is good and the idea is good. I just had bad luck when I sent it. It will work if you open a new book and specify it.

The writing was okay, but the plot was too short. It felt like there was too little written. It felt very compact.

It's okay to write, but why was it cut?

Okay, please let the author continue writing.