I Ascend to the Throne of God with Arcane Magic

The biggest advantage of this book The author really listens to advice. Some unreasonable things will be improved if they can be improved. And he really worked hard. The plot is very interesting. Disadvantages of this book The author is a newcomer, so there are more or less deficiencies in various aspects of description. There will be more problems in the early stage. But this does not prevent the book he wrote from being an excellent book. (It can also be regarded as an advantage. As long as you can persist, the newcomer with high potential will be booked by the master) Keep it up, author. Damn it, if you can't become a great master or make money by writing books, I will fucking stand on your head and eat xxx (as long as you keep this state, stick with it)

After reading more than twenty chapters, let me tell you my opinion. I feel that the description of details is not enough, especially the characterization and relationship arrangement are very rigid, resulting in an unnatural plot. There are also some wordings in the plot. It may be because the author followed his usual speaking and chatting habits or for other reasons. I always feel that it is a bit awkward sometimes. Otherwise, there are no problems. After reading more than 20 chapters, I didn't find any serious bugs that would affect the reading experience. Summary: It's okay. Maybe it's because the author's skills are a bit poor when writing a novel for the first time, but there's no big problem with the plot and arrangement. If you want to read it, just read the plot.

Let's stack up first, I just voted for the monthly vote There are a few questions I want to complain about 1: Regarding the talent issue, it is also a legendary talent. Risa's evaluation is that she can become a legend by practicing at home. So, can I think that her talent is strong enough to create a transcendent realm on her own? In comparison, if the protagonist hadn't eaten the godhead at the cost of almost dying, he wouldn't even know anything about the transcendent realm. If the protagonist's talent is not inclined to practice but to fighting, then I can tolerate it, but the reality is that it is clearly stated in the protagonist's territory section that when the protagonist has so many entry bonuses, as a person whose main profession is an arcanist, no one has as many blue bars as a homebody. And so far, although it is said that the legendary talent is basically the protagonist of the version, compared with other legendary talent owners, Moon Elf will not discuss it because it has not been activated yet. Taiya and Risa have made it clear that except for one legendary talent, the other talents are also quite outstanding, and Risa even has a There are a lot of buffs that increase output and increase affinity. In comparison, the protagonist, as a magic practitioner, has low-level affinity, as if he has nothing but an almighty. If there is no system panel, he is nothing. So what qualifications does he have to have this legendary talent? They are all legendary talents. Others have a bunch of joint buffs, and they can generate extraordinary fields on their own. Sitting at home with blue bars is better than you going out and posting a bunch of entries. So what qualifications does the Almighty have to sit at the same table as the torrent of the four elements? It is said that the Almighty can learn other professional skills, but the actual combat performance is that those professions are just to add buffs. Those who can be beaten by other professions can definitely be beaten by arcanists. If arcanists can't be beaten, you can't beat other professions even if you use them to their advantage. I just added a few entries. As a result, the priest, a profession that has been mentioned for a long time, has not made any move, as if the protagonist does not want to use this talent at all In comparison, this description of the Almighty is more like the gold-level talent of Shadow Zizi. It is far from the legendary strength, but it is still possible to break through the legend 2: Regarding the terms of extraordinary domain wisdom and extraordinary domain controller. In the previous entry, Angela can increase the probability of controlling the extraordinary field once she takes action. Later, when the count takes action, he can directly control it. When watching Benfica fight, he can also directly control the opponent's extraordinary field. It is not bad. But the newly emerged wisdom field is said to analyze the world, but what is fed back is still the extraordinary field, and the triggering effect is the same as the entry, which requires fighting enemies who already have the extraordinary field. So the question is, what is the meaning of its existence? In terms of effect, the field that the protagonist acquired at a great cost is not much better than the entries he had obtained long ago. I just feel that the protagonist is purely thankless in doing this. Three: Regarding plot issues, as of now, the two major plots are all about the demon prince plotting against the gods. The gods can only do it afterwards, and they can't even mend the plot. So I don't understand. There are many powerful gods among the gods, and everyone is killed from the mountains of corpses and seas of blood. No one is worse than anyone else. So why is it that only the devil prince can scheme against others? All the gods are like stupid pigs with their own realm of gods? If it is said that the world is in turmoil and other gods are lagging behind, it is obviously not true. After all, the turbulence of the world treats the gods and the abyss equally, so the top cannot move and the bottom cannot move. In the divine system, at least the gods can still have allies, but if the abyss side doesn't use their wits, it means they have nothing to do with it. No matter how you think about it, the gods should be able to suppress the abyss. But the reality is that the great northern country was almost destroyed and the gods did not move. Their hometown was demolished and the elves and gods did not know about it. In comparison, what qualifications do they have to be on the same level as the demon prince? Four: Regarding the issue of players, many game articles will write about players, so I don't think it has anything to do with it. However, the players written in this book are often only used to provide experience. The ones Mo Yun wrote in detail just said that they want to build a union, which may be very powerful in the future, but I really don't see any role in the plot. At least other players have descriptions of functions that help break down the city. Have these players done anything? But in general, the advantages are quite considerable. If you don't suppress the protagonist's combat power, it's not that no matter how powerful you are in silver, you will be a fourth-class person in gold. And the setting of attribute points is also pretty good. At least you can really see why there is so much difference between the Golden Peak and the Legendary one.

He was reborn as a street fish and returned to the top 30 of the server? You're counting down, right? You haven't brought back any mental strength or experience, right? You were a trash fish in your previous life, right?

To put it bluntly, those who travel back in time will be worse than those in the future. They always meet the person in the future and the person in the future. In fact, in the end, they are not all dependent on themselves. They always spend their time on useless things and waste a lot of writing. Can he be better than you in the future? The follow-ups that are not as strong as yours are basically just passers-by. What's the point of spending so much time here? As long as you are strong, so what if you meet someone strong in the future?

This is the worst time an arcanist has ever been hacked. It is clear that the arcanist is a top researcher among mages, but according to the author's description of the protagonist, the protagonist makes the arcanist into a piece of garbage who does not learn and relies solely on luck and exhaustive methods 😰

，，， 1. It's cool. Why don't you write this kind of game article more happily? The whole text gives people a very depressing feeling, and when I want to feel happy, I always leave it in one stroke. The level is completely useless. This section is bronze, the next section is silver, then gold. You can write so much experience, but you only write the level when you upgrade, which completely misses the feeling of upgrading in the game 2. Players, since you have players, you should write about the fourth natural disaster. I am not asking you to write group portraits, but you should not write the player part like this. There is no outstanding player participation at all. In version 4.0, The players seem to be playing house. 3. The protagonist has some characteristics but is not outstanding at all. The Almighty? No, it's just a mage with high average attributes who can use other professional skills! ! ! To be honest, it doesn't reflect the characteristics, skills, and expertise of the protagonist at all. After doing so many things (fighting, completing tasks, and you can get several), I don't see any use at all -_-||, there is no feeling of qualitative change at all. I don't even bother to talk about the clones and the gods, the battle scenes are completely lackluster and mediocre. 4. I can definitely see that the author wants to imitate the super-god mechanic and write his own super-god, Almighty, and Arcanist. But the imitation is completely different, the version was too hastily passed through, and after 4 versions in such a short time, to be honest the main plot is too bad (players). The professional league is imitated and rubbish. The protagonist's skills and expertise are used to play the game, but the description of the game is too little. Alas, I can't complain. It's hard to describe how to cut players' leeks. Just say you don't value player experience. You also know how to attract players. Say you value it, but you don't say much about what you value. It's a complete disregard for players, and it doesn't even count as stocking. . . . . It's not that this book is poorly written, but for those who have read Super God, such a comparison is really, alas. . . . .

Have you forgotten the ability to check other people's attributes and skills? You can see it for a while and you can't see it for a while. Don't normal people look at the attribute skills first when they see something powerful? The numbers you use are a bit outrageous. A gold player guessed them for 2-3 days.

I want to know how the protagonist, who has a legendary strong man in his family, was killed in the city? First of all, there is a legendary strong man in the family. The protagonist has nothing to save his life? If there is no life-saving thing, then this legendary strong man is always watching? If there are neither life-saving things nor keeping an eye on it, that means you don't care about the protagonist's life at all. If you die, you will die. Don't say that you won't encounter danger in the city. Is it true that no one has ever died in the city? Isn't life-saving equipment just for preventing accidents? Isn't it just a precaution? If not, forget it. I obviously have the ability but I won't give it. Can the author give a suitable reason? In my opinion, this approach is just to make the protagonist die. I am afraid that giving the protagonist something too good will keep the protagonist alive This legend can neither give the protagonist a reputation to make others jealous, nor can it keep an eye on the protagonist every day to protect his safety. It cannot also provide life-saving equipment to prevent accidents. So what is the use of this legend?

Players are not poisonous, but being so nice to players is poisonous. The tasks released are too simple and the rewards are too generous. The result is that players come to you to learn skills and gain experience points. I am speechless.

Ai created by a friend and a fan art of Taiya, which one do you like most?

Why do we need players? It's crazy. I was enjoying watching it, but suddenly I don't want to watch it anymore.

The birth is too high, there are golden guards and legendary elders At the same time, there are top talents. This kind of start is equivalent to giving up the fun of climbing the class, acquiring treasures, and learning new things It is said that the protagonist will be assassinated, but it does not write the feeling that the storm is coming There is basically no sense of tension The most important first adventure is to follow a team two levels higher than yourself to deal with an opponent with no difficulty. This arrangement completely reduces the opportunity for the protagonist's performance. After seeing this, I can't raise any sense of expectation

Opinion House As the plot unfolds, everyone has also asked many questions about Tingyu. If you have any opinions about this book, please submit it here, and Tingyu will correct or answer it based on the actual situation Thank you again for your support, readers_(:з∠)_ ps. I will delete any posts that directly curse or have no basis at all

No, Tingyu is going to lose his mind Readers, please share any ideas Including: skill name, expertise name, milestone name

Either don't write it, or write it well. I haven't seen many well-written books. The only one I approve of is "This Game Is Too Real", a group portrait written very well by the players. As for players being super righteous, then dozens of players dare to call them players. There are also those psychological reactions that I really don't want to comment on when I write them. There is also the Yggdrasil game. I only saw the first one or two hundred pictures. That Demacia, this person is really unpleasant. In short, as long as the players are written about, what other players' own worlds, live broadcasts, barrages, anchors, oh, those eggy things, once written, will be just a mess as long as they are not written well. And Ready Player One, reading the comments, many people said that this book is the best among the best, but I read Two Worlds, and the barrage in the book was quite disturbing to me. If I remember correctly, according to the setting, this game is a global one that determines the fate and future of mankind. So, what is going on with the people in these barrages? It seems like it has nothing to do with them, and it is just hanging high. What? The future of all human beings around the world does not include the people in these barrages, right?

The writing is very green. I have seen the players arrive now. The main problem is that the plot and routines are too cliche. You can almost guess what the protagonist will do next. There is no eye-catching and unexpected plot. And I feel that the author is about to collapse the combat power system before it reaches a hundred chapters. The economy has already collapsed. Because the writing is about online game DND, combat power cannot be directly applied, so the author made some changes to the combat power system. However, the author's writing skills are obviously not enough, and he cannot master the combat power system he set well. The gradual collapse is expected But after all, it is the author's first time to write a book, so the requirements cannot be too high. I can only say that this is a satisfactory work of pseudo-DND and online game cheating.

Actually, it would be better to change to a plug-in. The novels ten years ago were written in this way. All good things are given to the protagonist. The plug-in of the Almighty looks great, but in fact it is only useful in the early stage and it is easy to distract the energy. For talented players and protagonists, becoming an arcanist is already on par with the gods. I thought ten years later Now the arcanist version has been upgraded. As a researcher in the mage profession, you can fuse divinity to become an ancient god's arcane magic, you can transform creatures and wrestle with dragons, you can also rise to the sky in a floating city to hunt gods. So I felt particularly awkward when I read that the protagonist of this book is an arcanist. When I say he is an arcanist, doesn't it feel like he is still a mage? Either take risks to gain experience or deal with conspiracies. Mature arcanists have already used their souls to create artificial intelligence auxiliary systems. I went to the Kingdom Library to collect all the knowledge. I discussed with my friends' chamber of commerce to borrow some resources, made a humanoid golem, and then polished it with my belongings. I am always more interested in conspiracies. Take a quick step, then find a place with good scenery, use spells and golems to dig a base hundreds of meters deep, study the technology while building a clay golem production line, and then send it out to gain experience. I think this is the combination of arcanist and Chinese Taoist spirit. It becomes a legend and slowly comes out to settle the accounts!

Sure enough, reading makes you young, and you are so familiar with the plot that you can dream back to your junior high school life of plugging the battery into a universal charger, downloading pirated TXT novel files all night long, and sneaking around in the corner of the classroom with a button phone every day.

It may be an earlier article, but there are often bugs in the plot. The male protagonist's character is indirect, and the original plot character is a dog licker. At first, whenever the original plot character is involved, the male protagonist will try his best to lick it, and try every means to build a relationship. He looks like he is honored to be a subordinate, and his inferiority is engraved in his bones. Later, he becomes very strong. He is one of the countless strong men in the mainland legends, and there are two Legend works as a backstage, and when I see the characters in the original plot, I no longer take them as subordinates, but instead accept apprentices or subordinates. I feel very happy. I feel very happy giving gold coins as gifts. I don't have enough money to develop the territory (when I was richest, I had half a million gold coins). I go to various banquets to build relationships and attract investment. Giving hundreds of thousands of gold coins to my apprentices and saying that I have no meaning to the money is nothing...

I thought it was a fantasy novel, but I didn't expect that there are players who ordered a chapter. Can the author refund the starting coins?

Can I get a refund? I feel like I've been deceived and the protagonist seems to have been outwitted.

Angela

I feel like my back is a little wet (subjective evaluation)

The boss hides his secrets

I've given it all to you, not even a drop has been lost😭😭😭

It's the end of the month and I'll give you ten monthly passes to help you hurry up.

The author is always updating, updating, updating, and repeating.

I hope the next one will be the real Lord of the West fantasy, not the fourth natural disaster novel

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