The Heroine Comes to Kill Me in Real Life, You Tell Me a Game?

What a great book title. It's written as a suture monster. The plot behind it seems to be really twisted. It's a cool story, but there's no cool plot. It's about cultivating immortals. It's a mess. It's completely out of context.

The subject matter is okay, but the details are not. I think the plots of "kicking the dog", "being meated" and "blocking the door" from the 20th chapter to the 33rd chapter are relatively unsuccessful. The reasons are as follows: 1. This plot has nothing to do with the main plot. Although it is useful in shaping the character, it creates an impulsive and superficial character for the male protagonist. It may supplement the background of the male protagonist, but it makes the whole text have a certain sense of fragmentation 2. This plot has a certain sense of fragmentation. It's not "cool" at all. The "kicking the dog" at the beginning may still have the characteristics of "pretending to be slapped in the face", but the plot that follows is purely redundant I personally write this paragraph just to watch a movie, such as a horror movie. The male protagonist is forced to remain calm after seeing the scary scenes, while the female protagonist disagrees and snickers. It will be much better. There is also the money problem of the male protagonist. To be honest, I feel that this is difficult to deal with. Lottery tickets are okay, but they cannot appear in large numbers because this will lead to bad values. You can also open a pharmaceutical factory or something, but you can refer to Lin Fan's method of making money in "What to Do If You Suddenly Become an Immortal". However, I personally think that with the author's current writing skills, it would save a lot of problems by directly writing a story about having money to dismantle the second generation. There is no need to deal with money and other issues. He can help his parents with their illnesses, thank them for their daily lives, take a look at the mountains with legends of immortals, and compile some insights after seeing these legends. There is no problem in hundreds of chapters. In it, you can add some old fortune tellers and the like to lay the groundwork for the final ending (such as pointing out the woman's human experience, the man's possible reincarnation, and the origin of the earth). I want to write everything I said myself🐶

Damn it, I'm not clean anymore, I actually charged money

Why does the plot of this book become more and more twisted as I read it, and I don't know what it is about at all?

Why are the next two extras exactly the same, which makes me speechless

Hello author! Although you are very disappointed in the back, your expectations have collapsed and the plot has collapsed. But I want to tell you. I recently found a book on Liumao. The beginning is exactly the same as yours, but the name has changed. Do you want to read it? The title is "Before I Die, I Forcibly Kissed the Demon Empress" 🙂

I'm a psychopath, no one should know

The writing is okay, but there are too few updates. To be honest, this is the first time that I have been so constipated when an old book is reopened and updated. In fact, the old eunuch cannot always blame his grades. When will he be able to write one or two books in a down-to-earth manner, and he will slowly get better.

The road has become narrower, and I have started to take the idol route. Being an idol through time travel is the most boring thing.

The female protagonist is a cultivator and enters the entertainment industry. It's really cool. Already dead from poison

A perfect start, now turned into a piece of shit

The plot of the previous book was messed up halfway through, and I didn't know what I was talking about at the hasty ending. The only difference in content in this book is the name, and the update is so slow. I really don't understand that there are so many people helping the author to clean up the ground.

What kind of bullshit did you write?

I'm really speechless. Have a good time traveling through the text. Turn it into an idol novel. A normal person has seen an NPC travel through time more than once. Shouldn't he be thinking about how to travel back and forth between the two worlds with the NPC? What kind of system are you working on? As the game becomes stronger, reality will also become stronger. The full score opening is written in a pile of shi

I'd better go and read Little Hemiao honestly. You're full of flaws. You just changed the names of the male and female protagonists in the last book. It's boring.

I think it would be better to be more grateful to real urban life. After all, the highlight of this book is that the heroine of the game travels through real life. Writing too much content in the game feels a bit like selling sheep over others.

It's really 6. The male and female protagonists change their names and write another book. Earning two cents for each material really makes a living.

After reading it for two days, I felt a little dazed. I rarely read novels, especially cool ones. I estimate that I have read less than a dozen novels in my life, even though it has not been long in my life. I just feel like a dream. Sometimes I also fantasize about having the same life as Xu Fan, but what is fake will always be fake. Who doesn't like a beautiful, strong, beautiful, confident and shy woman? The laws of our universe stipulate that this is not destined to be a world of cultivating immortals, and such a thing is ultimately impossible. Because it is impossible, I regret the loss. Perhaps the novel ended too hastily, or perhaps it was lamenting the impossibility. In fantasizing day after day, you will only fail to observe the beauty in life, and you will fail to live up to the happiness of this life. It may be good that the laws of physics govern everything and do not change according to human will. The novel may also be a reflection of personal fantasy. I just hope that everyone will not forget to live a responsible life while fantasizing. After all, the world is also very beautiful.

Why do you think that a witch who trained as a mortal and became an immortal is a stupid fool who doesn't understand anything? Has she stayed in one place for thousands of years without contacting people?

What the hell, a good daily life has turned into a time-travel idol drama, with the heroine acting in it. . . . . . . .

The daily writing in the past was good and looked pretty good, but suddenly it started to look like toilet paper when the heroine entered the entertainment industry to act.

There are only two questions: will it be a single female protagonist and will it be a eunuch? As long as these two points are taken, I will definitely keep watching.

Are there any other books of the same type as this one?

Thank you for accompanying me with this book, even if it's watery sometimes 😁😁😁😁

There are all kinds of force, and joining the entertainment industry is very toxic. The male protagonist has a cuckold habit. When the boss asked you to join, you mentioned your girlfriend and wife. When you join the company and face the female protagonist who wants to pursue your nominal girlfriend, the male protagonist's reaction is to encourage her to chase the called brother-in-law and deserve to be happy.

The title of the book is "Vegetative: My Soul Leaked from Tokyo" Beautiful women are also good at writing beautiful books. God is pinching her neck to feed her, I am really envious of her. I also wrote a game-plus-reality double-crossing book, which I use to promote books!

This is boring. Forcing the protagonist to not follow the practice is very counter-intellectual. Even if he gives an excuse that he is too slow to practice, or that he cannot practice, it is more reasonable. But the author is just afraid that the previous book was about cultivating immortals, so he forcibly did not write it in this book. On the contrary, it is very intellectual. When a person in modern society encounters such an opportunity to practice immortality, he will do it by selling the earth. Anyway, this is it, it is not natural at all, and it is uncomfortable.

After reading Chapter 66, what do you think about letting the female devil invade the entertainment industry?

I feel okay. I feel bad at cultivating immortals, but I feel good at giving out candy.

There are too many flaws, I'm too lazy to complain, bye bye