Mortal Cultivation: I Have a Mirror of Absurdity

It's still pretty good, but the fighting scenes are a bit stretchy. The main character's magic weapon is really awesome, but during the fight, it doesn't reflect the awesomeness, which is embarrassing.

The book Mortal Tongwen next door is quite good. Others are also new authors of new books, and their writing is much better than yours. You are still licking Han Li. Others' books don't care about Han Li at all. As long as they are resources that are useful to you, you grab them. For example, you grabbed the ancient teleportation array and the Da Luo Shi token directly in advance. In Mortal The women in front of them also grabbed it in advance. As for how Han Li will develop in the future, the protagonist doesn't care. The protagonist can't grab Han Li's little green bottle, otherwise it won't be left to Han Li. Although the little green bottle is a dispensable thing for the protagonist, after all, the protagonist's golden finger is much better than that little green bottle.

Does this book accept women? I will withdraw if I don't accept women. Han Laomo's single-minded approach has made all the heroines and supporting characters in Mortal live a miserable life of loneliness. The protagonist should make up for the original work. Let them live a hard and happy life. Anyway, these women live a hard life. Why can't the protagonist be cheap?

The most disgusting thing about dog-licking articles is that they write about people who are afraid of this or that, and dare not say anything about their future lives. In that case, why would you, the author, write a story about a mortal cultivating immortality? These time-closed novels are written with stupid fan protagonists who will die as soon as they enter it. You must know that when writing fan novels, the protagonist is the biggest variable. Unless your protagonist dies, otherwise no matter what you do, something will always change. He has traveled through time and there is Goldfinger, and he is always afraid that the original protagonist dare not change and lives a cautious life. It is better to die. Can you, the author, bring in your protagonist's perspective so that life is interesting? You are writing a novel, not that you have traveled back in time. Is it interesting to write a novel in which the protagonist lives in such a miserable state?

If you're afraid of this or that, I'm just writing a thread. If you're not dead after traveling through time, even Dao Ancestor can't do anything to you. What do you mean by closed loop? After closing the loop, you can still travel through time and be reborn? ? ?

I didn't even finish the first three chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. He said that all opportunities involving Old Demon Han would have to be put back after they were copied, and he would not dare to touch them. No, then why are you writing fan fiction? This is all a closed loop. If you write it like you did, wouldn't it be enough to just write that your protagonist traveled through the past and was discovered by Old Demon Han, and then was directly crushed to death, and the golden finger was robbed? When writing a fan novel, if you don't create a second creation and don't dare to touch anything of the original protagonist, then why are you writing this? If you're afraid of this, you're afraid that you can just write the story of your protagonist being crushed to death after entering, and then the story after Han Laomo gets your protagonist's golden finger.

So if you have so many restrictions, are they of any use? You can't go far after writing again and again. You are afraid of this and that. You dare not do anything for the original protagonist Han Li. If you are worried about this, you will not achieve anything in the end. You have to cheat more than Han Li. Otherwise, why do you have no idea about the bottle? If you can't write Han Li well, stay away from him. Just treat him as a minor supporting role. It is enough to integrate him into this mature world of cultivating immortals.

If you ask Old Demon Han to go to the Sea of ​​Chaos Stars first, the protagonist will not be able to go. Because every time the old devil goes there, he will dismantle a corner of the teleportation array. Unless you go first and copy the teleportation array, don't even want to go. . .

Nothing to see. How to say: The protagonist voluntarily gave up many opportunities for Han Li. Don't bother with the opportunities you already know, why should you pursue them? The idea of ​​the novel is already dead. If you can't copy the palm balance, you can't copy the green liquid? ? A bunch of martial arts skills are not given up by chance, and they waste their martial arts skills, but they still stupidly call it: cautious? ? Relying on the prophet, finding an opportunity, and then sending Han Li away can make a good relationship. But the protagonist has never imagined that his IQ is not even comparable to that of an ordinary person. A mentally retarded novel, if you can't stand it, it means nothing.

Are people really so servile when writing novels these days?

Han Li can just ignore it. Take advantage of opportunities. Women will accept what they deserve. Also leave him a 🔨. What are you afraid of him doing? When writing a fanfic, don't lick the protagonist and be afraid of this or that. Could it be that your future body will not be Tao Ancestor? I'm also afraid that the Taoist Master of Time will crush you to death across the long river of time. Write about what the mortal protagonist is afraid of, Han Li's future Taoist ancestor, and he doesn't even dare to touch or lick Han Li's body when the opportunity arises, basically throwing him off the street.

Why not copy the spirit stone? Why not copy the little green bottle? It's so embarrassing to watch without thinking!

You're so good at writing, you didn't choose your spiritual roots well. You chose earth for your metal and earth spiritual roots. If you choose earth, you have few exercises, few supernatural powers, you can't make elixirs, you can't refine weapons. There is also the Nine-fold Fist Strength in your Mountain-Moving Dafa, and you also said that you would go to the Chaotic Sea of ​​Stars, which is full of seas. It would be good if your earth-based technique has 60% power for 10% of the power. The technique also talks about the mutual restraint of the five elements. You can actually watch the plot if it's a little more complex, but if you make a mistake in your skills, cheats, magic weapons, routes, spiritual roots, magical powers, and skills, you won't have to watch it! Look at the magical powers and techniques in Master Xuan Gu's Xuanyin Sutra! You are looking at Tuotian Demon Kung Fu (body cultivation), Qingyang Fire, Six Paths, Five Sons of One Heart Demon, Invisible Escape Technique (needle technique, escape technique), Qingyuan Sword Technique (with magic weapon, sword formation, sword energy), Changchun Kung Fu (brain growth), each one has some strange features! I watched Mortal 10 times and no one watched it!

Here are some big guys who recommend me some fan fiction about mortals who dare to grab the little green bottle. Reading those cowardly fan fiction that dare not grab this little green bottle makes me sick to death.

You lick Han Li. Afraid of this or that. Just don't write fanfic. Ignore the protagonist. Take it if you can. If you have to grab it, grab it. Otherwise, what is the use of foresight? Can't do any of these. You must rush to the street

Many people who like to watch women seizing opportunities see you licking Han Li so much before. Afraid of Han Li or something. Add some peripherals and stuff and abandon the book. Most of the ones left now are for watching single girls or licking Han Li. It feels like you will be scolded again if you change your style. You don't want to please both sides. But I still like to read cool articles about people who seize opportunities to steal women. Then he took his family to practice immortality together. And a good wife. As for Han Li, who cares whether he lives or lives? In Han Li's original work, the cultivators didn't care much about women. He is truly dedicated to the Tao. The best thing written by fellow mortals is Mortal's Immortal Path to Immortality. The author can take a look. It turns out most people like to watch that. Others either failed or had mediocre results.

The fan setting must be clear and the original work must be thoroughly understood. This is the most basic point. Wrote dozens of chapters. Come and tell me that I have forgotten many of the plots of the original novel. If you want to review it again, please give me a hammer. Second, deliberately suppressing combat effectiveness, and the reason is very rubbish. 9. To practice special skills, you need to practice them once in each small realm. I accept this. After all, Han Li also has a third-level Heavy Yuan Art, but he has a copy of the magic weapon and cannot find ammunition anywhere. This is pure nonsense. You can't find it in Tiannan or Luan Xinghai. The third author arranged for an adventure protagonist to find the legacy of a Nascent Soul monk in the human world. Recognized the magic weapon brought by his time travel and obtained a Xuantian object? ? ? It's too embarrassing, too forced, too deliberate. Where does Yuanying come from? He knows the abilities and functions of a treasure of the same level as a small bottle. Third, the protagonist is not suitable for practicing Taoism at all and has no firm Taoist heart. He often does some unreasonable things. Before the protagonist enters that bloody base, he goes to remind Biyue Shuangjiao. Those are the two ordinary women. Be careful with intelligence and Hanli. Aren't you looking for death? You're just causing trouble for yourself. Later, Xiang Zhili didn't find the protagonist, just forced cheating. As for many people, the author does not dare to spoil the plot. I can understand being a bitch or something. Here I would like to refute the main points of those people. First of all, the fairyland chapter has been written, unless you completely overturn this setting. You are no longer willing to admit that Han Li is also an immortal. Just like when a girl gets into a car accident and you lose your temper no matter how excited you are. It's no use either. Because objective facts are not subject to human subjective will. Secondly. I clearly know that the person on the other side is an immortal who wants to live and provoke others for nothing, or who wants to block his way and steal his wife. I think I'm too hard-headed. Han Li connects Yuanyao and Li Feiyu in the ending. If anyone dares to snatch his bottle or Zhenggong, guess if he has the ability to slap you to death. Finally, don't be afraid of the protagonist's future. What kind of time traveler has a backstage? The author knows whether the protagonist has a future, but the protagonist himself cannot know! Does Time Traveler have a backstage? Some time travels are completely random events. No backstage! Some time travels are conspiracies. It doesn't matter if you live or die. Some time travels have backstage. But it may not be able to bear it. Another result is that there is a backend that can help you carry it out. So you have to choose one with a 90% probability of death, when there are obviously other ways to survive! (The fact that the protagonist has his own cheat does not mean he cannot live without grabbing women and opportunities.) It is purely due to an IQ problem. People who think this way can just jump off the building. Leave a suicide note before jumping off the building and ask the person who invented the time machine to come and save you. Just bet on the time machine that will be invented in the future and bet that he will save you in the future, okay? Isn't this your logic?

Shuanglinggen is not that useless, please write well! Even if you have 4 of them, you still can't build the foundation 100%, and it will be the same as the four spiritual roots. If you are lucky, one will build the foundation, if you are unlucky, just two or three.

I suggest the author learn how to write Mortal Immortal Path. This is the best mortal time travel book I have ever read, one of the best. I fucking love this one better than the original!

I can't watch it anymore. I don't want the bodies of the monsters in the Blood Trial. I just go out and spend money to buy materials to refine weapons. You are a rich man. In the first chapter, it is also stated that Goldfinger has restrictions. This cannot be done, that cannot be done, and there is a final right of interpretation. There are too many poisonous points. It feels like the author has not read the original work and still wants to write his own thing.

Two foundation-building pills, from the 12th level of Qi training to the 13th level of perfection, are you a five-spirited person? It's not like a five-spirited person.

There's no need to read it, the writing is poor and the plot is poisonous. Be a nanny. As a time traveler, you are already the biggest variable. Variables cannot be deduced or traced.

Three or four foundation building pills are needed to build the foundation of double spiritual roots.

The author only remembers the general plot of the story for mortals, and then insists on following Han Li's path. He also insists on matching Han Li's cultivation level. The protagonist with dual spiritual roots also took the Heaven-Building Pill in advance, which is equivalent to the Tianling Root. His cultivation speed is about the same as Han Li's, and he suppresses the protagonist in various ways. The standard of the three-turn Zhongyuan Gong is also a loose kung fu, but the magical power is really incredible. A pure mana power does not involve physical training, but the magical power is nothing more than a boxing technique. Seeing that Han Li has been relying on body training to show off his extraordinary powers in the spiritual world, he came here, but aren't you using body training to rush in and seek death? Then there is the weapon training, 20,000 spirit stones are used to refine a top-level magic weapon, while normal magic weapons only cost 20,000. Moreover, there is a problem in having to wait for which material to develop the best top-level magic weapon. The level of top-level magic weapon for mortals is not obvious. Just look at the materials. The better the material, the stronger. The second-level monster materials are made from top-level materials, the same goes for third-level ones, and the same goes for fourth-level ones. If you can't get top-level materials, how about the next level? The protagonist can directly buy iron essence. Is it difficult to complete the whole body to the next level? It's impossible to lose too much against top-level magic weapons in a single pair, let alone if you have a set. The author writes as if there are only ordinary top-level magic weapons and top-level top-level magic weapons.

Just say a few words. The author is a cloud reader of the biography of mortals cultivating immortality. Many details are not consistent with the original work and are nonsense, but the novel must follow the plot of the original work. I dare not ruin any chance of Han Lao Mo. The only thing I can't help but accept is Yunyao. Quite boring. But it is not necessarily true that there is much poison. The kind of person who seizes the Sky Vase and accepts Nangong Wan is the real poison. He eats the food of mortals and destroys them. That's really disgusting! This book can be read by ordinary people as a fan, but it is not exciting, but it does not tear the original work away, it is quite good!

Why do fan writers snatch Han Li's wife away? Isn't it too shameless to snatch away his only wife for eternity?😆😆

Even if I lick Han Li, I wouldn't dare to take it if I had the chance. The most outrageous thing is that the prices are too inflationary. The material of the magic weapon is 5,000 spirit stones, and the normal finished top-quality magic weapon only costs 700-1,500 spirit stones. The materials for a magic weapon actually cost 320,000, and the ordinary finished magic weapon cost 30,000 to 70,000. A piece of Geng gold is nearly 1 million, which is too outrageous, and millions of spiritual stones are easily available. It is too exaggerated and too discouraging.

This is a rubbish plot, so you should run away early.

It looked like writing a running account, not attractive at all, so I gave up.

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