Back to the Sun

A good book, one of the rare good books, the anti-routine is interesting, the characters are real, the world view is open, and the content is real, just like the real world 👍

This style is more like an anime than a novel. Why does the protagonist believe that there is a pure land in such an environment just because the protagonist has traveled through time? If this is the case, then you should know that looking for a pure land on such a planet is not as good as looking for a colonizable planet.

The writing is okay, but the writing is a bit rough, and some details are not well written. For example, the protagonist's car, the base car, the protagonist's plug-in in this article, and the most important thing, what the car looks like, are basically not described in the article. It is the track. Well, it's still wheels, how tall and wide it is, and it carries so many tons of cargo at the beginning, how it was brought, where the cargo box is, and the protagonist's own cockpit, which specific location, where the employees live, and where they eat. Basically, they describe where the protagonist is, but the protagonist and his group are in the car. Everything about eating, drinking, sleeping, sleeping, etc. Is mentioned in one stroke. There is also the power source of the car, whether it is electricity or oil. The protagonist has not done anything about it. Also, such a big car cannot pass through mountainous areas. It is all flat roads. These details in life are not mentioned. It is very important for the development of farming. Flow is a big taboo, because the original point of view is that the protagonist develops himself step by step. He doesn't even have an idea of what the protagonist's most important tool is. If the protagonist improves the tools in his hand, the readers will have no idea, because the readers only know what it was like before they know what has been improved.

Why do you want to find a pure land? Compared with finding a pure land, it is easier to create your own pure land. Just build a dungeon, or go to space

If the protagonist wants to find a pure land, there are only two places. One is hundreds of meters underground and there is no nuclear radiation. The other way is to go to outer space and colonize the moon or Mars.

Without a group of teammates you can trust, how can you avoid being robbed?

In the end of the world, a small, semi-enclosed space with limited food and water sources. In this case, I generally won't let anyone get in my car, especially men. As long as people are under a lot of stress and get hurt, they will have psychological problems. People in the apocalypse are all mentally ill, with all kinds of PTSD... Who dares to live with strangers is really too long to live.

The writing is very rough, and if you don't use the cheats, you just don't upgrade the base vehicle, and it wanders around. Pig's Feet has always said that he aims for the Pure Land, but he just wanders around anyway. The plot advancement is very mechanized, and there are many pits dug at the beginning. Not attractive to look at.

When I was a child, I didn't speak Mandarin well. During a Mandarin dictation test, I sat in the front row and listened intently to the teacher's pronunciation. The teacher read: "suspect" I immediately wrote "salty rice" in my notebook. The teacher accidentally glanced at my paper, but he couldn't bear to embarrass me, so he raised his voice: "Suspect!" I hesitated for a second, seemed to have some understanding, and picked up the pen to change "salted rice" to "salted fish rice." The teacher was a little dizzy after taking another look. He deliberately raised his voice and said: "The suspect of the prisoner" I thought it made sense, so I added the words "salted fish rice with salt". The teacher couldn't help it anymore and looked at me with a blank look: "I said there is a suspect'. I was a little nervous at the time, so I slowly wrote down "Yuyu flavored salted fish rice" with trembling handwriting. The teacher had no choice but to walk up to me, press my shoulder, and said: "He is the kind of suspect who has committed a heinous crime and is going to die." My brain was full of confusion and I timidly erased what I had written before, and then changed it to "Salted Fish Rice with a Big Mouth" Finally, the ambulance came, and the whole class carefully carried the teacher into the car...

Looking at the introduction, without the sun, the entire planet will enter a dark ice age, and the entire planet will be frozen. What other solution is there except changing planets?

The protagonist's actions are not rigorous, and he is not careful enough where he should be cautious. In general, he wastes a lot of words to describe it. This will make the article read awkwardly, and it often feels like a piece of plot is missing somewhere.

The writing is above the level, but there are some minor bugs. The specific characteristics of the protagonist's vehicle are not described enough. The protagonist himself is not cautious enough and has a big heart. And the most important point is that the protagonist is the commander of the base vehicle. How can he come down and fight on his own? Putting your own threat outside in a dangerous and orderless wasteland, and with such a rare base vehicle, wouldn't others be greedy? There are only a dozen helpers for the protagonist. When the protagonist comes down, just send one person to kill him with a sniper rifle, and then send people to kill several other people. There is no disharmony, and it feels unreasonable to have insufficient firepower at the beginning. In five or six years, there are not even heavy weapons? And these are not to avoid others to show their cheats. Just talk about the scene where the group leader treats guests to beheading, and surprises the door to trick him into opening the door. So isn't the plug-in the leader's?

The protagonist is like a clone with memories implanted in his back.

This is the pirate ship in One Piece, not the base vehicle in Red Alert or StarCraft🤫 The main purpose is assault, not the development of bases, technology, and civilization😅

Base car, such a familiar and warm word

The following contents are all fan fiction and have nothing to do with the original work. They are all created based on the world view of my novel. The contents in [] are explanations Database No. 3/4534/55364/4531/4535/003 Type: Wasteland Corruption Special Form Note: It is a silicon-based special form that is the main cause of nuclear attacks (Special Note No. 4256) Civilization: Human civilization is manifested in the form of falling wasteland (No. 453 Form) with no use value and can be cultivated in small quantities. Civilization is mainly based on observation. Silicon-based artificial civilization is manifested in the early release form, ethical restriction 2C form (No. 013 Form), which is mainly hostile to humans, has low controllability, and has no construction and use value. Science: Before the war, its science and even 1B form had absorbing value, its artificial intelligence technology was usable, and it had important points of attention in brain science. After the war, its basic science completely returned to the 3B2T form (043 special form) with high application and low theory as its main form. Its artificial intelligence ability was almost 0, and its basic form of artificial intelligence was included in the high-risk list. The foundation of brain science has completely dissipated [the author of the article said that psychiatrists are almost impossible to find] brain science capabilities are almost limited to weapons. Its unique weapon "Focus Brain Instrument" is included in the special control list (z45346) and its technology is considered useless for the development of the alliance Ecology: The ecological characteristics of this planet are semi-standard nuclear war wasteland. Most of it is a nuclear war wasteland ecology but with low radiation content. At the same time, the weather conditions are severe and sandstorms occur frequently, and it is classified as an S45353-shaped ecology. This is my first time writing a fanfic. I'm afraid I'll make a mistake, so I'll just write this much. I, the author, will update more in the future, so I will add more.

Really outrageous. After a nuclear war, it would really be six without the sun

Is it possible that the protagonist is a bionic brain?

I have a few questions for the author. Is it reasonable to use lithium batteries for First Intelligent Energy? Second, how is its energy charged? Third, what energy does it use? Solar energy cannot be used without the sun, and nuclear energy and hydropower stations cannot be used in desert environments. Both of these require a large amount of fresh water. They can only choose thermal power plants. Humans have been fighting them for more than a hundred years, but thermal power plants can still survive for more than a hundred years. Won't the battery of the fourth omnic mechanically decay?

I've read Chapter 111 so far! Have a few questions! 1: Is the protagonist's car an anti-gravity car? At present, it looks like the ground is all flat and very solid! The protagonist's vehicle armor is now so powerful that it is not painful to practice artillery shells! The armor of your car is to dismantle other cars! A rough estimate is that modern cement floors can be crushed! ! 2: Villains don't dig trenches or lay landmines! 3: The supporting role is really a supporting role! 4: No one has ever questioned the golden finger upgrade! Advantages: The rhythm is tight and feels like the rhythm of the weird Earthsea!

After reading the first few chapters, my current impression of the size of the base vehicle driven by the protagonist is this.

It is not a base vehicle in the sense of a red alert, but a mobile fortress with a predatory protagonist. The progress is too fast, although it feels like there are still big scenes to follow. The upgrade mechanism of the fortress is not very clear. Now the author has almost forgotten that his fortress can be upgraded.

Tech Savage Why don't you think? The brain is completely underdeveloped?

After reading two pages, it gave me the impression that it was another "Mysterious Earthsea"

The flavor of this wasteland is really good, and the battles are basically big scenes. Although it seems a little less interesting without small fights, after all, the protagonist started out to do big things, so there is nothing wrong with it. However, I was a little scared as the plot of this book progressed. With only a few hundred thousand words, I always felt that I had entered the middle and late stages of the world. Either the world was larger than imagined, or there was an alien planet setting. Otherwise, I always felt that this book was not long. I highly recommend that you pass by and take a look at this book. It is quite good, but I do feel that the details are a bit weak and there is too little written?

The description of the plug-in is unclear, whether it is a travel companion or it is already in this world. There is no description of the structure of the base vehicle or its power. It seems like it takes no time to dismantle the omni-machine and repair it yourself. It seems that the game can be operated with one click, and you can repair whatever you dismantle. So why not dismantle an aircraft or an earth-burrowing one and add the structure, then you can fly to the sky and escape to the earth?

The writing is very graphic! Why was it kicked out of the new book ranking?

. Base vehicle

After reading Chapter 12 before posting, I think the writing style and details are pretty good. Apart from the fact that the writing style of the story itself is a bit flat and not very exciting, it may be that this subject matter really doesn't attract readers. But I like this tone and will always love the idealist style.

When will it be put on the shelves? Hurry up and get the update as soon as possible. The current updates are simply not enough.