Urban Wasteland

I had a post before saying that the author's writing at the beginning was very poor and it was too boring to read. But after I said it, I came back to look at it today and it seems to have changed. It looks much better. The author's level has improved and he is willing to make corrections. I think it is very good. The data of this book is not good, and he does not make much money, but he insists on writing 300,000 words and has not yet finished it. The content is okay, at least from the perspective of me, an ordinary reader (I read novels on various platforms for a total of 1,500 hours, which should be considered average), I really can't find any major faults at the moment. It's awesome, good luck to the author. 👍👍👍

I originally thought that the beginning of the novel was very confusing, but then it got a little interesting. It's worth reading.

There are not many votes, and these are the only things that make a famous author. They are all given to you. Don't collapse the underlying logic.

How to deal with that female Yanshi? If the protagonist hadn't died, he would have died long ago.

But Zhao's plot is obviously shaped in the direction of a female protagonist. I can't understand why the author said it's not a female protagonist, but does it count as a female supporting role?

Food is close to jelly but not there yet. Except for the plot of the heroine, which some people with PTSD may find bad, there is nothing toxic about it. Personally, I don't find it difficult to accept as long as it's reasonable.

I came to the comment section of other books and saw the latest chapter in one day. It is very interesting and a breath of fresh air in this genre. There are not many books like this that make people shine. The bond between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is written very naturally, and the psychological transformation of the male protagonist is also very delicate. I don't know if it's a harem or a single female protagonist, but I can do either. The interactions with the various female characters are quite fresh and interesting. One suggestion I have is not to spend too much space on the aspect of failing to review for any exam. I know you may want to create a protagonist whose humanity has not disappeared and has some bond with the school, but repeating it so many times is boring and feels a bit forced to create a plot. Overall it's still very good, keep up the good work

Why isn't a good book popular? It's absolutely beautiful. This book ranks among the top at the starting point.

I can't imagine what Lao Zhao will look like after this copy comes out

I found it in the daily guide of poisoning. I found it after five or six rounds. It looks good. To be honest, this book really deserves a recommendation. At least it is much better than some of the editor-in-chief's recommendations, best-seller selections, and some of the junk books in Sanjiang. I really don't understand how those rubbish books got published. It simply pollutes my book-finding channels.

The writing is very good, but how long will it take you to finish the story of Butterfly Lovers? You have watched dozens of scenes, and you still want to continue?

It looks good, there are no too old routines, and there are no unpleasant poisonous points The work is like a cup of good tea, it has its own style and characteristics Looking forward to updates

Promise me that you will write books for the rest of your life, okay?

The exposure is so low, no one has read it. If more people read this book, they will definitely like it after reading a few chapters.

It's definitely more than food and grass. Come on, just keep updating steadily.

The writing style and rhythm are quite good, but there seems to be no big main line, only the small main line of the ghost mother, which can be completed in 200 chapters at most. Zhao and Wang both look a bit like the heroine, but not quite.

Okay, okay, it smells like a secular master, but the princess is actually quite cute, do you really not want to accept it? ()

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It's so awesome, but it's just not enough 😭

1. Combat strength level: I have already seen the latest chapter. After the protagonist is promoted to Liangyi, the basic value has increased numerically, but the performance still feels about the same as Guiyuan. It just feels like these performances can be achieved in Guiyuan Realm. I feel that the protagonist's combat power is very vague and I don't know what level it is. 2. China setting problem: Among the people who have appeared so far, none of them have exceeded the Five Elements level, but their status is already high. After completing the island copy, Zhao Yudie is the princess of Zhenguo, a golden figure in the Five Elements realm. Then several other well-known figures are also golden figures, and their realms should be similar, all of them are in the Five Elements realm. So that means that among the current three major worlds, the world of Shenzhou and Song Dynasty should already be in the upper level of the Five Elements realm. But there are ten levels in total, the five elements are still the lower five levels, and the world of China is set so that there are many people in the upper three levels and even the ninth level. This is how to deal with this seemingly low-status issue. Is it necessary to introduce "god" settings like heaven and Buddhism? It means not to interfere in mortal affairs. But what is currently written is that the Zhao family of the Song Dynasty and several sects such as Qianji Sect jointly rule the world, and if there is a god-level force, Zhao Yudie cannot not know about it. 3. The plot problem of Dahuang: The current plot of Dahuang feels too bland. It is not as interesting as before. It is the feeling of small characters surviving in the cracks and the emotions of each character. Now it feels like a pure movie going through the motions. Nowadays, every character in Dahuang nods and bows when they see the protagonist's Tiangong Ling and the poster's waist card, without any turning point. I feel that we need to expand the world view of the Great Wilderness quickly, otherwise the protagonist will be "too comfortable" and it will be boring, because at present, the strength of the Blood-Handed Scholar will not be much weaker than that of the Buddhist and Taoist families in the Great Wilderness. The Buddhist and Taoist families in the Great Wilderness are actually no longer the protagonist's opponents and will be directly worn to death. 4. The protagonist's "Zhao Ming" ability: At present, it is skill copy + cognitive modification + resurrection ability. Everything consumes Yin Qi, so accumulating Yin Qi should be the most important activity for the protagonist. However, the current protagonist simply hangs up and does not kill enemies to obtain Yin Qi. Logically speaking, according to the character of the protagonist of this book, he should choose to kill enemies to obtain Yin Qi. After all, the previous character-changing stage was about killing, killing, killing. 5. The current main line problem in this world: I haven't seen what the Ghost Mother is doing for a long time. The main task of the protagonist and Zhao Yudie is to kill the Ghost Mother, but no one seems to care about it at the moment. What I have been writing about recently is about daily life. Logically speaking, the two of them should have found the ghost mother as soon as they came back from the island dungeon, and went to high school to experience life. At least let's see the ghost mother and the clone's perspective. It's not like the big boss in the end is the classmate who likes to compare. 6. Realm level: The gap between the first five realms is too small, and I don't know how to transition in between. The Five Elements Realm (Zhao Yudie) can only block the flood of the dam gap , and the protagonist of the Guiyuan Realm can already smash several buildings at least. The difference just feels a little smaller. Because the gap between the upper three realms and the five elements is too big. The three realms have been set against each other since the beginning of Journey to the West. The scripture-retrieving team (in the original text) who were conferred as Buddhas/envoys after collecting the scriptures are at least at the level of great gods (Taiyi). There is only two or three realms between the Five Elements and the Three Realms. This span is much larger than Guiyuan to the Five Elements. If it were really written like this, it would feel like the protagonist would break through at a certain moment and instantly go from mortal to divine. It feels like the span will be huge.

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Zhuang Zhou Mengdie, the last few chapters have been written with great feeling. I want to see when he will wake up.

I'll read other books to support you 😭 Come on, author

It looks good, especially this recent copy

Then why not die more times around various top scientists and politicians?

[Identity]: Magistrate of Dahuang County [Endowment]: Ming Zhao - Soul Picking [Realm]: Eryi Realm Yanshi [Skills]: ①Combat-pulling silk thread, three yuan burning lamp technique, cutting spirit, wild intuition, raining ping, closing moon fan, weird Tactics, body fusion sacrifice, light-splitting arrows, red lotus of karma, smoke and fire technique ②Daily-proficiency in music, music and dance, cooking skills, sharp teeth ③Knowledge-making palm puppets, making staff puppets, making meat puppets, making iron branch puppets, burning marrow medicine Puppet Secret Record, Hundred Play Explosion Picture, Creation True Skeleton Picture·Recognition of Skeleton Chapter, Bone Magical Artifact Making, Metal Spiritual Material Cutting Method, Green Bamboo Peiyuan Record ④Practice - Changing the Sky and Hitting the Earth, Huangyuan Wuji Breaking Barrier Sutra, Golden Silk Jade Puppet Body (Gold Thread Clothes, Gossamer Tendons) [Skills to be acquired]: Words follow [Items]: Tiangong Order, Blood Fan Building Master Order, Blood-leaking Great Cloak, Marrow-burning Double Swords, Golden Cone, Cold Iron Lock, Armor-breaking Cone, Shark Tears, Chi Kiss Corpse, Bone Material, Huang Liang Meng Jade [Puppet]: Marrow-burning Maid·Little Bell, Beast Riding Bone Puppet·Wolf Type

Faster, faster, write faster, I am already suffering

I have read the latest chapter, but the pace is really slow. Is there any kind author who can answer my questions? 1. Does this book only accept Zhao as the heroine, or all the main female supporting characters? (Don't be disgusting if you are a young man.) 2. No matter whether Zhao Yudie is killed or not, the finale will always be a happy ending, right? 3. Does the author intend to distinguish Princess Jinling from the real Zhao? Will there be two people behind? 4. Whether the author considers accelerating the protagonist's exploration of the wilderness and upgrading progress. 5. How old is the author?

Not bad, the combination of daily life, superpowers, and time travel is good. Already voted

I may have submitted it to the wrong author category. I think it should not have been submitted to the city, but should have been submitted to the light novel category. Maybe the results would be better (not necessarily).