Something's Wrong with This Hinata in Konoha

A very good Naruto fanfic, written in a personal style. The protagonist was given a terrible start but found a wonderful path. The author has completed many backgrounds, including the three dark generations and political struggles, which has changed the general trend of the plot to a certain extent. The novel flows smoothly throughout and has many exciting points. It is worth reading.

I feel like Nohara Rin is a failure. The impression is really bad.

Open the book on the day the account is opened and take a look at the trumpet

I don't understand a bit. The author has laid so much groundwork just to write about the Dead Water Gate and then rise to the top. But in my opinion, Minato should no longer resent Minato when he kept the protagonist, accepted the protagonist as his disciple, and taught the Flying Thunder God even though he had never met him before! Don't talk to me about it. The protagonist has already repaid his kindness by saving Rin Obito and so on. It's understandable that fellow students help him. The third generation Danzo attacked the protagonist and ended up getting angry at Minato, ah! ! Life-saving grace, I'm sorry, I will take good care of your wife, is this what you mean? I found that if the protagonists of Naruto fanfics are not invincible at the beginning, they are a bit crazy and have persecution delusions. This is the same as the previous limited-rated Naruto movie. The more I watch it, the more weird it becomes. For the sake of impressing someone else's wife, I forcibly wrote down the original wife. Well, it's really hard to comment.

Let me talk about evaluation first. The peak of this book is at the Night of the Kyuubi. Before the Night of the Nine-Tails, it was very good-looking and had the potential to become a god; after the Night of the Nine-Tails, it suddenly became boring. Let me analyze the reasons. The fun part of the early stage is that it beats a bunch of NT settings and low-energy concepts of the original work, and vents the bad temper of the comic readers, which is very refreshing. After the Night of the Nine-Tails, the protagonist came to power. At this time, the author drew his sword and looked around in confusion, and began to write about internal affairs and construction. The writing is pretty good, but it doesn't have the excitement of the previous one, so it's boring. I try to come up with a solution. The author can continue to torture Kishimoto, continue the exhilaration of early debugging, expand the scope from Konoha Village to the entire ninja world, and continue to criticize Kishimoto's world view.

The last few chapters have been poorly written. The three generations were completely treated like political idiots and were beaten passively. They have been in power for many years and have no political ability at all. The protagonist stands on the moral high ground and kills them.

Is this really not a trumpet? The author herself becomes the heroine. What a blast. If it's not a trumpet, it's a copycat, and it has the same cover, even the author's pseudonym 😰

Long-time fire fans have approved of this book. Although there are flaws, I haven't seen any book without them. Before I read this book, I saw some comments saying that Lin was not in line with the character. As far as I'm concerned, she is just a tool. If the purpose of the plot is achieved, that's fine.

If you don't know how to write about politics, don't mess with the original work to highlight the protagonist's writing style. Danzo's writing is quite good, but the third generation's writing is just like a piece of cake.

I saw Princess Hinata on the cover come in and then give it to Huang Mao? Cut it, cut it

I didn't understand the chapter about preventing Lin from being pierced by Kakashi's Raikiri. Madara had performed a technique on the hearts of Lin and Obito that could only be lifted by piercing the hearts. This was a control type. The author, Hokage, still didn't see too much of it. I would like to ask why this was not brought up?

Thanks to the operation officer for the big picture~

I feel that Minato is very dangerous. I feel that he has shouldered so much pressure for the protagonist, and then he did not squeeze the protagonist like Orochimaru did. He also wanted to accept the protagonist as his disciple. That's what his biological father is like. It would be unreasonable if the protagonist watched Minato die later, or because he was careless and Minato died.

Let me tell you a joke, Konohamaru, my father died more than ten years before I was born, and I was born to my uncle and my mother. Have you heard this joke?

You can cut it off after watching Danzo. The next three generations are all water. Everyone can withdraw

It's true that there are too many fans who collect stamps. I don't like stamp collecting, and I don't even like the big pillar wooden style, which is not as handsome as Susana. Besides, I don't agree with the Naruto mouth style (I have seen some edited videos, and the lines of each character are really cool, very handsome, and very popular). I have always wanted to see the time traveler use the correct three views. Crush Naruto, the killer (I think ninjas are killers, why talk about such a lofty theme as peace)? The three views of the world, expose the ignorant connotations of these elementary school students' culture (liberal arts philosophy), especially the character of Naruto, a garbage crane, if you don't have a good mind, just take care of yourself

Let's not talk about how good the writing is. Just because the author helped Kishimoto fill in so many pitfalls, it's worth reading.

Impossible! If the previous clan dies (the eldest son), the second son will inherit. Then someone must be trying their best to let the eldest son die. Only a newly born child of the Zong family can become a Zong family. In this way, the separated family will always be a slave (without any hope of recovery), otherwise there will always be ways to make other people take action.

First of all, let me say that it is wrong to not think of bonds. Hinata is separated from the family and is just a slave. When she cannot control her life or death. You want to fall in love, then do you want to solve the caged bird, or stop the night of genocide? Should we kill Obito and Madara? Acknowledge the Yondaime as your teacher, do you want to stop the Night of the Nine Tails? In order to survive, do you want to kill the Hyuga clan and the third generation of Danzo? This makes it very clear. I traveled through time and was tied to Konoha for the rest of my life just to be a nanny. But there is a system that allows me to be more willful. Is this different from Naruto? A passionate man, saving the world? Konoha has abused me thousands of times, but I treat Konoha like my first love?

It's rare to see a story about Naruto engaging in political struggles. Even if the third generation is too drawn into a fight, it doesn't make sense. Most of them are pretty good, but the handling of a few characters looks too uncomfortable. One is that Rin was written in such a mindless and romantic way that it felt like Rin and the Uchiha heroine were written by the same person. The second one was to transfer Minato away from Konoha to promote the Nine-Tails Rebellion. After he succeeded, he clearly had the Nine-Tails Chakra in his hand, but Kushina was asked to drag on and give him some Chakra every once in a while... I can't say it's poisonous, it just looks weird. The two super-refreshing plots were not enjoyable at all, and I just thought about these two people.

Are there any suitable character pictures for Almighty book lovers? If you have any, please post some, I would be very grateful~

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