Inherit a Mercenary Group at the Start

I had a brain hemorrhage just watching this mentally retarded plot. In order to show that I am a mercenary with no nationality, I forcefully explained it and made the Chinese people sick to the point of vomiting after watching it.

The back part is too watery. It only takes 30 coins to write 2,000 words. When writing about gambling, it takes two or three chapters to describe how many points the protagonist gets in poker and how many points his opponent gets.

There are more than 40 chapters of fighting in one mission, which is not good enough, and there is also a description of a female police officer who is extremely beautiful, which is rare in the world? What does this mean, are you preparing to collect a harem?

You're so awesome for putting your identity information on the dark web, and you also need photos and stuff.

100% Waste Lu style, it is recommended not to use your brain

Poisonous or unreasonable points: 1. The female reporter did not tell the protagonist the truth, forcing the protagonist to deal with drug gangs and special police throughout the city. 2. The protagonist puts all his photos and personal information on the dark web, where they can be viewed casually. 3. After the death of the female reporter, the chip fell on the ground. The protagonist did not take it with her when she left (you wouldn't think that the poison gang would not kill you in this way), but later ran back to get it after fighting against the poison gang. 4. Specifically emphasize how good-looking the detective Captain Chen is, with light red hair 🤔 5. The summoned members of the special operations team have too strong personal consciousness, and they don't look like they were summoned, but rather like they were recruited in the real world. 6. When summoned, their family members in the game are also embodied. Advantages: 1. The protagonist is decisive in killing and will not be indecisive. Seeing the beautiful Captain Chen, he has a clear mind and is not like Brother Pig. 2. Even if the protagonist's strength is not compromised, a couple of hundreds will still kill each other indiscriminately.

It's really good. I thought it was a good book, but it turned out that I was a virgin at the beginning. Two missions were over a hundred chapters long. So why don't you write a p? Be a mercenary and still be a virgin, 141 The whole team came out to take on a mission and pay back the favor Chapter 30 or 40 hasn't even started yet, your word count is really outrageous

It's nonsense. How could he not leave a few loyal subordinates for his lair and a few trustworthy people to protect his son? There wouldn't be many, not even one or two. You are a mercenary group, and the mercenary team is not wiped out. I don't care what you do. Mercenaries make a living. If you don't completely trust someone, how can you not leave a backup plan? It's just nonsense and brainless. I still suggest that you change the mercenary group to a mercenary elite team, which is more reasonable.

Or are you still licking the Xia Kingdom? The world is so big and there are so many Guojia, but no one has contacted the protagonist to hire him? I can't write without mentioning Xia Guo. What are you writing about? What kind of place is most suitable for mercenaries? Of course it's the battlefield in the Middle East. There's no use doing boring tasks all day long. Blackwater has directly intervened in the war.

Is there any way to skip chapters? I really can't stand it without skipping chapters. Serum powers and flying knives haven't appeared for hundreds of years. I've written countless chapters about ordinary gunfights. It's stinky and long. Who is still reading these?

There is a problem with your system. The most powerful mercenary system, just make weapons. Think about the problem for yourself.

It's useless to give weapons. You don't understand mercenaries at all. All mercenary groups have specialized arms companies to supply them. And there are also informal ones. As long as you have money, you can buy a nuclear bomb! It's not as good as the whole automatic order taking thing!

When I read Chapter 11, I couldn't stand the repeated calling of drug dealers as drug dealers. It happened too many times. This title made me feel very weird, like a monster in a game.

What did the author think of putting his photos on the dark web? On the other hand, it is said that mercenaries have no bottom line and are just for money. If you sell the card back to the drug lord, wouldn't the price be higher? Another one: Is it the same thing to say that Chinese criminal police have no money and that Interpol has no money? The most egregious thing is to set up a super stupid mission. The protagonist is a mercenary who kills people and sets fires to serve as bodyguards. If you get a job like Interpol and go to other countries to find needles in haystacks to save hostages, what kind of mercenary do you think you are? Forget it when the title of the book is changed to Domestic Lingling Paint

Which of the world's most famous mercenary organizations doesn't have a country behind it? The protagonist rips off his own country for a little money and has no way out. I don't know how to evaluate it. I know that selfishness is human nature, but stupidity should not be the case.

No one with any common sense would say that there is an organization called "China Interpol"

It's too dissuasive. The whole article is completely unreasonable and is completely the product of the author's assumptions.

Remember, mercenaries do not deserve the right not to kill prisoners

The strongest mercenary. A mercenary who specializes in serving women. The strongest mercenary in the world.

There is a problem with the overall setting of this novel. At the beginning, the author gave a background of the heir of a mercenary group. As a result, the plot started to ask for money and no one. So why did the author give this background? Are you deceiving people with the title of the book? And since it is a group, it should have the equity of multiple companies, so it is not so easy to shift. At the same time, the author said that the people in the group have been poached. This is not a contract signed by an ordinary company, and there must be huge liquidated damages. How can the protagonist have no money? And the protagonist's father, as the boss of a mercenary group, is fighting a large-scale battle. The boss personally goes to the front line? Boss Wagner didn't even fight on the front lines of the Russo-Ukrainian war! Also, the protagonist's father knew that his job was dangerous and he couldn't have bought the family fund. This is also a loophole.