I Can Transmigrate Between Worlds

Let me address the issue. The focus is a bit too much on the transmigration into anime and game worlds, not the miscellaneous elements of the real world. The transmigration should be 80% time travel and 20% reality; the reality aspect is just for context, not the main focus. Then there are the three real-world female characters.

It's a bit of a mess. Jackie Chan World already had its share of randomly added settings, and now Under One Person is adding them too, making the protagonist's abilities a jumbled mess.

The main world only has two or three chapters, and I'm worried the protagonist's character development might be too weak. Those familiar with my work know that character development is my weakness, and that's about it later on. I hope this doesn't spoil the reading experience. I hope you enjoy reading, my little darlings! For those who point out errors, I'll post a picture as a reward when I see it in the comments! Come and spot the mistakes!

Reality was a mess, I couldn't take it, so I ran away.

If you don't have the writing skills, then write less. You're writing novels to make money, so you should play to your strengths. If you can't write romance, then don't; not being able to write about love and relationships won't have a big impact. If you're just trying to pad your word count, there's no need to write it; you can just write more worlds directly. Although the final result is the same, it should be slower than the kind of failure you described.

Things would be much better if those three lumps went there in reality.

The system is a mess. He has support abilities and has learned magic. He went to Darkness to level up, accumulating a ton of skill points. Then he went to learn the Eight Extraordinary Techniques of Golden Light Pillar, and then halfway through, he started practicing martial arts again? His abilities are so inconsistent. I didn't quite understand it.

Based on this synopsis, if you actually write a good book, making money shouldn't be too difficult. But if you don't write it well, don't blame your brothers for criticizing you. 🤭

In reality, will those three accept it? If not, then don't describe the plot too much or write it too beautifully. If they will, then that's another story.

Orphans rarely start out this badly... Or maybe try gender-swapping the characters and releasing it in a female-oriented genre to see if they'd accept the combination of family ethics and endless loops.