What Should I Do If I Become an Immortal River Crab?

River crab? Deep sea? Are there crabs in the sea? Don't know…

After reading these chapters, the writing is very bland, there is no sense of mystery, the description of the big is not enough, the description of the extraordinary is not clear enough, and there is a feeling that the combination of things has failed.

You can write about the protagonist who has a mysterious thing in his body, but never bring about the system. You can even write about something disgusting, where the protagonist pulls out his clone from his belly, and then lets him fight separately. It is best for the Alien Beast genre to incorporate the Crusu system, and the advantages within it will allow you to continue writing no matter how bad your writing is in the early, middle, or late stages.

As mentioned, I slept until now in the afternoon. (Also interrupted, woohoo) I will make up one more chapter today, 4k+4k+4k If you can get more, post as many as you can At least 1.2 Good night, my dears

First of all, it was written by Du Kang! Maybe not many people read my book, and Huo Huo is reading it as if he were eating a meal replacement, but I still want to tell Huo Du Kang that he came to Qidian to write a book, and the title of the book is the title. A large part of the inspiration for this book comes from Mr. Du Kang, and his shadow hangs over me. So there is nothing to do, just promote the book and tell everyone that he has come to the starting point and opened a new book "The Blade of the Body" In fact, the memory of that book is from a long time ago. I have read the early plot no less than ten times, and the early plot has been imprinted in my mind over the years. It's quite funny. But having said that, everyone who has the ability should support Du Kang. People are much more capable. I am not capable enough and I have to learn to come out of my own way (if you like this type of book, I strongly recommend a certain cat, the Old One) A serious review of this book will be posted in the comment area in the next two days. After reading the first chapter today, I know that this book is a must-have! Most people don't know about Du Kang's previous book, Model Moon, so I'll repeat what he said when he finished the book. [The waves will come, and life will go on] No matter when and where you are now, the touches of the past will be touched again one day in the future.

Your timeline description is a bit confusing, you can make it clearer during the transition. And yours is really like the civilization development of the creation stream, although it is not the creation but the cultivation of civilization!

I feel like the description of time and place is not very clear

If we are writing about the alien beast genre, we can join the Crusu system. In fact, it is the most correct way to go in a mysterious and weird direction. I think it is the best. As I said, fighting interstellar wars in the later period is very annoying. Writing about a crab is not as powerful as writing about a civilization led by a crab. A certain Godzilla is really hard for me to forgive 😭

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It's a bit like the one I've seen, but the main character is a lobster. It's almost exactly the same.

Canyon River Crab Super Evolution, Canyon Pioneer

The timeline is too messy, it gives me a headache to read, and the transitions are baffling. Maybe the author thinks it's more interesting to write it this way? There are many supporting characters recalling the narrative, it's really confusing to watch.

Can you write a novel about being reborn as a crab Pokemon?

Looking at the introduction, it looks a bit like the one next door "How to Become a River Crab"

I thought it was the lol background as the content, alas, gone~

What do you think? You are using Ctuyag's skin to secretly write Azathoth So when will the trumpeter be arranged?

It's beautiful. I like this kind of subject the most.

. . . . . After reading this, I feel pretty good. It's okay if I continue. It's a bit like the 3.6 Billion Duet. It's actually quite good.

Crystal Pioneer beat the river crab to death with 33 qs