Pokemon: From the Start, I Hatched an Annihilape

I've read up to chapter 171 and I can't stand the poison anymore, so I'm here to give the author my feedback. First of all, to put it nicely, the fact that I was able to endure the bad writing and keep reading means that the author's content and subject matter are very good, even if there are some flaws.

Damn it, I can't take it anymore! I'm opening Monster Hunter in a second! All those Greatswords—Odogaron, Rathalos, Tobi-Kadachi, Barroth, Rathalos, Diablos, Pink Rathian, Rathian, Leviathan, Zephyr, Azure Rathalos, Bazelgeuse, Ulquiorra, Anjanath, Deviljho, Kirin, Rajang, Nergigante, Kulve Taroth, Ice Bead Dragon, Banbaron, Kushala Daora, Teostra, Velkhana, Namielle, Lunastra, Vaal Hazak…

The later parts are completely unbearable. Here are a few points: 1. He's utterly selfish and self-serving. 2. He's like Gouhao, practically another version of Gouhao, even more disgusting. Pokémon aren't something you can just get by wanting them, nor can you cheat, deceive, or steal them. The chapter about stealing eggs disgusted me.

My long review above was a bit harsh, I hope you won't mind. I really like the world the author creates, and I also really like the monsters and people the author describes. But I loathe, I utterly loathe the protagonist the author created, which is why I say this.

Meimeizi

The protagonist does seem like a version of Goku stealing eggs. The reason people like Pokémon is because of the bonds between Pokémon and the connections formed between people on their journeys. But this protagonist is treating monsters and Pokémon as tools to avoid disasters. There's some affection, but not much. I think the protagonist needs to have some boundaries. For the sake of the legendary boulder, he really has no bottom line, completely disregarding ordinary people.

Dude, do you even have a plan for the protagonist's power level progression? He's physically unparalleled and doesn't use greatswords or hammers, but he uses a katana instead. Of course, there's nothing wrong with using a katana, since it looks cool, but it's hard to understand why he hasn't developed his skills much over the years.

The brothers found a Pokémon Monster Hunter-like Pokémon.

Seeing a monster tens of meters tall, the same size as Ultraman, unable to deform a steel plate only 5 centimeters thick, I knew that the author probably dropped out of elementary school.

It's lost its charm. Trainers aren't qualified to recruit or team up; it's all about powerful bricks flying around. The swordsman doesn't use Dragonite or sharpen his sword; he's just using a long sword to fight like a flying sword... The power system has collapsed. Now, apart from the legendary Pokémon, the protagonist is practically invincible. He can probably beat champions with ease.