Datang: Starting from Liancheng Jue and Traveling Through the Heavens

You have changed the plot and then forced it back. Don't you feel awkward? Copying the original work is so good?

The most talented protagonist in Jin Yong's works is Yuan Chengzhi, who achieved his innate talent through a second-rate Hunyuan Gong. Di Yun, who has extremely poor qualifications, relied on the magic scriptures to change his fate and become a congenital. Brother Gou is a real protagonist of destiny, with top-notch magical talents.

What is the talent of the protagonist? The genius level is pretty good. If it's an upgrade flow and a trash flow, I'll polish it up earlier. Now all martial arts literature is a trash upgrade flow and slap in the face.

There is a life and death crisis in the main world. When it comes to traveling to other worlds, there are a lot of resources. If you don't practice martial arts well and wait for the mastery of magic skills, you can go back and solve the life and death crisis. If you want to save this or that all day long, you have to save yourself first. Even if all the Huashan sect is dead, as long as you don't die, it will be enough to carry forward the Watson sect after you have achieved great success. The protagonist's IQ is worrisome and slips away.

Forget it, give up. You have written so much for a fool. It's also not interesting to write. The protagonist seems unintelligent. Author, please do it yourself

Yue Buqun's biggest problem is that he is jealous of talents and has too much power. If you want to work under him, your martial arts and reputation cannot be higher than his, otherwise the end will not be much better than Linghu Chong. After all, if you have really read the original work, you will know that the reason why Yue Buqun hates Linghu Chong is not to conceal his martial arts and make friends with bandits. In fact, knowing these things, Yue Buqun didn't blame Linghu Chong, but others promoted Linghu Chong and belittled him. This was actually admitted by Lao Yue himself in Chapter 37 or Chapter 38. Even if Linghu Chong didn't make friends with gangsters and didn't hide the source of his martial arts, he would still be feared, and even blacklisted, and the end would be very miserable.

The protagonist doesn't learn any magical skills he encounters, he just wants to master the Shen Zhao Jing which is rewarded by the system and the master's martial arts which are quite satisfactory. Are the blood sword techniques and Tang poetry sword techniques that Di Yun learned fake? Didn't you hear about Lao Liu's Tai Chi swordsmanship? Can Lao Feng and Dugu not be able to memorize the Nine Swords? The Evil-Repelling Sword Technique will clear up the trouble if you follow the plot. Get it quickly and smoothly. There are so many martial arts in the martial arts world. If you don't take the initiative to find them, you won't even want them in front of you. I guess the main world feels that it lacks sword skills, lacks lightness skills, lacks this and that. All the heavens are blind, and the resources and wisdom of the entire world can be used. If you follow the plot slowly like this, it is better to join a well-known and decent sect after the crisis is resolved, and slowly practice it. Anyway, the protagonist does not need magical skills.

With the author's writing power and martial arts novel skills, writing to the level of Yu Renyan and the bad guy of Fuwei Escort Agency is the limit. The ancestor of the Blood Knife, Tian Boguang, and the Six Immortals of Peach Valley, could not create characters if they copied the original works. What's more, the names of the Six Immortals of Peach Valley were all changed to "Peach One Peach Two Peach Three Peach Four"... Is this any different from a little fresh meat who doesn't read his lines and shouts "One Two Three Four"? Before you are rich, your heart can't calm down to pay attention to the details, and the future is worrying. In addition, the author's understanding of the original work may come from some unconventional public accounts. He failed to understand the core of Linghu Chong's chivalry, but said that Feng Qingyang's opinion of Linghu Chong's character was inaccurate, and always included some very low-level personal things. In fact, he was just using his love brain to misinterpret Linghu Chong's love and chivalry. It has a kind of absurd sense of humor in which elementary school students cannot understand squares, except for the two-written series. There is also a popular point of distinguishing martial arts people by masters, masters, masters, and low-level figures. It can be seen everywhere. The setting of the details of combat power is hundreds of miles away from the original work. For example, the disciples of the Wang family in Luoyang can win or lose against the disciples of Yue Buqun. If Lin Pingzhi's own mother really has such combat power, can the Fuwei Escort Agency be wiped out? When you write a Jin Yong fan novel, you should first thoroughly understand the original work!

This protagonist is so stupid. He thinks about so many things and has nothing to do. He just starts killing and travels around the world. He wants to be happy with his grudges. Isn't the Wang family just taking in Huashan? Wang Boxen's daughter will be left to inherit the family property and be included in the harem, and the rest will be slaughtered. What about the Wang family? It's called the Huang family, which is the property of the Huashan sect. How wonderful? Then he looked for an opportunity on the Yellow River to destroy the Huashan group. He took Yue Lingshan as the leader, and then accepted Ren Yingying to inherit the demon sect. The most powerful force in the world returned to Huashan. The task was completed, and everyone was happy. Isn't it nice? There are also so many women in the Hengshan sect. As long as all the beautiful ones are collected and the various sects do not surrender, they will send troops to destroy them. After unifying the martial arts world, they will then unify the world. Smiling and proud, if you don't do this, how can you be smiling and proud? How can you be a good person? There are still good people these days?

Roots, stems, branches, leaves, flowers, fruits, can't you remember the names? Why number one to six?

Even cheaters can't beat Dongfang Bubai, the loser.

The good-for-nothing should be abusing the master, it's so hard to think about it before reading this book! ! Goodbye!

The protagonist has been in Swordsman for so many years, how come he still acts like a novice in the world? Author, you are trying to force down the protagonist's intelligence, toughness, and hatred! You keep treating everyone like a fool! I can't read this book! The part about "The Swordsman" was okay. Is this a change of author?

What on earth is the author writing in these chapters? The protagonist is so entangled and entangled every day. Just like Linghu Chong, shouldn't he have given up on him that night when Huashan was besieged? Are you still thinking about saving him every day? The Huashan sect is in danger of being wiped out. It turns out that Linghu Chong, the eldest disciple, is still thinking about the love between his children and is deeply afraid that the Huashan sect will not be destroyed, right? If the protagonist and Yue Buqun hadn't insisted on it, Huashan would have been gone that night. This kind of sb should be far away.

There are no good people in Swordsman except Ning Nuxia and Lin Pingzhi in the early stage. Yilin is also submissive and Yue Lingshan has no likes and dislikes.

I won't talk about turning into a horse, but if you really want to run, you are a BMW and can weigh a thousand pounds. Di Yun is holding a person and still has a broken leg. He can still interfere with you. While the Blood Knife Ancestor and Luohua Liushui are fighting, he turns around and runs away. How can there be a scene of trembling in the snow valley? And what the hell is it about giving Yue Buqun the Divine Sutra? If you have internal strength such as Nine Yin and Nine Yang and hand over the Shenzhao Sutra, although I feel uncomfortable, it's okay, but if you don't have anything, do you still have to offer the Sutra? You are the only one who has memory. If you don't have Huashan Internal Kung Fu in your memory, you are very stupid. Yue Buqun uses Qi to control the sword. It is understandable that he only teaches half of the swordsmanship. What the hell is wrong if he doesn't teach any internal Kung Fu at all? Or does it mean that I have inherited my memory and can remember how old I am and play with urine and mud, but I just can't remember Huashan Internal Skills?

The front is okay, but the back is a piece of shit.