The Little Fresh Meat Collapsed? No, I Am the Almighty King

Nowadays, anyone still dares to write an all-rounder?

We are collecting songs. If you have any good songs, please leave a message. If there are any songs that fit the plot and ideas, we will use them. The big framework is tentatively estimated to be about 1.2 Million words, with a total of five volumes, but I am not sure whether it can be written specifically, but it will definitely have a million words. This is my first attempt at an entertainment story, and it is also my first time coming to the starting point. There may be some logically problematic plots. If you tell me about it, I will try my best to adjust it. In terms of characters, I try to make the characters have IQs. I used to write fantasy fairy tales, so I am good at shaping characters. I also have some experience in writing female characters. Hehe. But in a fast-paced environment, it is a little difficult to create characters. My own abilities are not yet good enough to portray the characters well and try to improve my own shortcomings when the plot is progressing rapidly and the excitement is intensive. Plot problems that have been pointed out: The mango orchard cannot swing from one tree to another, it is not very high. (It can't be changed, it's difficult, this is where the fun comes in) Hu Dalong's character mentality is a bit focused on himself when it comes to the spiciness of his cooking. (It has been corrected. It is indeed a problem that I did not write well at the beginning) If there are still problems in the future, I will directly correct them secretly. The main thing is to listen to advice first-hand.

In fact, there is another word, lack of heart.

Author, please come back soon. The writing is very good. I want to read the follow-up. I like to read this kind of light-hearted and refreshing articles occasionally. The basic logic is smooth without being too serious or digging into details. There are pretentiousness and slaps in the face, but the behavior is not pretentious and deliberate, and the taste is not heavy or offensive.

No, at least give investors an explanation. If you don't write it, can you finish the book?

Is this review deletion or review control?

It's a very interesting book. It's well written and vivid. I'm following it.

It's hard to evaluate. It's not that exciting at first, but it's still watchable and there's nothing majorly toxic about it. The number of updates is also a bit small - see

Renew! Give me an update soon! ! !

It's okay. I don't like parallel worlds, but the writing in this book is okay.

What's outrageous is that my name is Lu Ming😰

My friend, is this program so long? I feel like the plot is moving a bit slowly

When I saw the author speaking, I realized that it was not posted on Tencent. I feel weird. When we write articles, we always have a central idea. When we write novels, we have protagonists and villains. But they have too many scenes, and these fragments add up to more than the protagonist. At the same time, since you fell in love with Jiaojiao at the beginning, you put too much ink on Qinghuan's head, and the ghost of the previous kneeling and licking partner is still lingering. The key point is that it doesn't look like a group show after watching it for so long. I subscribed to the book for the first 10 chapters, but it was still the same after that, and I abandoned the book directly.