Douluo: This Time We Will Rewrite Our Destiny

(The first line congratulates the author on his surprise resurrection after three months) This article is the best Dou Er fanfic I have ever read on Qidian. I have read many fan stories about Huo Yuhao's Rebirth at Qidian, but I have read almost none of them. I have been thinking, what kind of Huo Yuhao can make up for the regrets in my heart as a reader? What kind of Huo Yuhao should be who he was in the first half of the original book and who he wanted to be? I think, first of all, the power of freedom. He is the proud son of heaven and the son of luck in the plane. He cannot be controlled by the Tang Shenwang. The mainstream of Qidian Douluo fans is anti-Tang, and they are basically defeated. This goes without saying. The second is concentration. Huo Yuhao's own mother died due to his father's lack of concentration, which became his lifelong regret. How could he be as sentimental as his father? If Huo Yuhao is still Huo Yuhao, his partners will only have two situations: single female protagonist and no cp. The end is redemption. Huo Yuhao may have gained a lot in his life in Dou 2, such as unparalleled strength, close comrades, and respectable teachers... Tang San has no father or mother in the setting, and he grew up in the competition between sects. After time traveling, his father is useless and his teacher is cowardly and incompetent. Therefore, he is ruthless and ungrateful, and his intelligence is almost demonic. Although Huo Yuhao had deep-seated hatred for being mistreated by the White Tiger Duke Palace, he was a child who grew up in the love of his mother. After his mother passed away, he met Tianmeng, Bingdi, and several teachers who taught and cared for him. His character was gentle (even cowardly in some things). Such character traits made him lose a lot when he faced the schemes of Tang Shenwang. His love, his choice, his freedom... He couldn't even choose whether to hate his father or save his mother, just because the God King needed the sharpest knife. On the basis of anti-Tang Dynasty, the most important thing Dou Er fan fiction should do is to redeem this boy who grew up in an environment where love and hate are intertwined. Obviously, this fan has done all of these very well. Huo Yuhao has always been that kind and clever boy, just like his mother taught him, just like what Da Huo wanted him to grow up to be. He has teachers who love and care for him, friends who cherish each other, and a lover who supports each other. He can also freely choose his own ambition: to create another path for the soul beast... Everything Da Huo wanted to do, but in the end was not perfect or even accomplished. Even Wang Dong has a good path, and it is appropriate that the author uses the auspicious beast as the heroine. In the original work, in addition to the fact that the martial soul fusion has no connection and looks like it was made up, it is also obvious that Wang Dong's personality changed significantly before and after he recovered his daughter's body. The boy's Wang Dong is arrogant and reserved, while the girl's Wang Dong is somewhat forward-looking and sentimental. Their relationship in the original work is indeed very touching, but I think if a love makes people blind and unconfident, then the love itself may not be suitable enough. After changing the CP, Wang Dong and Xiao Hongchen unexpectedly reached a delicate balance. Wang Donghui is willing to change his cultivation path for the sake of the team, and Xiao Hongchen is also willing to give up his future and spend a lot of money. The two are so similar and cherish each other. And Rui Shou finally had the ending he deserved with his fate. But no matter what the cp is, Wang Dong and Rui Shou are different from traditional pendant male protagonists. In the original work, T3 integrated the two very charismatic female protagonists Wang Donger and Wang Qiuer created in the first half of the book into Tang Wutong, a father's tool man without any personal characteristics. Let Dou 2's heroine become the second most criticized aspect of this novel. Fortunately, Wang Dong in this article gave birth to her own flesh and blood. She is no longer a scabbard, but a newly forged sword. She is not Tang Xiaoqi, not Tang Wutong, but the sword of revolution that stabs the powerful. The last thing I want to say is what I think is the most touching passage in this article. In the two chapters "No Longer Leading to My Future" and "The Day of Harvest", Da Huo said to Xiao Huo, "The price I gained this ability was the loss of my teacher, so you don't have to pay any price for this." Just like a popular Internet meme, "The first child you raise as an adult is yourself." I think at that moment, he finally forgave the boy who could only watch his teacher disappear like sand between his fingers, and then gradually lose the power to control his destiny. The charm of fan fiction is generally like this. When there is no second chance in life, the characters in the book still have the opportunity to grow flesh and blood. Huo Yuhao, continue to grow in the love of readers. This time, no one can stop you.

(I want to post it if I follow it from QQ Reading!) It can be said that this is one of the best books I have ever read in Peerless Tang Sect fan fiction. First of all, the plot line is different from other fanfics that directly go up to destroy Shrek. This one takes away the obvious logic and exposes the hidden dangers behind the abyss. What Huo Yuhao did in the Empire of the Sun and Moon is also different from other fanfics. It is a great move that transcends the country, especially when the soul master and the soul beast sign a contract. I really can't think of a better move than this. Seeing the scene of the soul beast and the soul master embracing each other makes me feel like it is like the Beast Control Sect! Secondly, there is the emotional line. I will not talk about the main CP. I don't think it is described too much. On the contrary, it is more difficult for a male author to see this kind of mutual love in the writing of a male author. What touches me the most is the secondary CP. The pair of CPs, Xiao Hongchen and Wang Dong, are simply treasures from heaven. I can't find a more suitable pair than this pair. There is no rigid pairing, but companionship from childhood to adulthood. The family, friendship, love, teacher-student relationship, and family and country relationships in the plot are all full and vivid. I really like this world. Among so many collapsed world lines, our Yuhao is not lucky, but he is definitely the one who least wants to be disappointed. Every fanfic is a small world. I sincerely hope that they in this world will have their wishes come true and reach the other side.

I came from Q. Com and just ordered it. I support the author. Here are the comments from Q. Faced with the inexplicable tragedies in the original work, the author did not criticize it. Instead, he picked up the pen in his hand and carefully sewed up everyone's wounds and took care of them meticulously. His dissatisfaction with King Tang Shen is not narrated, but revealed between the lines, like a child innocently asking why the king doesn't wear clothes. He didn't ask questions or scold us all the way, but he changed fate and told us that there was a better solution. Other novels are fun to read, but this book shows warmth and expresses redemption. In the coldness of modern times, I am very grateful to the author for bringing this warmth

I've read a lot of Huo Yuhao's rebirth or time travel stories, let me tell you what I like As for the female protagonist, most authors find it difficult to reasonably arrange the emotional lines of even two female protagonists, not to mention multiple female protagonists. Most of them write the male protagonist as a Biaozi who wants to build a memorial arch. He is affectionate and sentimental at the same time. Leaving aside Tang San's methods, Qiu'er is Yuhao's destined person. They are connected purely through the guidance of fate. It is more reasonable to arrange the emotional lines because of the fate. Can the combination of the power of fate and the son of luck give birth to an existence similar to the son of nature. Regarding contract theory, in my opinion, a once-and-for-all solution is not advisable (such as separating soul beasts from humans. What is even more disgusting is that some protagonists do this before solving the problem of soul rings and soul bones after becoming gods, ruining others' path to becoming gods). Balance is the right choice. Of course, contract theory still has shortcomings, such as the hundred thousand year soul. The beast can provide two hundred thousand year soul rings and two hundred thousand year soul bones. I think it is unreasonable because of the problem of occupying the same soul bones and the arrangement of soul skills. I think it is reasonable to upgrade the soul rings out of thin air, which requires a process similar to destiny. Otherwise, the existence of the contracted soul beast will be very low. After the contract is over, there will be no soul beast, and there will be no partners. Regarding Wang Dong, the arrangement of the God-given martial soul of Butterfly, the Goddess of Light, is almost meaningless. If the God-given martial soul requires the blood of the soul beast, what will happen to the Seraphim? The emotional line shows that Xiao Hongchen and Wang Dong have not made any obvious progress yet. Regarding expectations, I hope the author can polish the next part, such as the inheritance of angel martial spirits. I think Douluo Continent is really useless without it. After all, this kind of martial arts has absolute restraint on evil spirit masters. You can consider adding a setting that angel martial arts can purify evil spirits. Note that it is a martial spirit. Orange also needs to arrange scenes, after all, her military ability is very strong. Whether the Snow Emperor can accept the Ice God's inheritance and protect the far north will not only affect the soul beasts, but more importantly, the living environment. The Emperor's auspicious beast and the Silver Dragon King, the Golden Dragon King and the Silver Dragon King, as the half-bodies of the Dragon God, have character flaws and are not suitable for leading soul beasts. The Emperor's auspicious beast, which carries the power of destiny and has experience in human society, becomes a dragon god and is more powerful than the old dragon god and is more suitable for the soul beast as a whole rather than focusing on the dragon clan. As the core of life, the golden ancient tree should not be used by a single force, and Tang Hao and A Yin should also be dealt with.

After reading online articles for so many years, I have covered all kinds of exciting stories, but when I come into contact with Dou Er again, the cool breeze blowing and the drifting world of mortals will still emerge, and the hidden youthful feelings are gradually recalled, and the slightly excited eyes reflect the past: In the evening, the sun sets in the west, the sky is dim but not yellow, and the spring is cold. The slightly cool breeze gently caressed the lush trees and slowly passed through the window. The young man felt the cool breeze blowing on his face and the smell of red dust and fireworks, which was very comfortable. In such an environment, he sat there quietly, his movements were subtle, but his eyes were full of childish curiosity. He looked and looked at the new world shown to the boy. But the boy was a boy after all, and he soon fell into it. The world was beautiful and magnificent, everything was different, and the artistic conception was engraved in the deepest part of his soul, like nectar. And now I feel again that in the most beautiful golden years of life, the changes three years after three years can be described as a vicissitudes of life, things have changed and people have changed. When I read Dou Er again, I experienced the same artistic conception. A person's change is really great, it is subtle. Sometimes you know that you have changed, but you have no real understanding, so I am reading the same fan to find the artistic conception and make up for my regrets. Of course, I also support the anti-Tang Dynasty. So, let me give you my feelings about this book! —— That world has regrets, and I also have regrets about that world. I want to make up for the regrets of the world and my regrets. So, let's do it again at the place where the dream begins! This time, there are no regrets, no tears, only smiles. This book is very good, but everyone's regrets are different, so for me it's a fly in the ointment. Of course, this needs to be solved by myself, and I will solve it myself. Nowadays, the only Dou Er fans that I highly recognize are this book and the early stage of the book next door: Restart. Great, come on!

Tang should really give a thumbs up to Teacher Mu Fengchun. The first time he came into contact with Douluo was through the comics written by Teacher Mu Fengchun.

I don't understand why Xiao Hongchen and Wang Donger were paired together. Maybe the author wrote this fanfic just to make up for his regrets while reading the book? I dare to say that 90% of people ran away immediately after seeing the introduction. There is no other meaning. I just feel that without this pair of CPs, the performance of this book will definitely reach several levels.

The synopsis of the group portrait of a female protagonist makes me feel sick to my stomach. I don't often read books with single female protagonists, so I really don't understand. It's okay if you only write about single female protagonists, but the original female protagonist? I don't understand why you forcefully get together with others.

Blood gushed out from the Shaohao fist! The sword soul and body are separated! Suo Tongzhang is infertile for thousands of years! Qiankun Wenqing's murder and father-in-law's love! Qiankun Wenqing's suicide, father's kindness! The Buddha's Light and Buddha of the Ninth Soul Skill has arrived! God cannot interfere in the human world, be flexible and have double standards!

It is rare to see a fan who carefully creates the character, and it is still a Douluo fan at the starting point. If this kind of work can be considered poisonous, then some people might as well die early.

Chapter One "Weird" World Tang San found that everything around him was strange, beyond his understanding: metal pipes could produce water with just a flick of the hand, and round objects in the kitchen could easily emit flames. The strangest thing is undoubtedly the "crystal panel" in the living room, which can actually display various images. Tang San couldn't understand all of this, but he could feel that to the people around him, these were common sense. He didn't dare to reveal his identity as a time traveler, and naturally he didn't dare to ask questions, so he could only observe and explore in secret. Chapter 2 The establishment of the Tang Sect failed Tang San's ideal of revitalizing the Tang Sect failed. He originally wanted to find a blacksmith shop to build his first hidden weapon from another world. Unexpectedly, when I walked through the streets, there was no blacksmith shop. Instead, I saw silverware shops on several busy streets. Unfortunately, they couldn't meet my requirements at all. Fortunately, through unremitting efforts, he finally found a traditional blacksmith shop. The advertisement said that they could customize according to user needs. However, when the other party heard that Tang San wanted to forge it himself and refused outsiders to observe, he immediately thought he was here to cause trouble and kicked him out directly. "A guy who looks down on others with dog eyes." In Tang San's opinion, the people in the blacksmith shop treated him so meanly and dismissively, and they already had a plan to kill him. Unfortunately, he didn't have any hidden weapons on hand, and he didn't even have the materials to use hidden weapons, so he had to retreat temporarily. Chapter 3 The Way to Death "I didn't expect that there are so many people in this world who have the way to die." Tang San said secretly. When he went shopping for groceries today, an aunt snatched the last spicy rabbit head from the cooked vegetable shop with him. Not only did she mock him, but she even mocked him: "What age are you? A young man doesn't even know how to scan a QR code to pay." Tang San recognized that aunt and lived in the building next door to theirs. It is not convenient to do it during the day, but after dinner, the aunt will go downstairs to do some "square dance". That was Tang San's best chance, the best chance to kill with a hidden weapon. He was absolutely sure that no one would find out that he did it. Without evidence, who can say that he committed the murder? Although he does not have mechanical concealed weapons, he can still use the Tang Sect's hidden weapons. He went downstairs with the fruit knife at home and carefully hid behind a private car. When Auntie approached, the fruit knife in Tang San's hand suddenly flew out. Tang Sect's hidden weapon technique ranks tenth, Bat Wing Reincarnation. Although he has only been practicing for a short period of time and the fire level is still shallow, Tang Sect's hidden weapons cannot be evaded by such things. Chapter 4 Finale The Stupid Murderer "You dare to arrest me, but you don't know if you dare to make a bet with me!" "What nonsense!" Tang San shouted while struggling, but no matter how strong he was, two policemen each held down one of his arms and stuffed him into the police car. As for the bet? What do they do when they are policemen? When they are full and full, go make a bet with a criminal suspect? The leading police chief exhaled: In all his years as a detective, this is the first time he has seen someone so stupid. This is almost the easiest murder case he has ever handled. Not only were there fingerprints on the murder weapon, but the young man was very sneaky and hiding around when he committed the murder. I don't know who he was trying to deceive, but he didn't know that it was all clearly captured by the camera. Chapter 5 (continued) Prison Storm Tang San limped to the glass and sat down, looking at Tang Hao and A Yin on the other side. He has been in jail for a month and his life is not good. On the first day of imprisonment, Oma's leader, a tall and strong man, wanted to give him a blow. After he knocked him down, the other party became furious and beat him up. Then he ravaged him severely. There are different teachings: The chrysanthemums are broken, the ground is covered with wounds, and your smile has turned yellow... Tang San endured the humiliation and took the opportunity a few days later while eating, using chopsticks as a hidden weapon, and attempted to attack Mr. Oma, but was subdued by the prison guard. During this period, he almost had his hand broken by a baton because of the attack on the prison guard. He was then thrown into a solitary confinement cell. "Mistress, please reform in prison and don't cause trouble. After you come out..." Ah Yin was still talking on the other side of the glass. But Tang San thought of the humiliation he had suffered in recent days, his eyes flashed with hatred, and he said in a hateful voice: "I would rather have broken jade than complete tiles!" "Xiao San!" Ah Yin was horrified when he heard this. When he was about to speak, he was so anxious and angry that a mouthful of blood spurted out, and he fell to the ground unconscious. Tang Hao helped his wife up and stared at Tang San through the glass, his eyes almost bursting with fire. "You, you evil beast! From now on, I, Tang Hao, will only think that I don't have a son like you!" Tang San's expression remained as usual, as Xuantian Baolu recorded: Mount Tai collapsed in front of him but his appearance remained unchanged, and the Yellow River reached its top without being surprised! A true master of hidden weapons always has a calm mind! Chapter 6 (continued) True ending: The murderer was brought to justice "Pa!" Many years later, with the sound of a gunshot, everyone around him breathed a sigh of relief. Some people sighed: The murderer was finally brought to justice. No one would have thought that for a young man who was imprisoned for murder, his conscientiousness and obedience during the labor camp were all a disguise. What is even more unbelievable is that after he was released from prison, he would wait for an opportunity to poison the prison, resulting in the death of many people. It is reported that the poisoner once uttered arrogant words at the scene, claiming that the prison was a gathering place for degenerates, and that he was doing justice for heaven. The impact of this case was so bad that it shocked the whole country. The task force traveled to many places, and after more than a month, they finally wiped out the criminal gang "Tangmen", and Tang Mou, the mastermind of the prison poisoning case, was arrested and brought to justice. According to reports, in compliance with the death penalty order issued by the Supreme People's Court, the local people's court has executed Tang Mou, a criminal who endangers public security in dangerous ways, releases dangerous substances, and is an intentional murderer in accordance with the law.

Every time I see the three characters Miss Qiu, I am surprised because they sound the same as Miss Qiu. The idea is very powerful, and it has benefited me a lot from changing my account and writing this book.

Please, book friends, can anyone recommend a fanfic to me? I really only found this one that suits my taste. It contains the original novel Huo, a different life, and the important friends have not changed (they don't like transgender), and they don't have a harem randomly. The logic and IQ are all online, and the protagonist is very strong and very enjoyable. Does anyone have similar recommendations for peerless fanfics? 😫 (It's not limited to the starting point, it's okay if the software is not finished)

Your Majesty the Supreme Author returns today to his faithful starting point! 😍

A newbie is writing a book, so I hope you will leave comments! Single-player really kills the passion for writing (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )

Great work, this is one of the best Douluo fics I have seen. The plot is not laggy, the characters are well drawn, and the combat power has not collapsed yet. It is not like the protagonists and stallions in other fics just see a girl It has logic and also has its own innovation One of the few good Douluo fics Come on, author, don't be affected by those comments in the comments that always let people start a harem

The most comfortable Dou Er fan I have ever seen. I really like this kind of delicate depiction of the characters' emotions. Throughout the story, both the plot direction and the relationships between the characters are very smooth. Especially the handling of the supporting characters in the original work is amazing. It is really touching to see that the supporting characters that I like in the original work are not symbolized and can be described in a corresponding and realistic manner. As a fan of the drama, it is really touching to see such a level of detail.

With tears in my eyes, I was in troubled youth ten years ago. 😭 Sanjue shattered the Dog Training Valley. This self-reconciliation made me cry so much.

The relationship between Wang Donger and Xiao Hongchen is quite good. When Huo Yuhao used the power of the Eye of Eternity to restart, he returned to the past to start the second week of the journey. At the same time, Wang Donger also had a crush on Xiao Hongchen. Wang Donger also used the method of telling the truth to achieve the purpose of expulsion before being expelled from Shrek Academy. At the same time, Huo Yuhao took Wang Donger and Chi Qiu to the Sun and Moon Empire, and the Wang Donger of the Sun and Moon Empire route was also the rarest and rarest. Most of them were Wang Donger of the Shrek Academy route. Wang Donger in the second week was also completely relieved. The emotional line of Wang Donger and Xiao Hongchen was to fight side by side and talk to each other and depend on each other. It's the best emotional line, so there is a reason why Huo Yuhao doesn't like Wang Dong'er. In addition, if he likes Wang Dong'er again, doing so will be no different from Tang Shenwang. The danger of the Sun and Moon Empire route is very high. At least he can gain freedom, and when Huo Yuhao was still in Shrek Academy in the first week, he was said to be used as a The disadvantages of preserving the "honor" include the teachers and disciples who took Mingdetang away during the exchange period and repaid the kindness of Shrek Academy. Therefore, Huo Yuhao in the second episode has no favor or relationship with Shrek Academy. The second episode is also a new beginning for the three of them. If possible, the author will write as much about Xiao Hongchen and Wang Donger.

A pure love story about a single female protagonist in a fantasy novel may seem boring at first glance, but when you think about it carefully, it turns out to be a good idea. Even if it is a fantasy story like Douluo, with bloodline/realm/martial soul fusion and other settings as the background, the female protagonist can definitely support each other on the road of cultivation as well as the male protagonist, unlike urban novels that are limited by physical and social factors and can only become a pendant vase behind the invincible male protagonist. Collecting stamps and vases is only for fun, and even wealthy men in reality can do it; these days, true love has to be a long-lasting love, a single-minded relationship, and a deep love between husband and wife. As far as the Douluo fandom is concerned, writing the romance well and further improving the arc of a single heroine can create a greater gap with the original work than flattening multiple heroines.

1. The characters are full-bodied and the descriptions are more three-dimensional 2. The writing style is much better than that of Tang. I praise it very much. The characters are flesh and blood. And there are very few typos (I have read the original work, there are many typos, and the impression is poor) 3. Hao x Qiu CP praises it! So sweet www. Their interaction is the kind of interaction that people in serious love would have. It is not artificial at all, and there is no stomachache medicine (this type will collapse if it is not written well, which is very annoying) The author must also do a lot of experiments every day, hahahahaha. Hurry and get the saved manuscript (knock on the bowl. Jpg)! In addition: A certain Tang Dynasty really doesn't have a house. He can't write novels without offering sacrifices. The same plots are used repeatedly. Everything is Tangmen and Tangmen. It's annoying to watch! It's so outrageous to tear my daughter apart, I feel disgusting, so disgusting! Nausea!

Is it still possible to win the Easter match after 26 years?

Update in the early morning

The conciseness and sense of anticipation in Chapters 1-10 of this book made me vaguely excited like reading the book "Huo Yuhao in Ten Thousand Years Later". Lao Huo burned everything just to start over again, Xin Huo brought Qiu'er and Dong'er together to nourish him, and Xin Huo had Qiu'er's blessing in the early stage... It's all very exciting. After reading Chapter 10, I couldn't help but want to see how Xin Huo shocked the sun and the moon with his incredible soul mentor talent. Then I saw the "Group Portraits"... It turns out that the rewriting of fate in the title of the book is not only the fate of Huo Yuhao, but also the fate of the "Group Portraits". The whole thing is very detailed and there is no detailed plot, so "Huo Yuhao is the main character" has become just a slogan. 200,000 words before it was put on the shelves. After it was polished to the sun and the moon, Xinhuo was like a headless fly, with the main line blurred. The plot is too bland and fails to sustain the sense of expectation given by the first ten chapters. The so-called group portrait, it can be said that no character is outstanding, including Xin Huo. Although we rushed to the 40th chapter and started the 30th chapter competition, except for the Shrek scene, the other plots including the auction were barely interesting. The first order of 254 can reflect these. Then why are the first few chapters so strong, and why are they not so good in the later chapters? 1. The entrance plot is not interesting and is as boring as a running account. Designing a "calculation" plot and saying that Xin Huo is a soul genius is just like solving a "problem" in junior high school class and saying that he is a mathematical genius, which makes people laugh. There is also the evil soul master villain. Instead of writing about this kind of wild dog on the roadside that will be forgotten after reading it, it is better to write more about how Xin Huo improved himself in the academy and showed off with high quality. 2. In the plot of the competition, at least there is a lot of work, and ordinary skills are of no use to Todoroki. 3. Lao Huo and Xin Huo were cut apart with a "dao mark". Lao Huo's ambition to burn everything just for a comeback was not passed on to Xin Huo. Xinhuo is like a newborn, a little emotionally fragmented. 4. "There are many poisonous points" (only analyzed from the perspective of writing, not involving my personal preferences): 1. When the protagonist's character is not clear enough, the space is given to the supporting characters (Xiao Hongchen, Big Goose Wangdong, and even Chi Qiu). The threesome and the idea of ​​highlighting Xiao Hongchen made the early plot more difficult. 2. Wang Dong assigned Xiao Hongchen to give away his daughter. Douluo fanfics already have many readers who like multiple female protagonists. For them, even if Xiaomeng is not accepted, it is unacceptable for Wang Dong to push it to others. 3. Don't be distracted by settings. A. In Douluo fanfics, try not to let the strength of the supporting character overshadow the protagonist, even if the supporting character is the heroine. I set a three-attribute extreme for Chi Qiu Er, but Xin Huo didn't have much sense of existence. In comparison, Lao Huo's efforts were quite strong. In addition, the Sun and Moon Empire is too indifferent to the ultimate attributes, and the ultimate martial spirits of Xinhuo and Chiqiu are very mediocre. In Chapter 80, Lin Jiayi said, "When you entered school, you had a trunk bone that was 100,000 years old." His words were as plain as if you carried a suitcase when you entered school. Sorry, the 100,000-year-old soul bone is in ruins in our college. Even if you, a second-level soul master, appear, you can't make my emotions fluctuate at all! B. The fourth-level soul guide that Xinhuo designed when he was only a third-level soul engineer actually has the potential to be modified and upgraded to a ninth-level soul guide. Whenever you say he is a prisoner, I won't say anything. When talking about upgrading later, changing the core array is OK, just like saying: If you want to convert this will-o'-the-wisp into a high-speed train, you only need to change the engine. The setting is naturally subject to the author's guidance, but other soul masters didn't respond at all to this point, which is really ridiculous. C. Xinhuo's strength is too exaggerated. Except for the power of fate, there is not much difference from the original work. Xinhuo has no actual combat power, so he needs to have a sense of presence in the two-on-five plot. With Xinhuo's mental detection, anyone can do one-on-five (the Hongchen brother and sister don't have five rings in this plot). In the competition, the level 30 second-level soul master faces the level 68 sixth-level soul emperor Ma Xiaotao. You also threatened that you were sure of taking care of Ma Xiaotao, which made me think you were a prisoner. Finally, everyone has their own preferences for radish and greens, it's true. No matter what, there will be readers who are interested. The flow of Douluo fanfics is okay. QQ's Douluo Tianmu streaming of those studio-assembly-line bad books can also steadily harvest 500-800 first subscriptions at Qidian. Recently, Qidian has released a Douluo Peerless fanfic with 4,000 first subscriptions. If this book had done well and brought in considerable profits, the author would not have sat in a coffin doing sit-ups and written 1 million words intermittently for more than two years. This is also torture for readers who like this book. This reminds me of a certain book that I liked around 2017. I stopped updating it in 2017. Until 2025, I still read this book to see if it would have an ending. Unfortunately, it will always stay in those chapters. The author finds time to finish writing "Douluo: This Time I Want to Change Destiny" and say goodbye.

After reading so many human novels, the ones I don't like are the ones that don't update at the end. If the author is really too busy, he might consider updating weekly. . . Don't stop updating 😭😭😭

The author must continue writing. Currently, the fandom that suits my taste the most, I can do anything, Oh Nei should 😭😭😭

Is it possible for the author to update during the May Day holiday 😭 (Here I also recommend a Huo Qiu fanfic that is still being updated for those who are still paying attention to this book: Douluo: Starting from the Ice and Fire Eyes to Reversing the Future, Huo Qiu Line , the characters are not OOC, there is no sex in the harem, the three views are correct, the world line is correct, and there is no blood. The author is currently updating steadily, and it has 1.6 Million words ➕, it is close to the end, it is highly recommended, and it is not a loss if you invest in it. It is one of the few good Douluo fan stories except this one!

Come back for an update, I want to see Xiaodong

My monthly pass was lost here, I hope it can be revived

The soul is back~ The soul is back~