Starting from One Person, He Wreaked Havoc on the Comic World

I think it would be better to give the protagonist Wushan the power of fire. Brother Xuan's ability is so cool, especially in the form of the son of yin and yang, which directly beats Shanzhu.

Huo Zuo, the name is really ugly, he might as well be called Yan Xing

Let me ask a question now, what is the weakness of Devil Fruit? Let me mention one, you can't eat the second one.

The male protagonist is a person with fruit abilities and practices the ways of a gangster 😏. He is willing to drink, have sex, and gain wealth.

You can go to the Five Elements in Wushan to kill people randomly and enjoy the heat.

Kui Ba, Xia Lan, Star Travels, Nine-Nine Eighty-One, Xinghai Escort, Stealing Stars, etc. These are childhood regrets that I really want to read. It's a pity that basically no one writes about them. I guess too few people know about it.

Introduction: The anime in PS are awesome, I have watched every one of them, and the author's overlap rate with mine is extremely high!

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Little Japan killed all the best islands and blew them up and sunk them.

Can the temperature be raised? It will be like punching and kicking. Will the enemy have no blind spots to defend the whole process? What you fired was fire, but your fart didn't even burn? Oxygen can burn it. If all the surrounding oxygen is burned, no one will die.

Why, it's actually best to have no female protagonist in the whole book. After all, you are a genius, and you write emotional scenes that seem to let the primary school boy take over. It's the same. I hope the author can avoid this pitfall. If you are not good at it, you won't write it. It's better to use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. When writing about Huo Dezong's separation, the woman was not poisoned to death by me. Fortunately, I am now more resistant. I hope the author will get better and better🙏🏻

In fact, it's good to write about just one person. Isn't there a Yamata no Orochi? Guozhan contributes to gain some reputation. Open more things that increase your cultivation level and hit Little Japan directly. Kill the whole family first and then kill the Yamata no Orochi. Your own kung fu secrets can also strengthen Huo Dezong's strength. The thirty-six thieves behind, Duanmu, the old pervert, must be protected, senior brother, Feng Tianyang. If you don't have enough strength, you should cheat quickly.

I feel that if the protagonist wants a woman, he hopes he won't be too arrogant. There should be no heroine in a comprehensive manga, and I hope not to create a world with only one heroine, because I won't be with that person for the rest of his life.

Can you write about the fox demon matchmaker?

It's refreshing enough, dense but not greasy, and supplemented by the development of the world view, it's a good way to pass the time. Everything is settled, looking forward to it!