Naruto: This Hyuga Is Acting Strange

I feel like Nohara Rin is a failure. The impression is really bad.

Open the book on the day the account is opened and take a look at the trumpet

I don't understand a bit. The author has laid so much groundwork just to write about the Dead Water Gate and then rise to the top. But in my opinion, Minato should no longer resent Minato when he kept the protagonist, accepted the protagonist as his disciple, and taught the Flying Thunder God even though he had never met him before! Don't talk to me about it. The protagonist has already repaid his kindness by saving Rin Obito and so on. It's understandable that fellow students help him. The third generation Danzo attacked the protagonist and ended up getting angry at Minato, ah! ! Life-saving grace, I'm sorry, I will take good care of your wife, is this what you mean? I found that if the protagonists of Naruto fanfics are not invincible at the beginning, they are a bit crazy and have persecution delusions. This is the same as the previous limited-rated Naruto movie. The more I watch it, the more weird it becomes. For the sake of impressing someone else's wife, I forcibly wrote down the original wife. Well, it's really hard to comment.

Let me talk about evaluation first. The peak of this book is at the Night of the Kyuubi. Before the Night of the Nine-Tails, it was very good-looking and had the potential to become a god; after the Night of the Nine-Tails, it suddenly became boring. Let me analyze the reasons. The fun part of the early stage is that it beats a bunch of NT settings and low-energy concepts of the original work, and vents the bad temper of the comic readers, which is very refreshing. After the Night of the Nine-Tails, the protagonist came to power. At this time, the author drew his sword and looked around in confusion, and began to write about internal affairs and construction. The writing is pretty good, but it doesn't have the excitement of the previous one, so it's boring. I try to come up with a solution. The author can continue to torture Kishimoto, continue the exhilaration of early debugging, expand the scope from Konoha Village to the entire ninja world, and continue to criticize Kishimoto's world view.

The last few chapters have been poorly written. The three generations were completely treated like political idiots and were beaten passively. They have been in power for many years and have no political ability at all. The protagonist stands on the moral high ground and kills them.

Is this really not a trumpet? The author herself becomes the heroine. What a blast. If it's not a trumpet, it's a copycat, and it has the same cover, even the author's pseudonym 😰

Long-time fire fans have approved of this book. Although there are flaws, I haven't seen any book without them. Before I read this book, I saw some comments saying that Lin was not in line with the character. As far as I'm concerned, she is just a tool. If the purpose of the plot is achieved, that's fine.

If you don't know how to write about politics, don't mess with the original work to highlight the protagonist's writing style. Danzo's writing is quite good, but the third generation's writing is just like a piece of cake.

I saw Princess Hinata on the cover come in and then give it to Huang Mao? Cut it, cut it

I didn't understand the chapter about preventing Lin from being pierced by Kakashi's Raikiri. Madara had performed a technique on the hearts of Lin and Obito that could only be lifted by piercing the hearts. This was a control type. The author, Hokage, still didn't see too much of it. I would like to ask why this was not brought up?