Cross-Border Pass

There has been a book shortage recently. I have read many books but have no desire to continue reading. Suddenly I discovered this one, which is very suitable for my taste 🤓

It's time for the author to update more. I still want to read it.

What's even better is that whether it's the setting or the plot, the talent of my protagonist can be explained step by step. It's very good so far, but a little more enthusiasm would make it passionate. It's a new book to read.

Those attracted by the Silver Alliance raised their paws

I thought I had found a good book, but I still didn't like it after reading it... As expected, I still like the lone wolf type Gou Dao... Nothing else, this book is very well written. The setting is also very rigorous, but I don't like the fact that in this type of book, the protagonist chooses to join the officialdom when there are choices. If I didn't have a choice, I wouldn't be that disgusted. Otherwise, I would feel poisonous (I think it's poisonous). The front part is really good and interesting... Ugh

Good guy, this book is really worth mentioning 👏

? ? Six comments, 200,000 words, just a reward of silver? ?

Are decades of memories in vain? When something happens, I start to shrink back. Nothing adult-like. The protagonist is just a child, so don't add the setting of decades of clear memory. The characters are inconsistent and uncomfortable to watch. The author might as well delete the setting of decades of clear memories! Just change it to fuzzy memory. If you can't express the feeling of an adult, don't add this setting.

It was quite good at first, but when I read around Chapter 70, I discovered a problem, or maybe it was my feeling, that the description of the Yuan Realm was too dry, and the same goes for the cultivation system. How can I put it, it's just not very attractive, it doesn't have the feeling of a mysterious super world, and the plot always revolves around a small area.

After reading the previous chapters, the protagonist is a kid who has not graduated from junior high school?

The first part is quite good, but the second part is too dull. The protagonist goes to class every day, and the customs and customs of the different world are not developed. It is very thin, lacks the main line and hooks to attract people to read, and it is also watery. The amount of information is too little. The author still needs to work harder.

The writing is very good and comfortable to read.

It feels good from the beginning. The setting of the protagonist's age and personality changes are reasonable and clever. The 24-hour mandatory assessment, the unpredictable life and death of traveling through the world, and the setting of having to travel every 7 days also create an environment where the protagonist constantly faces challenges and overcomes them. It makes people want to continue reading to see how the protagonist overcomes obstacles and gains growth. But after the recent chapters joined the official organization, they felt inconsistent and watery. I am not against joining an official organization. After all, it is easy to enjoy the shade with a big tree at your back. However, the main character is a junior high school student who has not graduated from junior high school. Joining the official team as a team member is very inconsistent. It cannot be said that after the inspection, the character and mind are like adults and he will be treated as an adult, especially when this junior high school student was a little gangster not long ago and just suddenly became enlightened. And after joining the official team, the protagonist basically has no independent actions. He just follows the organization's schedule, reports to the leader when encountering incidents, and relies on the boss to learn and grow step by step. In this way, the protagonist's daily life and appearance look very watery. This is completely different from the sense of danger described at the beginning. I hope that the Yuanjie stronghold will collapse as soon as possible so that the protagonist can regain the ability to move freely and face dangers and challenges again.

I prefer this style. Although when I read it, I felt that the book style was similar to that of some big writers, but it had its own style. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's good, it's very common in daily life, but it doesn't help with practice. It looks very, um, very watery, not very good-looking.

Shennong tastes grass, which is currently a good grass and non-toxic

There are currently 80 chapters in total, and I have read more than 60. If I don't jump, I can at least be on the Hall of Fame (starting with 3 stars). After reading novels for so many years, I rarely have the urge to stay up all night to read them! (Currently 9-4-04:05)

Judging from the author's way of writing, he should have switched from physical writing to online writing, right?

Updated three days ago? Is this cut? I guess this million dollar reward is wasted... With this money, I might as well buy myself something delicious

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ The good points are that the author's writing style is not bad, and there are no flaws in the reasonable background and ability settings. The ability settings are also quite interesting. It is not the kind of mindless white text, and it has a warm feeling in daily life.

The author has something good, the writing is not bad, the plot is reasonable, and the setting is quite thoughtful. It's hard to imagine that this is a new author.

I couldn't stop reading it. I stayed up all night to finish it. My imagination is really big. I feel like I am growing a brain. I can become a god with just one book. It's a trumpet, right? Right!

After reading it, the writing is really good. It may not be as good as the great masters. After reading Chapter 90, I feel that it may not be as good as the great masters, but it has potential. I think it's actually almost as good as a great god