Just Reborn, the Vicious Female Villain Is Chasing Me

How to say it. Personally, I think the first part is okay. The male and female protagonists both have purposes. This will promote the reverse development of the plot. The main line in the front is a bit clear, but the main line in the back feels very routine. Although, this novel sign is daily. But when it reaches chapter 40 or 50, it starts to get a bit sloppy (in my opinion), and I write a lot of discrete things. It is said to make readers feel immersed in it. Yes there is. But starting from Chapter 50, there is nothing strong (conflict, boss, etc.) To promote the development of the plot. There will be a boring and uninteresting reading feeling. (I already have one) So I hope the author will add a few more hidden lines and fulcrums to structure the ups and downs of the plot 😁. This way, it won't be easy to rush into the street🙄

Don't believe me, I've deleted the book and ran away several times. I was just born to defraud investors.

Now I am writing novels about cats and dogs 😁 Chapter 13 really made me laugh. You don't understand the world at all, and you have such a contemptuous school leader. Puppy love is a very common phenomenon. Teachers don't know how many cases they have to deal with every year. Just don't go too far. They basically turn a blind eye and need to be criticized in front of the whole school? What crappy school did you go to? What's more, it's just a secret love letter. Furthermore, the most common thing is to call the parents, but how can the criticism be circulated in the assembly? Has the author been taught by the teacher to vent his grievances in the novel at will? If you are a student underage, I suggest you go back and study hard instead of wasting time. If you are an adult, then I have to laugh at you, the novel can be written like this 😁

We have discussed it with the editor and signed the contract today. Invest with confidence

According to the author's urine, he must enter the palace in three days, and within ten chapters

Don't invest, you're a famous eunuch

I heard that you defrauded a little pouncer of 180 yuan in book promotion fees and ran away?

The city is just the city, and it still engages in the old-fashioned routine of a modern ancient martial arts family, which is inexplicable.

Rubbish book, don't waste your time reading it

You have already written a story about returning to immortality, but you still care about this funny game. There is obviously danger around you, but you still go on an outing and participate in the Hammer School Sports Game so leisurely. If you write a story about campus love and sweet pet, you directly refute history and say that you are a heroine who was watched by a slut.

In addition to the two protagonists, there are other extraordinary people. If you want to see my own method, you can go.

It was okay at the beginning, but it got worse as time went on. I wonder if you really went to college...

The style of studio flow is still the same as ten years ago

Counting the previous ones about "The Young Master of the Divine Soldier", none of them have more than one million words😅️

What are you doing? I'm scratching my head here, but I still haven't finished my thoughts. How about 300,000 words? The author should update quickly!

This book has been made into an AI audiobook. It's quite funny at the beginning, but I'll have to take a closer look at the follow-up. A good book will definitely attract investment, so the author should keep writing. A complex where Xianxia can be seen traveling through the city. It's finished! You can cross-collaborate the characters in this book with the new book! The front part is very good, but you need to read it all and get a health checkup.

Can you please correct the typos and write the sentences more smoothly?

What qualifications does the male protagonist have to ask if immortality is good? The female protagonist is qualified to live forever, and she is not like the male protagonist who lives in panic like a bereaved dog. The female protagonist has a bright future. She will inherit the world's number one magic sect, holding the Tianxian in her mouth and breathing the wind and rain. Can the male protagonist imagine such a life? Summer insects are nothing more than ice.

We start looking for the gunman in Chapter 30, right? It smells like a studio story, and the heroine looks like a different person.

It's really rubbish. The first twenty chapters are okay. What rubbish follows 🙂

When can we confirm the relationship? It's been a long time waiting.

The writing has been pretty good lately, and I have a lot more interactions with the heroine. The plot needs to be strengthened. Come on, author! 🙏

I feel that the author's territory is quite large, mainly focusing on detailed cultivation, fighting, and romance, which is invincible.

It's a relatively dull story. The plot at the beginning is quite surprising. In the middle and later stages, starting a company is a bit of a mess and boring. In fact, at the end, I don't want to expand the world of immortality. It's a good ending. There are still a few holes left to fill. The first is the identity of the heroine. Why did she directly soul travel? Modern, where is the soul of the modern female protagonist? The second is why the male protagonist went back ten years ago, and what exactly happened ten years later that made the male protagonist go to the world of immortality. The third is that it has been hinting that there is a connection with the world of immortality, but in the end there was no comparable opponent, which is a pity.

Did I read that right? She has the title of Shura Field, but she has a single female protagonist.

How can a single female protagonist be in Shura Field? ? ? Stock trading articles are given to women?