I Have an Invisible Girlfriend

She, who was redeemed, came to redeem him who was still in the quagmire. From the beginning of the tragic life, the author describes a strong, polite, but repulsive male protagonist. He lacks a sense of security and does not change after being taken in. His past life has left various traces on him, so he likes money so much, but he is still a kind child. Even if he is stuck in the quagmire, he still retains his kindness. Qingshui, like the male protagonist, she once came out with the help of Tang. Even so, she also left behind She suffers from the sequelae of sleepwalking, so she wants to help the male protagonist in the same situation as her, bring him out of a bad family, let him contact more people, take off the mask of disguise, and learn to laugh from the heart. It's great. This kind of beautiful redemption story, there are many details in the book, so I won't go into details in order not to spoil it. I don't know if the author can finish the book with such results, but I am very happy to read this book. I hope the book will get better and better in the future.

Jiang Xiaomeng feels more like the protagonist's inner self-protection mechanism triggered after encountering a major accident, representing the protagonist's inner kindness. Because the protagonist's family environment is here, he must minimize his kindness. The disappearance of Jiang Xiaomeng later is probably due to the appearance of the heroine, who mends the protagonist's broken heart (I didn't see the rest, just guessing). In addition, there is a small bug at the beginning. The teacher's understanding of the hero's family is obviously unqualified. The students are absent from class for no reason, and they don't have any contact information. Even if they didn't have it before, after the hero was beaten, there is no effective emergency contact information. (Based on the performance of the school girl's brother and the heroine's family situation, it shows that this school cannot be a bad school)

The writing style is very comfortable, and the characters are well drawn, vivid and three-dimensional. The content and theme of the story are very clear as of Chapter 48. In the beginning, it is not the "mainstream" good men and bad women in the world (here refers to the character's situation). On the contrary, it is eye-catching. The male and female protagonists get along with each other step by step, every detail is foreshadowed, and the most important thing is that the two get along without being "wrong", which makes the story smooth and natural. I have to say that there are also shortcomings: that is, after reading the book, I felt like I was deceived when I read the title of the book (not that it is bad, in fact, the title of the book has a strong connection with the male protagonist, but it just gives people the feeling of tricking people into it) The text has clearly hinted at what the "invisible girlfriend" is, and I will not explain it if it is a spoiler. Interjection: I see some people are still struggling with single and multiple, but it is not necessary. The first label listed the single female protagonist, the second author replied, and the third novel also more intuitively "hinted" what the "girlfriend" is like. I personally think that one of the factors that some people struggle with may be related to the title of the book. The title of the book does not intuitively reflect the "female protagonist" or "the story of the female protagonist and the male protagonist", and the title is a bit charming. According to the inertial thinking of Internet articles, "girlfriend" is the "female protagonist", I can only say hey... I think everyone can go and take a look. I can only say that I believe the author, this is pure love, there is no weird pull. I am looking forward to the following stories. If I keep this momentum, I will want to subscribe and follow it.

I have finished reading the first volume today and would like to share my personal views. To be honest, the title and the beginning of this book really attracted me, because at first I just planned to scan the list to see if there were any books worth reading in this section. Basically, most people give up after reading three or four chapters (only signed works), but I read this book for ninety minutes from the time I clicked in to the time I exited. At that time, I had probably read about forty chapters, and then I read it intermittently. (But I haven't voted for one, it's not that I don't want to, but I don't have this account at all) I don't know if you believe it or not, but for a while I really fantasized about this kind of transparent girlfriend in the book, and imagined that such a person existed. Of course, I personally think this may be a bit like schizophrenia. So I was very surprised when I saw this book. I didn't expect that there would be such a book. It's a bit far, so let's bring it back. In fact, the first twenty chapters of the author gave me a good feeling. Although the description is a bit weak, the story itself is interesting, and it has that hazy feeling that is separated by a layer of window paper. However, I think the cohabitation part after Chapter 20 is a bit abrupt. According to normal logic, it would be more reasonable for the male protagonist to wake up in the hospital and then be adopted by the female protagonist's family. It is a bit strange to appear directly at the female protagonist's house. Then there is the part-time job part in Chapter 37. I think the writing here is not very good. I guess the author wants to create a scene where the male protagonist and the female protagonist deepen their relationship. But, there is no need to use a bar job as a background, there are still other options. The rest of the chapter until returning to the countryside is a bit bland, and there are a lot of typos in chapters 50 to 60. It feels like I am trying to catch up on the word count. (I guess the author coded on his mobile phone) This part has gotten much better since I returned to the countryside. It has the same feeling as when I first started reading this book. It feels comfortable to read. This should be the author's first book. The description of the environment and scenes could be richer. Sometimes the transition is too fast. This kind of book is not rebirth or systematic. Everyone should come here to read the atmosphere. I wrote seven hundred words eloquently, which may be a bit redundant. In fact, I thought about whether I should talk about it, but in the end I wrote so many words because I think the author could have written a better book. I will subscribe if it is put on the shelves later. In addition, these words of mine are purely personal opinions. If you agree with some of them, please view these opinions critically. If you disagree, please feel free to delete them. (As an aside, judging from the author's current number of followers and collections, earning rice may be a bit difficult.)

I have read more than 20 chapters and I think it is quite interesting. There is one problem. If the author doesn't like it, you can delete it. That is, do you really call your parents father and mother? I may not be used to calling them father and mother. It's a bit embarrassing. Everything else is fine. Please don't be angry.

It feels like Jiang Xiaomeng is a bit like Qiu Tan's fantasy due to loneliness. As Qiu Tan continues to contact outsiders, Jiang Xiaomeng's appearance will become less and less frequent until she finally disappears. This also shows that Qiu Tan has successfully opened her closed heart.

This article is cruel first and then sweet, and it will be sweet after chapter 20. This is just like adding some salt when making desserts. It will be sweeter if it is used as a foil (laughing)

I feel that the style of this book is similar to that of "The Long Night" by Hotaru Shouma. It's a very good book. I haven't been so immersed in reading it for a long time.

Keep writing, don't stop updating, otherwise you will waste your talent.

The characters are well drawn and the story is good, but I think one of the biggest logical problems and story points is very puzzling. That is, the heroine's family is a single-parent family. Even if the family is rich, even if it is confirmed that Qiutan's character and family have no problems in all aspects, if you want to help him or invest in him, normal logic will not be to directly bring Qiutan into your home, right? After all, he is a foreign male. Even if you add that Qiu Tan's mother knows the heroine's mother, I think this is a relatively big flaw in the story.

After reading the chapter, there are few chapters. Let me tell you a few words to encourage the author's speech When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace.

When I was in high school, I thought about a story about a man who was schizophrenic and fantasized about having a girlfriend, but he didn't know that he was schizophrenic. But then, unfortunately, he was too lazy and unwilling to write it, so he left it alone.

Congratulations on the completion. Let me write a short review for the author. The male protagonist and the female protagonist finally have a pretty good ending, and the postscript brings the whole book to an end. Just like the author said, this is a story of redemption. As for whether it is a light novel or not, I think it doesn't matter. Aren't light novels all light stories? Before this book was put on the shelves, I wrote a piece of content that can be said to be similar to a short review. Judging from the subsequent published content, the author has accepted some opinions. In my personal opinion, it is better than the chapters before it was put on the shelves. However, next I want to pour cold water on the author. This is my personal opinion. After it was released, the content of the story in about twenty chapters was badly written. It gave me the feeling that you were about to say something but didn't say anything at all. Especially in the part after the car accident, the heroine gave me the same feeling as if she was transparent. Maybe the story design is still lacking, but there is nothing I can do about it, I can only watch more. The part after returning to the countryside was better written, both before and after it was released. The characters are more three-dimensional. In the front, even the protagonist is a bit flat. Furthermore, the ending is a little rushed, and some parts can obviously still be written, which is a bit regrettable for readers. As an author, I think your choice is the right one. It's true that you should stop and go when practicing writing. At least it's finished. If you stick to the first book... Generally speaking, you need to read and write more to express the text. The logic of the story needs to be strengthened, because the perspective of the reader and the author are different. Sometimes it's okay to write a little more to explain. It doesn't have to be too brilliant, at least it won't make some readers abandon the book (the author should know which chapter I'm talking about, right?) I'd like to give the author a suggestion. Before you start the next book, you can scan the list. Whether you want to make money or write for fun, it's definitely best to have someone read it. Of course, the most important thing is to like your own story. As your first reader, you must first be able to impress yourself. At this point, I'm looking forward to the new book.

I really like this kind of eloquent writing style, come on 🤭🤭

Sure enough, writing requires talent.

Like the title, does Shen Nong tell me if it looks good? Can I keep it?

It's very interesting. People who are interested in brainwaves will like it.

Postscript? Postscript? ? ? ? ? ?

Finished with flowers ~ Both the male and female protagonists are well written, but it is a pity for the two characters of Jiang Xiaomeng and Ning Hongfeng. Jiang Xiaomeng should be given more background settings?

How should I put it? I didn't see any poisonous points after reading it. The author writes very well. Come on.

It's so commonplace, that girlfriend is invisible

It's easy to guess that Jiang Xiaomeng is just mentally ill. I hope she is gone instead of disappearing.

Ah? Is it over after not watching it for so long? !

The writing is very good. I read it in one sitting in a few hours. It is not the kind of young love nor boring industrial saccharine. There is almost no formulaic sweet plot, but it can make people feel the heroine's concern for the hero. Jiang Xiaomeng's setting is also very interesting. The heroine's redemption for the hero is also comprehensive. I hope the author can write more works in the future. This is a very, very good story 😁

2026 Can you see the first chapter of the new book?

It's 2026, are there really any new books?

Is it over? You haven't finished eating in the past three months, right?