Spell Return: Possessing the Power of Shakya

Is the protagonist's strength performance average? And what kind of gb is Ruoxi of the Chanyuan? Before this character came out, the protagonist's character was okay, but once he came out...

Overwhelmed? Shakya is not that weak, right?

Although I don't want to say it, why does the protagonist, knowing the original plot, let the knotweed eat the uncle's finger, and then forcefully move it back to the original work? It is clear that a container can be given to the uncle, but in the end he deliberately causes so many troubles. It's so strange.

The combat power is a bit too much, the secondary settings are a bit too much, the characters are a bit broken, and the plot is a bit messy. Let's leave it like that. After all, there aren't many spells that can be written.

Currently there are only 2 spell books that will be updated within three days

The heroine created by a fan is really on the verge of death

After seeing Ruoxi come out, I became familiar with the author's writing style, so I withdrew.

That comic has all kinds of random settings that I don't even want to read. Confucius is so ugly that you might as well use Ashmita from Saint Seiya, who is so handsome and powerful.

The classic novice writer likes to do something stupid: creating original female protagonists in fan fiction.

Judging from the name, I still want to see it. But the evaluation in the comment area was not very good, so I gave up in the end.

Sakyamuni

I gave up when I saw the word Ruoxi. It would be too inconsistent to put these two words in a fanfic with a background of District 11...🤔

What the hell is there a Japanese named Ruoxi?

It's fierce, it's considered the strength of Tiga

I thought it was the awakened one from Fate, or from the Great Desolate World, but it turned out to be from the Final Valkyrie.

If you read it and tell the truth, will you still read what I write?

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't be embarrassed to write them.

Original heroine? To be honest, I don't really like it

There are so many girls in the same group, why don't you? It has to be something original... It would be strange if some people like it

Everyone, please be honest, am I not good at writing? You don't want to read it anymore.

I would like to suggest that you try not to write about something with dark spots like Valkyrie, and this one is actually a niche one.

What a waste of creativity, man, this theme idea is really good. First of all, the name of the protagonist is really poisonous. You see, there are no such inconsistent names in popular fan fiction. What's more, it's so cool that you can't catch people. My opinion is to rewrite it

Why is the protagonist named Ye Yan who was born in a common Japanese family?

It's a waste of creativity. Would you mind polishing it carefully and publishing it again using Shakya's creativity?

I feel like the protagonist doesn't have much strength

By the way, brother, how much is your down payment? 🙂

Good news, old guys, old irons, it's finally on the shelves.

Your name is not suitable for the spell return battle, but it is suitable for the ace censor.

This movie is about a few spells and the ability of Sakyamuni that is rarely written about. Unfortunately, the male protagonist Sakyamuni's ability is not as strong as expected. Also, I personally don't like Chanyuan Ruo Xi who has been pestering the male protagonist. This character's personality and disgusting first appearance are the reasons why I don't like it much but disgust me. Because, I prefer Jingyu to be the heroine or not have a heroine at all. When I read chapter 26, I couldn't accept the protagonist tricking the knotweed into eating his finger. The original spell was eaten by the knotweed voluntarily. I stopped reading after chapter 27. The above is my personal opinion.

As soon as I started watching it, I knew that the spelling pattern was too stingy, so don't come here all the time.