Mortal: a Family Cultivator Marries a Wife and Has Children

The ladies quickly accepted it, and the subsequent rewards for the Taoist companions must be well designed, so you can watch them before they collapse. And since it is a married Taoist couple who has an affair, I hope that later on, I will not let the poison leak out or kill the daughter. The tone has been set earlier, and the main focus is to take it all, otherwise the book will not be readable.

The golden finger of the protagonist is very suitable for the behind-the-scenes flow, but it is written as a witless and over-the-top flow. In such an important time in the early stage, many things can be avoided or solved better. The protagonist must be brave enough to highlight himself. If this continues, many secrets will be exposed soon. Normally The development of the incident is "the protagonist discovers some secrets, and then is caught and threatened to be tortured. Afterwards, the protagonist dies, and the harem becomes someone else's plaything. There is no other possibility." That's why I say that the protagonist is unintelligent. He does not play well behind the scenes and jumps up and down to cause trouble. He can only survive by the protagonist's halo.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       try to be more charming.

I saw forty pictures, and I took the pregnant rookie Taoist monk out, maybe to open a copy of the five-color gate. I feel a little confused here. First of all, the previous article said that there is at least 7 levels of Qi training behind the five-color door. First of all, what I think is that the protagonist eats most of the resources first, which at least guarantees a higher level. Others do not have to share them equally. Of course, if you choose to be all average, that's fine too. Then the gap between everyone in the early stage is not big, and the protagonist's combat power is not high, only five levels. Fighting with Brother Han, it is considered to be the tenth level of the wild, but this is risky, there must be uncertainty in the battle, and you cannot be sure of other people's cultivation and equipment. Finally, I took the pregnant Taoist companion there and struggled with the purpose of training. I felt that it was a failure here. If the enemy is really tenth level or above and has good equipment (high-grade magic weapon or two medium-grade weapons), the protagonist may not be in trouble, but the Taoist companion is very likely to be killed and have two lives. Has the author considered it? Looking at it from God's perspective and following the routine of cool writing, generally no novels that are good at killing the heroine will be written off. But in my opinion, such a plot itself is a bit anti-intellectual. It is risky but will definitely succeed. It is anti-intellectual. And you, a low-level pregnant woman, is firstly dangerous and secondly weak. I really don't think it is a good thing. Some other things that highlight the so-called "quality" are different things, and the wise have their own opinions. After all, these are theoretically correct, but does the author really hope to highlight these? Several times. So, my personal understanding of this plot is: either don't bring it, or invest in more resources in the early stage to ensure a few high-level combat capabilities. There is really no need to be average. Average and equality cannot be equated. Making decisions is related to ability and knowledge. Absolute average is very problematic. The above are personal opinions

Let me tell you, I have finished reading the updated version now. The plot is smooth and the writing is remarkable. There is no brainless trick. It's just a piece of food

Could something happen to this author?

It's quite interesting, but in the beginning, when you have no power to control the chicken, there is a high possibility that your life may be killed by someone at any time, which is quite dangerous.

First of all, mortals only have divine consciousness at the fourth level of Qi training. At this level, the probability of being killed by a mortal is very slim, because spiritual consciousness is too buggy. Before that, it was possible to be counter-killed. After all, you can kill a mortal with just one move using the fire bomb technique. Even an ordinary cultivator (who has never practiced mortal martial arts, and does not have life-saving cards like Talisman and Diamond Talisman) will be killed by a martial arts master if he gets close. Secondly, the author's premise that practicing mortal martial arts can protect meridians and reduce damage caused by failure in cultivating immortals to impact the realm is ridiculous. You have to know that no matter whether you are in a high realm or a low realm, the elixirs and secret techniques that can achieve this effect are not available to ordinary people. If you, a mortal martial arts master, had this effect, you would already have one for every immortal cultivator. Not to mention that no one has discovered so many immortal cultivating families, many of them are mortals. If martial arts has such an effect, it is impossible not to discover them. Then mortals assume that the spiritual power and true energy of immortal cultivators conflict with each other. Otherwise, Han Li would have practiced a lot of martial arts. But in fact, he only practiced the blinking sword technique that does not require true energy. The Qixuan Sect was once a major sect to Han Li. Although Han Li has declined, some second-rate martial arts are completely mastered by Han Li. However, even if Han Li said that he was the best in Qixuanmen in the later period, he did not practice other martial arts. If someone like Han Li could do it, you think he would not practice. Anyway, it would be easier for him to take drugs and practice. Just like your car has two systems for mixing gasoline and electricity, and one system for your meridians, spiritual power and true energy are used together. Aren't you afraid of exploding and dying?

Is there something wrong with what you wrote? Can Heavenly Eyes see high-level monks? You, a first-level monk, can see a seventh-level monk? Are you funny? ? ? ?

Author, you are discriminating against wives. Wives should also be rewarded. Otherwise, young girls, would you look for a mortal? In the original work, mortals are famous but not many. The legacy of Wei Wu and the ambition of the prime minister will be inherited by me.

I'm here to learn the author's writing technique, but I always feel it's a bit unfriendly. One sentence is one paragraph, and one page can contain up to 3,000 words. If I can write 20 times, all I write are big paragraphs

What do you mean, once everything is booked, the eunuch becomes the eunuch?

The author's writing style is still relatively immature, and emotional scenes are still difficult for the current author to grasp, so it is really embarrassing to write about this subject🤣

The girls in my village all say that Mortal Cultivation of Immortality is good-looking

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