Pirate: I, Nautilus, Am the Overlord of the Deep Sea

If the author does not change the third chapter, the book will have a high probability of failure. I don't quite understand the plot of Chapter 3. A person who can fight hand-to-hand with thirty or forty meters of sea kings in the sea, a character who feeds the whole ship, will be threatened by a rookie captain of an unknown pirate group in the East China Sea with a flintlock gun to his head and threaten to jump off the ship to lure away the sea kings. I am very curious about the posture of holding a gun against a person. The distance is enough to subdue the captain based on the strength of the protagonist written by the author. Not to mention the speed of the gun, this is the reaction of a competitive person. If the captain described by the author is stronger, I will admit it, but he is not. It's entirely possible to write that the captain is afraid of giant sea kings and just abandons the protagonist and runs away, but he has to write a forced drama. What's the point of writing this? If the author doesn't want to change it, I suggest adding a little description about the captain's strength to tell us readers that even if the captain is stronger than the protagonist, this plot will not be weird. (I quite like this idea. I hope the author will take a look at it and think about it. Of course, it doesn't matter if he doesn't adopt it. After all, this is your work, the author, and your own ideas must be the main idea.) For the above, cheers, author.

By the way, has the protagonist never thought of exercising in all these years?

I just want to know if the protagonist is really a time traveler, it doesn't look like it

The subject matter is good, but the writing is dirty

The subject matter is quite good, but it's terribly verbose.

The protagonist is very strong and very weak. I can only say that, the strong one is the numerical value, the weak one is the record.

Chapter 3 is a bit lame, I suggest you make some changes.

Why get a Devil Fruit? The settings in One Piece are so weird. Isn't it normal to have a curse? There are too many drawbacks and enemies of Devil Fruits 😥

This book has a good idea. But in fact, the first few pictures don't need to be so complicated. We also deliberately created a character setting that is the same as the Titan of the Deep. After all, as the protagonist, the time traveler, you just need to give him a template. So now that I have read the first three chapters, I am really a bit disappointed.

Ornn, Bear, Titan, who is next?

The terrifying Titan of the Deep Sea fought back and forth with the little wild boar from Novice Village. JPG

Congratulations to the eagle or not to the eunuch for his achievement.