Earth Demon Ancestor

Isn't the author writing about one realm a year? You have achieved several realms a year. Do you want to write about becoming an immortal in a few years? I reminded you last time. You said that you are not contaminated with cause and effect when writing in a simple way, but I haven't written much about various things in my own cultivation. I feel like I am cheating. The author should delete these things I wrote. It depends on how you write later. I'm new to this article, I suggest you read Xian Ni, especially the transformation into mortals The author should be a novice and can't control his writing This should be deleted by you.

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This kind of non-human abortion is relatively novel and quite good.

This book is very good, I recommend it to you.

Do you have any recommendations for novels of the same genre? This one is too short. I want to keep it for now.

The writing is pretty good, but the author lacks understanding of snakes; friends who have lived in rural areas all know that a steep slope to a human is like flat ground to a snake, unless it is a smooth cement surface.

If you walk alone, who will you become? What kind of ancestor will you become? Opening the way for all sentient beings and allowing all sentient beings to follow it is called becoming an ancestor. A person who walks alone and has his own way can only be called an exception. It has nothing to do with becoming an ancestor.

Too poisonous, the protagonist has double standards, sacrificing himself for the beast? You don't deserve to die if you eat mice, but you don't deserve to die if others kill animals.

Cultivation is idealistic, and science is materialistic. Scientific assistance is necessary, but too much mixing will affect reading. This comment represents only one person

I really like this kind of writing, especially the writing of Xiaocao and her mother. Xiaocao is so mature. Hahaha, when she grows up, she should be the only one among human beings who can cultivate immortality. By the way, there is also the old Taoist priest Chang Qinghuan!

Chapter 40: He died from a poisonous attack. I originally thought I could watch it without using my brain, but when I saw this, I found that I really couldn't stand it anymore. The author likes to write inexplicable coincidences to make the protagonist appear divine, but the writing is so blunt and deliberate that even if I read it without thinking, I feel like I am about to get embarrassed. In addition, I really like to explain the practice in blockbuster movies. I don't know if it's my problem or something else. Anyway, I think these explanations are very far-fetched. Since the author has already established that human beings cannot practice cultivation, but has left behind a lot of valuable scripture research, let the protagonist rely on the wisdom of his predecessors to practice all the way. He likes to pretend to be profound and explain a lot of things, which is extremely far-fetched. The most embarrassing thing is that when writing a part of the plot, the author likes to forcibly create a supporting character who is subdued, first making him do stupid things, and then having the person next to him deny his behavior. He tells him that he is wrong, and then brings the plot back to the normal level. This way of writing, although the plot does not really develop the plot to reduce intelligence, is really embarrassing. After examination, a group of police forensic doctors found that there was no murder weapon or trace of the murderer. Based on the wounds and a few scales on the body of the deceased, they said that the murderer might be a snake, and that they might have been stabbed through the body by a snake, even in winter. Although the old policeman came out to object later, saying that this thing was impossible and that there should be a murderer with great skills, but this kind of plot was so awkward that I almost got cancer from embarrassment when I watched it. It's okay if you have a fantasy background, but this is a novel with an urban background. In order to make the police support this point of view, the author even wrote a policeman who likes to read fantasy novels, so that he can firmly believe in this matter. All I can say is that I can read novels without thinking, but I can't lose my normal common sense. Even if you ask the police to search first, and after searching everywhere, no murderer or murder weapon is found, and in the end there are only a few scales and crawling marks left, and then one or two people joke about whether the murderer is a snake, and then others directly deny it, this is much better, instead of letting people living normally in a normal urban background immediately think that non-human forces are at work. Come on, brothers, I am looking for other novels about alien beasts. Brothers, if you have any good novels about alien beasts, you can recommend them to me. Thank you!

The front of this book is good, but the back is a piece of shit. I seriously doubt that the author has changed. Let me talk about the difference I feel before and after The early plot is both reasonable and well-founded, both in terms of the protagonist's practice and the official reaction. The protagonist had various restrictions when he first started practicing. He studied various classics and asked everywhere for advice. There was a lot of foreshadowing before and after the breakthrough. What about the rest? All the restrictions on practice have disappeared, and anyone can practice. The protagonist's practice has also become a period of seclusion. This younger brother talks about it, and that younger brother talks about it, and he breaks through after leaving the isolation. There is no difference before and after the breakthrough, he just keeps breaking through. He handles small things casually and is powerless to deal with big things. At the last moment, he relies on his unwillingness to admit defeat and explodes. The previous official reaction is also good, something about Longyuan Mountain appears The incident was not avoided, various investigations were very detailed, and the official descriptions were detailed, but everything turned into a mess after that. People from other countries had arrived early for the Longyuan Mountain people's involvement, and the officials showed up at the end. Then they were shocked, and then reported it. The leaders didn't believe it, so they held another meeting to discuss it, and then they were shocked. Some people didn't believe it. Yuanshan relies entirely on avoiding Longyuan Mountain to develop the plot. I am afraid that facing Longyuan Mountain directly will not lead to good plot I remember that in a previous chapter, readers thought that the plot of spiritual energy recovery would follow. The author also clarified that it was not spiritual energy recovery. Some of the chapters that followed did not follow the path of spiritual energy recovery. The following chapters were completely based on the spiritual energy recovery routine. The protagonist's younger brother showed up around the world to show extraordinary power, and netizens were shocked. They don't believe it, and then avoid these things with all kinds of cold treatment The gap between the front and back of the book is really too big, especially the psychological description of the characters later, which is replaced by shock. If the plot collapses, it can be said that the outline is not done well, but all kinds of details are the strength of an author's writing. The description of the previous details can no longer be found in the later plots. One has to wonder whether the book was really written by the same person before and after?

Why are the comments section all about good things? I was addicted after reading the first three chapters.

How long will it take to fight with the authorities? I'm really convinced. Every chapter almost says that the official is shocked and can't believe that there is a mysterious power. Are the officials stupid or are you fooling me? The title of each chapter is stupid. I'm convinced. I won't order it again. I spent more than 30 yuan to read this book. It's really annoying.

Every time this author uses a title to attract people, in fact it is just water and has nothing to do with the title.

The protagonist makes alchemy

I regretted it. Why did I spend money to read this book? The chapters were shocking and attractive. When I clicked on them, they were all vague sayings. I just wanted to see you show yourself as a saint. It's been more than 200 chapters. The protagonist is still invisible. Is it about you? He's gone.

I really wonder if the author hired a ghostwriter. From the beginning, it can be seen that the author has some skills, but from the back, it is just a pretentious writing. It is not only embarrassing but also very clumsy. I have written several chapters to explain things in one sentence, but there is no level at all.

The more you look at it later! The more I don't understand, the various techniques for cultivating immortals are given to human beings! Is it because the pig's trotters are hunted down by humans in the end? Or is the pig's trotters transformed into a woman and married to a human being as a human slave in the end of the play? Anyway, look at the back, the pig's feet are always used as women to build human beings

I counted, and it's close to 200 chapters. The chapter names contain shock, and 13 of them are sensational. It's a completely shocking article.

When meeting with high-level leaders of the country, instead of using a giant snake and python to intimidate people, they also use a clone (an imaginary object of white bones). This kind of nondescript demon clan, what else can they say about the demon clan's strength and its human branch? It's a lie.

After reading thirty chapters, I found that there is not a single person in this novel with a slightly normal IQ.

I don't understand why I have to be so involved with human beings when I can seek the truth alone. If I don't write about human beings, I won't be able to survive, right? The only useful thing about this book is that I can't insist on putting it on the shelves. It just saves money.

I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw the police going into the mountain to search. I was caught reading a book in the city library and was caught on camera. Now in this world, some people can spread rumors half way through the world with just one mouth. And there is a video screen. The scales behind them cannot be broken by a knife. The scales of these two people will snap off, right? The police went into the mountain to fight in the snow, but there were actually people who left the team. The key is that they saw that "scholar ghost" when they went in. The most outrageous thing was that they didn't even realize it. They were there to arrest people. They have professional investigative capabilities, right?

Has the author never seen children in the mountains? I have, and I can tell you responsibly that the grass in the book is completely made up of random imaginations. A real little girl from a mountain village, with low self-esteem and a little cautious. For example, my daughter was drinking Yakult, and the child also wanted to drink it, but she did not dare to say that she wanted to drink it. She told her mother that she was thirsty and gave her water, but she refused to drink it. It took a long time to figure out that she also wanted to drink it. The next time I see her, she will huddle next to an adult, smile at you when she recognizes you, and greet you first before responding to you. It's not what the author thought at all. How can he be so familiar and cheerful? It completely violates the logical character design.

After 300 chapters, I feel like it was written by AI. It's so confusing.

My impression after reading Chapter 40 is that the writing is just plain writing, without logic, and it also likes to deliberately show off to others.

This book really gets worse as it gets written. At the beginning, the protagonist's experience of seeking enlightenment was relatively good, but the transition from the appearance of the signal tower was a bit abrupt, and later it became a homogeneous routine.