The Witch Said in a Joke, I Will Open the Gate of Heaven with One Sword

After reading about 110,000 words, I felt it was okay at first, but after seeing the use of the Sun family, I really couldn't bear the poison. Author, please think about it carefully. If someone does what you did to the Sun family on the protagonist, I'm afraid it won't be enough to crush the Sun family. They will have to wipe out the whole family. The problem of three views is too big. Others will not hesitate to use their trump cards to save your life. After saving your life, you will get the sentence "I didn't ask you to save your life." It's simply ridiculous.

The protagonist can become stronger by swinging his sword, but he doesn't swing his sword hard, and keeps making love to women. He fights a third-level enemy and has to be rescued by others. It's really embarrassing and I can't stand it.

Times have changed, and writing is still the same as it was in ancient times. If you just mess up the title and content, people will buy it. Now if the introduction is wrong and the content is wrong, you will be criticized to death. You deserve to be a eunuch. This is not how you cheat money. You can find a factory for this kind of writing. You can make more money than you can by writing novels.

It's full of flaws, I can only say that I can accept it if I lose my brain. In the beginning, the guy named Chen forced himself to find trouble, and then the protagonist was afraid that the guy named Chen couldn't find the problem, so he started to show off his talents. Why, you can't just let others spy on you for a few days and then leave. It's only been a few chapters, and it's just like opening a halo of wisdom, with maximum persuasion ability.

That Chen Ci is disgusting. He only picks up women without much sword practice. Most of the characters with names are female. Even the main character's father's name is not mentioned. It's pure yy writing.

The book became more and more useless as the writing went on~ The plot was pretty good~ As a result, the protagonist became more and more useless as he continued to rely on women, and in the end he almost plotted his own woman to death~ It was obvious that he could become stronger with hard work, but he had to write like a loser, calculating this and that~ If he continued writing like this, I gave up on the remaining chapters after subscribing. It's not like I paid for your previous free chapters in vain.

I can't even read the free chapters of this book, so how can anyone subscribe to it? Rubbish

To be honest, it's very retarded. I can't even figure out what the author is thinking? Can't you level up to a master first before taking action? As a swordsman, why don't you take one year to become a master of the seventh or sixth level? Really disgusting.

The label is wrong, this is not called genius flow, this is called system son flow

I haven't read it yet, but from the synopsis, wouldn't it be more appropriate to change the title to "The Goddess Yibai Jokes, Licking a Dog and Opening the Heavenly Gate with a Sword"

Don't watch it with your brain, it's a bunch of poisonous things, and watching too much will lower your intelligence.

... If you don't practice your sword properly, you'll wander around plotting and scheming, picking up girls every day! Please change the name of the novel! Hanging a sheep's head!

A sword that opens the gate of heaven... A licking dog? ? ?

Intrusion and deletion

Within 8 chapters, there are only a few male sidekicks, the kind without names. There are 5 named female characters, and the protagonist's father doesn't even have a name.

I don't understand. According to the current plot, upgrading only depends on the Qi, not the body. Then it should be very simple to kill enemies by leaping through levels. As long as you can break the defense, you can surpass the level. When the protagonist is a mortal, you can xo with the saint. This shows that the body of the advanced practitioner has not changed qualitatively. Otherwise, the pig's feet may not be pinched. Then it is said that it is difficult to surpass the level. Isn't it a bit unreasonable? In other words, there is a sense of crisis, or if the true energy is spread all over the body, it is indestructible.

Yes, it feels like a mix of a watchman and a sword. But overall it follows a purely refreshing style. I think it's pretty cool without thinking too much 🙂

Vomited... No one will take care of you if you are robbed, but no one will take care of you if you destroy your family.

I think the writing is stiff, unnatural, and too deliberate. The first ten chapters feel too stiff at first glance, and I don't recommend them like this.

Hey, without three hundred pictures, the protagonist wouldn't be able to travel thousands of miles.

It's very good. I like it very much. I hope I don't stop being an eunuch. And since I want to be a swordsman and walk thousands of miles. If there is a court, I must have a river and lake. Carrying a beautiful sword and walking in the rivers and lakes. Happy grudges. A little more delicate. Let's have a few more heroines. The portrayal is a little more delicate. Fairies, princesses, witches, each has its own characteristics. Tsundere fairy or cute, love brain. How to contrast, the most attractive, or the heroine who falls in love with the protagonist. Anyway, that's it. Don't portray the heroine too similarly. I'm afraid that the heroine will have too much facial makeup. There are wine, swords and beauties in the world. That's enough.

Okay, it's pretty good, but the combat power system must be done well. It's easy to lose your ability to write this kind of article.

It feels okay, will you continue writing?

It's pretty, but it's short and weak.

The beginning was okay. Isn't the back a bit old? 🙂

The protagonist is not Yu Le, Ye Qingjie