A Good Citizen in the World of Film and TV

The beginning of your book is meant to establish the protagonist's character, but instead, you do nothing. The protagonist is nobody, has nothing, and yet he starts seducing women. It's just trying to drive readers away.

The protagonist was framed and detained by the police. After being released, he had already done so much for the police. Why was he still so subservient to the police force afterwards, saying things like, "You're a policeman, I can't hurt you, you can go"? Did he continue to help the police like this afterward? Did he have no temper at all?

The author's synopsis is pretty impressive. Most online novels are for ordinary, loser readers, offering a mental massage to escape the troubles of reality. The fact that urban romance novels still have a large market is proof of this.

This is a rare book; it doesn't copy the original plot and is basically logical. The style is unique, quite different from other books set in Hong Kong variety shows and movies. It lacks the unrealistic arrogance and the unpleasant violence that makes readers uncomfortable, and it doesn't involve the blatant killing of entire families. It's more like a realistic urban setting.

It's so drawn out, the preparation work alone has taken up almost 30 chapters. Has he never seen a woman before?

None of the informants met a good end.

The main character is too short, making it hard to connect with the character.

Who in their right mind would become an informant? If they were, they'd be a mob boss.

This is so tedious! You've talked for twenty chapters but barely touched the page. Other authors pad their word counts, but this is like releasing water from a reservoir!

I'm tired of reading so many novels with system themes, so I've discovered a rare novel without a system. It's rare to find an author who doesn't force a decrease in intelligence; I hope they can maintain this level of dedication!