Post-Traveler Era

Let me talk about my thoughts after reading it. After reading the first world, I feel that this book has several serious problems. I hope it will be helpful to the author. 1. The protagonist is an original democratic person of the original world. There is no sense of substitution. In fact, it can be set as an Earthling who has traveled through the past and added to the system. 2. Suddenly a thickened steel plate suddenly makes the plot invincible. The rhythm is very problematic. There is no natural and step-by-step plot development. The martial arts characteristics of the movie "kung fu" and the characteristics of the times "saving the country and strengthening the country" are not well expressed. 3. It cannot bring out the strengthening effect. It depends on the protagonist. Very discouraging. 4. The choice of the world, after Huang Feihong was Ip Man, even the gun king Ip Man, the similar era background and character characteristics are too homogeneous. It makes people have no desire to watch anymore. 5. You can add a task settlement link, mainly for the subsequent development of the task time after the protagonist leaves, so that readers can see that the protagonist has made an impact in the task world.

🙂🙂🙂Not bad

The Chinese people and the Japanese people are one and the same. There is only one enemy, which is Japanese imperialism and the Chinese national scum." Mao Zedong, May 1941

Being attracted by revenge, you end up copying movies, making short videos, and giving ideas for someone else's meal to copy? Aren't you the one who was pulled into a strong position to repay the kindness of a meal? Goodbye

Have you ever heard of cutting off Jianghu?

When watching Time Travel, the protagonist needs to know the plot and then change the world. What you write like this is not as good as creating an original world. 🤫🤫🤫🤫

It felt like I was looking at the scenery in the heavens. Although I went to a world that others had passed through, it felt like the main plot had not changed much, and the protagonist did not go into the story much. Most of the imagination is in the background, and the character of the protagonist is very ordinary and has no characteristics.

Suddenly I discovered that the protagonist is equivalent to an alien + a person from another world in the plot world. We are used to thinking of the protagonist as Chinese, but in fact the protagonist should have no cultural identity no matter which country he is. The main reason why the protagonist fights is firstly because Huang Feihong was kind to him in the first world, and secondly because he has a purely righteous stance of anti-invasion and anti-colonialism.

I really feel like this person is very old. The author should not be young. The routines are all the same old routines. And Shuangwen has nothing to do with him. Basically, you need to press the first dozen or so pictures, and then the next few pictures will feel better, and then press a few more pictures, and then press the next dozen or so pictures again, and then feel better again. There is too much foreshadowing and the pace is too slow. The world written in is also very old. The protagonist's plug-in is a little new, and the protagonist's character is a little new, but basically nothing else is new.

On the thirty-sixth day of Tiangang, Jinling's first and second hairpins, the devil star comes to the world, causing great catastrophe in the world. The sea of ​​blood is used as rouge, the dry bones are used to sew the wedding dress, thousands of reds are killed, and thousands of beauties are killed together. The first chapter: The great calamity caused the demon star to come to the world, and the twelve beauties awakened from the dream The second chapter: Jia Yuanchun cut off the dragon's veins with his hand, and the sick emperor died tragically in the Chuxiu Palace The third chapter: The red lotus fire burned down the Jinluan Palace, and the devil came to the troubled times from then on The fourth chapter: Lin Daiyu ordered the lonely star to bear the sky, and the weak Xi spread the epidemic to Suzhou and Hangzhou The fifth chapter It snowed heavily in Jinling. A big case was committed. He killed the prefect Baochai and raised demon soldiers Chapter 6. The golden unicorn was born and swallowed the fire unicorn. Shi Xiangyun gathered in Leshan Chapter 7. The second generation of Qin Keqing lived in the coffin. He avenged the blood and surrendered to the Ning Mansion. It is unknown Chapter 8. The temples were destroyed and the spiritual mountains turned into ghosts. The Miaoyu turned against the Tathagata and became a demon Buddha Chapter 9 Huaiqiao sister Wang Xifeng is about to rise, and she slaughters hundreds of merchants to build the foundation Chapter 10 Wang Xifeng is greedy for the treasury, Jia Yuanchun wants to build Afang Palace Chapter 11 Missing her late husband Li Wan leads to the Styx, the ghost spirit is thick, and corpses appear in the capital Chapter 12 The third spring gathering, stepping on the bloody Xuanwu Gate, imprisoning his father and brother to rebuild the Rongguo Mansion ...

To complain about the plot, many years ago a group of immortal cultivators built a spaceship through research on the principles of all things, and then took their relatives to the outer space. Offices on the earth have been regressing due to technological chronology and poor knowledge dissemination (it is difficult to understand the reason for the regression. The earth is also a human being, and those who run in outer space are also human beings. Why does the earth keep regressing? The analysis may be because the extraordinary people on the earth are too scattered and have not established stable communication channels so that they work behind closed doors. There are not enough talent training and selection methods. The only way to spread knowledge is through the inheritance of masters and apprentices, which is extremely inefficient. After all, it is impossible to tell whether a person can understand the theory of relativity by looking at his face) This group of people has not engaged in industrialization, nor has they spread their knowledge of science to mortals (not to mention those hundreds of classics, the world can build spaceships, and the more well-known scientific principles left behind are not as good as popular science books). They treat the earth as a rural area (or worse than a rural area? At least the same textbooks are used in compulsory education in rural areas now), resulting in the eradication of knowledge. Even the sect on Earth is not considered to be one of its own, otherwise at least building a few interstellar communicators will not cause the degradation of knowledge (interstellar exploration does not have this thing unless it only gathers in spaceships as a unit, and has no contact with other spaceships at all) To sum up, given the self-sufficiency of this immortal civilization, it can only be said that it is basically impossible to achieve the level of building things behind closed doors, unless there is the technical support of the immortal world or the direct search for the knowledge of the traversers. Because this civilization has not been integrated with the majority of mortals, no matter how great you are as an immortal cultivator, if you want to pass it on, you still have to select people from mortals to teach knowledge and conduct scientific research. Whether a person who cultivates immortality can develop magic power can be examined physically, but whether he can engage in scientific research without going through more than ten years of compulsory education? Who knows? Without compulsory education and dissemination of knowledge, the result will be like these remnants on earth, each generation will be inferior to the next. The production capacity of immortal cultivators may be so high that a few or dozens of people can make a spaceship by hand, but something like an interstellar spacecraft cannot be developed by one person at all, and even a generation can't understand it.

In a word, the protagonist has no social experience, and everyone can take advantage of the protagonist and use him as a gun.

Boring, working for nothing. The strengthened body and skills are all gone.

What Xiaozhi, every time he comes back from a world, he cleans up his IQ. Keep your original innocence

🤣You say this is the post-traveler era, but it turns out that everything starts with the plot. If you follow the plot, the influence of the time traveler is almost non-existent. Can you do something awesome? After the plot is over, such as cutting the chicken and laughing proudly

Does the Holy Grail, a time traveler, have such a high baseline? It's all good things, if I go there😏

There are various enhanced martial arts secrets in Kung Fu. Go to the old beggar and buy a few, including Nine Yang Divine Skills, Nine Yin Manual, Six Meridians Divine Sword, and Dugu Nine Swords.

It feels like the system is starting to make the protagonist hang up and not use it. All the carbon atoms in the body have been replaced with carbon 133 This means that the protagonist's mass has directly increased by 5 or 6 times, and it is also a personal self-propelled nuclear reactor. Assuming that the power of the system can extend the half-life of this thing indefinitely, it will not cause the protagonist to fission at the speed of light, the body temperature will not rise to the normal temperature of the nuclear reactor, and the ultra-high radiation dose will not directly kill all living things within a 30 kilometers radius as soon as it appears. Only from the perspective of stable carbon 133, what kind of armor and defense are needed at the beginning? This thing is equivalent to the whole person reaching the physical limit of breaking from micro to macro. The hardness of diamond in front of the protagonist is the same as that of tofu against diamond, and it is also the kind with the flexibility of the human body. Except for hard-hitting an atomic bomb, there is basically no possibility of breaking the defense. If you can't open it, why bother?

Everything about this book is good except that it's not pretty

The author does a really good job of preventing theft (≧∇≦*)

It's still being updated. Author, why don't you cut it off and start a new book? This one is so bad after The Magnetic Field 😭😭😭

The author's anti-theft measures are so good that no one arrived even after finishing the book for a month.

I read this book for my imagination and worldview, just like Taibaishui-kun's book. However, the growth and changes of the author's protagonist are not as good as Taibai Suicune's. However, Taibai Suicune's books are often boring in the later stages, making people abandon them.

The first two worlds were okay, but why did he become mentally retarded in Journey to the West?

Why can't the protagonist take away his ability to learn and become stronger in different worlds? What does it mean to write like this?

I just saw Haihu. Except for the Holy Grail, I still think the others are very interesting. Most of the plots are bland, but I don't know why it feels so interesting, and I don't know what happens next. One thing I want to complain about is that shouldn't the world level of the dungeon gradually increase? At least it should be about the same strength. I looked at the chapter table of contents and I don't know why it says God of Cookery at the end?

Is the author here? When will the new book be released?

Dear author, when will the new book be released? Can I invest in it and keep it for you?

It hasn't looked good since Journey to the West

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