The Devilish Lawyer of America

This book is bound to flop soon because the beginning isn't very engaging. After seeing how amazing Chuck is, it's impossible to get into this useless protagonist.

It's so damn long-winded, 16 chapters just keep rambling on and on about the same thing.

In my personal opinion, the protagonist gets his kidneys ripped right at the start and hasn't been able to resolve the situation. Instead of investigating, he's focused on using his skills for comedic effect and flirting. Ripping someone's kidneys... That's just... Even when a major event happens to the protagonist, he can still be funny and flirt with girls?

It's almost chapter 20 already, and you're still writing 50 more chapters like this in the hospital, then another 50 chapters about recovering from kidney injury, and then another 50 chapters?

Is this some kind of slice-of-life American TV series you wrote? It doesn't seem like it at all.

Nonsense, if you cut off a kidney at the beginning, how are you going to write the rest? Put the kidney back in.

I wonder how Audrey will handle her brother; if not handled well, it could be a major flaw.

I initially thought the new book would flop, but it turned out to be surprisingly good. However, your old books update slowly, and the new one even slower, so it's no wonder it's not doing well. I'll wait three months before reading it again, and I hope I won't forget about you then.

I've read over 300 chapters; the themes and content are rich and varied. I'm completely engrossed in the book and can't tear myself away. The author has the potential to be a top-tier writer...

Why is the scene starting with kidney slices? It looks so unpleasant!