The Realm of Fantasy and Demons

Perhaps, in a certain universe or a certain dimension, this place will really exist. This world is full of fantasy and magic. All species in this world can obtain illusions or magic. However, there is great prejudice and discrimination between people with illusory power and people with magic power, and the story unfolds amid prejudice and discrimination... I plan to write this novel from the perspective of both the male protagonist and the female protagonist. This is my first time writing, so there is always something wrong. I hope everyone can point out my problems.