Red Mansion: One Man, One Gun, Guarding a City

To be honest, there are too many bugs, and there are also problems with the character development of the protagonist. Too weak, the behavioral habits and language arts are inconsistent with the character's experience. You have killed more than 100,000 people with your own hands. Let's not talk about data issues. Just the killing of so many people and watching so many people and horses turn into limbs and minced meat in front of your eyes will change your own personality and state greatly! Not to mention that after Ban Shi returned to the court and was granted the title, a first-class official with real power and a second-class official who was in charge of an army of hundreds of thousands was used to "kneel down" by a lady from the back house who had only met for a few hours as a sign of humiliation? The person kneeling on the ground is not Jia Baoyu. Do you believe it or not that anyone can become an instant mortal enemy? I was trying so hard to build a relationship with the protagonist earlier, but ended up offending him to death as soon as Jia Baoyu dropped the jade? How is the plot conflict created in this way? The protagonist's handling method is also very problematic. You have such a high status, so you have to use your strength to deal with this matter? Also borrowed Lin Ruhai? Why, in the protagonist's mind, Mrs. Wang's "kneel down" is still a child's play? I originally thought that you were covering up and planning to attack Wang Ziteng and the Jia family later, destroying their families and destroying their families. But it turned out that you were actually a missile from the earth world? If you don't have the guts to play, just find PLA. If you really can't cooperate in development, if you become a rich man with a fat home, wouldn't it be good for the country to get resources? You have reached the top of the country and still suffer from this cowardice! What's the difference between threatening a person with firepower at every turn and scolding a stupid dog who can't play or show off his stockpile of nuclear weapons? No character charm! You still have to watch the original characters in Red Mansion before the bonus is exhausted. When the character design collapses and you can't stand it anymore, your data will still have to be lost.

There's something wrong with what you wrote. Whether it's leaving the city or killing enemies, it's too setting-like and not logical. The defenders will not leave the city easily, especially if they are under siege. Second, if your machine gun drives back the enemy, will the attackers know how to attack your wall? And no ladder? Killing 100,000 enemies is too exaggerated, and you are only one person. How about ten days. If you encircle but not attack, make a sneak attack at night, or attack from all sides, you can kill hundreds or thousands of people at most and be gone. Because you have no way out.

Not one minister can produce thirty thousand pieces of armor, this...

While you haven't written much, I think you should take a good look at the original Dream of Red Mansions and then write an outline to design the plot and start a new book. The time travel between two lives is also very good... It will definitely become popular once it is written.

In my opinion, at least 2 people are needed to guard the city on a day shift and a night shift.