Tokyo: I Loaded the Romance Advice System

How should I put it, the setting is quite novel, and the character design of the heroine can also be said to be well written. Originally, if the author had good writing skills and the plot was handled well, it would have been a good work, but it was too cliche, and it felt like just one word, awkward. The three major poisonous points are the mentally retarded supporting characters, the dull protagonist, and the embarrassing plot. This guy has written it all right. Let me explain: First of all, the first thing that makes people feel poisonous is not the plot or the mentally retarded supporting characters, but the protagonist. The protagonist gave me only one perception: a diner who knows nothing but the system. This was reflected in the exam plot for the first time, which made people feel that he was eager to show off after winning the golden finger. It made me feel that he was a fool for the first time. After reading the story of Hayakawa's foster cat for the second time, I no longer thought the protagonist was stupid. Instead, I began to think, "Ah, this author can only write this kind of character." Why, because what he writes is like a fool, shaping for the sake of shaping. In terms of supporting roles, the heroine is the only bright spot. The writing is indeed good, and the heroine's image is very vivid and vivid. However, the others are terrible, especially Mr. Hayakawa. Let me describe it: the first time they met, he was "simple, gentle, and caring about others" (the gym scene). The second time they met, he was "venomous, and he would spit on me no matter what." The third time, "I had a crush on the male protagonist." The fourth time, "I completely fell in love with him" (without any foreshadowing, I suddenly liked him) 😥😥😥 What kind of brain circuit could write such a plot? I don't want to type anymore. Typing is too troublesome. All in all, one sentence reveals the author's attributes as a dream boy (this is very hard to hear). As for this book, everyone should not read it. It is a waste of time.

It doesn't look good. I suggest you update a few more pictures to attract readers. After all, if the quality is not up to standard, you can rely on quantity. I'll give you the number. I'll update it ten times a day.

We are not afraid that green tea has no bottom line, but we are afraid that green tea has a conscience. The little green tea pear mulberry is so cute

The logic doesn't make sense and the plot is difficult to follow. Very toxic, I ran away, I won't reply to robot comments anyway

My blood pressure rose while watching it, the supporting characters looked like idiots from beginning to end. There is no logic at all, and the male protagonist is really bad and very poisonous.

Anyway, after watching a paragraph, I thought: Why does the protagonist do this? Isn't this a stupid coin? Why is this woman doing this? What does it have to do with you? Anyway, the plot is the same as ten years ago. Conflict for the sake of conflict, slap in the face for the sake of slap in the face. But it is not popular now. I read light novels to watch Se Se and watch daily life. What I need is relaxation. Anyway, someone will come out to create conflicts in two or three chapters. The protagonist is not solving it well enough, which makes you more and more frustrated as you read. Then you will subscribe to a chapter in advance. Features: Come here to curse

After careful analysis, this work contains common elements of ancient urban cool novels: 1. A plug-in that is highly linked to female characters; 2. A wealthy lady who cheats; 3. Pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, and then get slapped in the face; 4. Culture, sports, entertainment and politics are multi-faceted, and you will succeed as soon as you start; 5. No maintenance or cost is required, and it can always be used Direct and unconditional use of favors, backers and younger brothers; 6. No matter how well-known no one is, no one can remember the name and appearance of the protagonist, unless they need to show off; If you are really hungry and anxious, it is not impossible to watch without thinking, but the male protagonist is really disgusting. He opens a harem and grinds away. The plug-in disappears in the middle and late stages, and his existence is almost invisible.

Ah, my brain, the protagonist has to be helped to walk even when he is being attacked, but he can still save others. Author, can't you change it? It's not extraordinary, don't you think it's outrageous?

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The theme is good and the writing is good, but it is a bit deliberately embarrassing. It is okay to run after class in the evening, but it happened to be raining and fell down. Although it is for the sake of contact, it is a bit mindless. Maybe I personally prefer to quietly transform and surprise everyone, so I am a bit picky, but I will still follow the book. I hope the author can take off.