Tokyo: I Loaded the Romance Advice System

Well, the premise is fairly novel, and the female lead's character is reasonably well-written. If the author had good writing skills and a well-handled plot, it could have been a masterpiece. However, it's too clichéd, leaving you with just one word: awkward. The author has managed to include all three major flaws: idiotic supporting characters, a clueless protagonist, and an awkward plot.

It's not good. I suggest you update more chapters to attract readers. After all, if the quality isn't good, you can rely on quantity. I'll give you a number: ten chapters a day.

I'm not afraid of green tea girls having no bottom line, I'm afraid of them having a conscience. Little green tea girl, Hanako-san, is so cute!

The logic is flawed, and the plot is difficult to maintain. Extremely poisonous, I'm running away. I'm not going to reply to the bot comments anyway.

My blood pressure rose while watching it. The supporting characters were like complete idiots from beginning to end. There was absolutely no logic. The male lead was also incredibly stupid. It was highly toxic.

Upon closer analysis, this work contains common elements of classic urban fantasy novels: 1. A cheat/hack that is highly relevant to female characters; 2. A wealthy heiress who's willing to pay anyone to marry her; 3. Pretending to be weak to deceive others only invites criticism and leads to being proven wrong;

Basically, after reading just one chapter, I think, "Why did the protagonist do that? Isn't that stupid? Why did the woman do that? What's it to you?" The plot is just the same old formula from ten years ago: conflict for conflict's sake, face-slapping for face's sake—a typical wish-fulfillment novel. But that's not popular anymore.

Oh my god, the protagonist needs help to walk, yet he manages to save people when surrounded. Author, couldn't you have changed that? There's no supernatural power involved, don't you think it's absurd?

Thank you all for your support. Regarding the update schedule, I will normally update two chapters every day, and they will be released together around noon.

The theme is good, and the writing is good too, but there's a bit of deliberate awkwardness. Running after class in the evening is fine, but they deliberately choose to run in the rain and fall, getting seen by the other person. Even though it's for the sake of interaction, it feels a bit mindless. Perhaps I personally prefer stories where someone subtly transforms and then amazes everyone, so I'm being a bit nitpicky. But I'll still follow the book and hope the author's writing takes off.