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I don't like the monkey from Black Myth, but I still like Wukong from the original novel.

. . . Black myth, Sun Wukong, infinite horror. . . What does it mean that all races have unlocked their genetic locks? Where did this come from? Is this still infinite?

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Why do you ask me to go back and provide for retirement when I have just entered the middle and upper levels of the establishment?

In fact, Meng Ru Shen Ji is written very well by Monkey: Taoist Wukong has scheming, the Buddha who is victorious in fighting has compassion, and the Monkey King has resistance. It's a pity that no one has written it down in the future.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​                                                              I'm stuck from time to time, the reason is because I want to think about the plot. I took two days off on April 24th because I wanted to finish the old book (the excuse was questionable), and then I successfully updated it in May. As a result, I took two days off on May 1st, and the reason was to rest (haha).

When I read the chapter of resentment in Chapter 7, I felt as if I had been reading the original work of Infinite Horror. A large part of the plot has nothing of its own, and adding the protagonist has no impact on the world. There is even no protagonist's own thinking or acting. Then what is the meaning of his coming here? I feel like the idea of ​​time travel is not bad, but the writing is completely unpalatable.

Black Monkey setting background➕Ancient Infinity yysy, the setting of Heart Monkey is very novel. But the ancient and unlimited audience has already read so many fanfics, why should they read Black Monkey? Moreover, the Qidian Infinite Stream has been updated to Guhuoniao's self-created infinite world. Are you still writing about the ancient Infinite? Picking up people's wisdom?

Can anyone tell me the name of the author's other book?

A monkey that modern people travel through. What kind of big-tailed wolf are you pretending to be in the horror space? Say it yourself, this is an old saying. Promise not to expose yourself in the future? Or will the protagonist speak in this tone from now on?

Interesting, there are many more leave requests than updates 🙂

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​?        ，，，，？ It's still stuck. If you're not sure, don't say it casually. This will only let readers know that your updates are unstable. I also thought that the other copies in the future would be smoother for you, the author. In the end, you returned to Black Myth, so forget it, but you, the author, are still stuck.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         soscribed it, I am the eunuch of the light speed eunuch. And taking four days off a month is a huge blow to the newbies! I think you, the author, need to write an outline to avoid getting stuck next time.

Who is the protagonist? Monkey? ? Pure passer-by appears

The game Journey to the West should be a small plane, right?

Let me talk about a few questions. First of all, the first question is that the protagonist has too few scenes. From the first chapter until Chapter 28, the protagonist has not said a few words. Others are always talking. The protagonist is just listening there. It gives me the feeling that the protagonist and Li Xiaoyi have similar roles. Who is the protagonist? The second question is that while he was talking, he suddenly turned to Journey to the West and started to read the original text of Journey to the West. Then Chu Xuan explained what the original text meant again. Once or twice, forget it, but you do it too often. I suspect that you are not counting the words. And that long sentence of yours, can you break it a few more times? I looked really tired. I estimated there were 100 or 200 words, just piled there. It felt really uncomfortable to look at them. Also, can you stop the protagonist from always speaking in such a formal tone? I know that is to make the protagonist fit the personality, but you can also let the protagonist study, learn some knowledge about the earth, and watch some entertainment products of the earth, so that the protagonist can speak some modern words. Finally, so far, I feel that the protagonist has not taken the initiative and is very passive. Basically, he does what others say and has not mentioned much about his own opinions and ideas. I think Sun Wukong can be very smart, right? So wouldn't it be reasonable to let the protagonist come up with ideas, provide some enhancement recommendations, or find some enhancements to use yourself? How can I exchange a skill without asking others to recommend it? What about your own thoughts? So far, the main perspective is only on the protagonist's side in the first few shots, and then on Chu Xuan and Zheng Zha. They are always talking and discussing. Sometimes Zhan Lan, Li Xiaoyi, and Zhang Jie will also join the discussion, and the protagonist is listening nearby. Sometimes it feels like the protagonist does not exist. This makes me completely unable to immerse myself in the protagonist. I don't know what he is thinking and what is his plan? What's his plan? I know nothing about this.

It's a pity. This book is quite creative.

Author, when you come back, give me two chapters a day. One chapter is too little.

Does anyone know what the name is over there next door?

What does it mean? Are you deceiving yourself😅

Chapter 104, What happened to the demon Zheng Zha? What's the meaning? How come the demon Zheng Zha doesn't know Brother Monkey? Didn't he unlock the genetic lock in Legend of Gods and Ghosts? The Devils have to unlock the genetic lock in order to copy the past. Did the author set it up privately?

The plot is actually pretty good, but the writing needs to be improved.

Not like a time traveler at all, just like aboriginals

The writing is still good, and the logic is not broken.

It's already the end of the month and there's still no sign of it

After coming back, I'll do two updates every day. One update is too little.

One chapter a day is too short.

This writing feels pretty good, but why are my grades so bad?