Hogwarts: Oops, I'm Voldemort

I have always felt that Voldemort looks particularly like the starting male protagonist. The orphanage where he was born has basically nothing but super talents. The point is that he has no system and relies entirely on his own scheming, methods and wisdom. A mixed-race man worked his way to the top in a magical world full of discrimination. Totally an inspirational example. Lucius, Snape, etc. He was quite temperamental in front of Dumbledore. In front of Voldemort, he immediately became a good boy. Little Barty regards his father as his enemy and Voldemort as the most important existence. The charisma of young Voldemort is evident. It's just that the person becomes abnormal after being sliced. And a big misunderstanding among fans is that Grindelwald is just a wizard who is good at dark magic. He does not call himself the Dark Lord. It's not in the book or the movie. There are quite a few fanfics. Officially, the title Dark Lord refers to Voldemort and only Voldemort. Derived from his name "Lord Voldemort", Voldemort's Death Eaters and those wizards who feared and respected him respectfully called him "The Dark Lord".

Even now I still wonder why the title of the book is "Suffer" and not "It's Bad"

I finally waited until the chapters were released. After reading the updated 15 chapters, I roughly understood the cool operations of the first few chapters. The opening chapter is the second Chamber of Secrets. From the previous article, it seems that the resurrection can be completed a long time ago, but it has been delayed. Finally resurrected, he escaped and was beaten again, which made everyone feel very awkward. Now it seems that the purpose is to be captured by Dumbledore in Azkaban, so that it can connect with the plot of the third Prisoner of Azkaban and have the possibility of communicating with the prisoners. The scenes of the resurrected Voldemort and Sirius in prison are very novel, and by the way, the plot of Regulus and the locket in Part 6 and Part 7 can also be added smoothly. In addition, he also connected with Bella and Malfoy. The protagonist let Voldemort's die-hard loyalist in prison, Bella and others know that Peter Pettigrew, the star who had tricked the Dark Lord, was very good at this operation. It can be imagined that in the following plot, Peter will be attacked on both sides. Without Peter resurrecting Voldemort and Voldemort hand-picking him as a loyal servant, I am afraid those diehards would only hate him and would not be able to accept this colleague. In addition, it is also to allow the protagonist to train as an Animagus and use Animagus to escape from Azkaban. This is very impressive to ordinary people, but very embarrassing to Voldemort. Logically, he should be able to escape from Dumbledore's hands. The remnant soul can run away. Of course, it can also be said that there is a young entity after resurrection and the mana is not enough. However, the author gave him a cheat here, allowing the Animagus to transform and upgrade. With the Thunderbird - the magical animal form, and the Eagle - the ordinary animal form, this arrangement is acceptable. And it leads to a new plot line---it's not just the effect of the elixir, it may be affected by some kind of existence, which may be related to time travel. Therefore, judging from the plot after it was released, that is, after the protagonist was captured in Azkaban, the plot arrangement and development are quite good, the details are reasonable and smooth, and the clever IQ has once again occupied the high ground. However, the problem is that the chapters before being captured are too deliberate, just to force the protagonist to be captured, which somewhat lowers the protagonist's IQ and magic power, and raises Dumbledore too high. Looking at the comment section, many people have opinions. Someone said a long time ago that the protagonist will only attack according to the original work, but it makes sense based on the content of the article, but the further it goes, the more awkward it becomes, slowing down the pace, overpowering the protagonist, and getting caught, which suddenly ignited all the accumulated dissatisfaction. If any new friends read this, I suggest you stick with it or skip it. Except for these few chapters, everything is quite interesting. The future is promising.

I have ordered some intermittently since it was released, and I will say a few words when I see the end. Personally, I think the biggest problem with this book is that it is not "fanfiction" enough. The theme of hp is not magic competition, but a fantasy campus daily life. The protagonist starts as a diary. Of course, he cannot always suppress the resurrection as the early goal, but once the protagonist is resurrected, he is directly separated from the original environment. Later, he had to work hard to create a principal battle before returning. As a result, too many things that could be written were cut off. In the later stage, the combat power was raised too high, and as a result, there was no way out except breaking the secrecy law, which was poorly written and noisy in the HP circle. But I still say the same thing, no one is interested in carrying out institutional reform in a fairy tale. I have seen that one or two authors particularly like to pursue some things in the original work, such as Voldemort's pure-blood concept, and whether wizards and Muggles can fight a war. I think studying these things is similar to "If I were Tom, I would have captured Jerry" and "If I were the Gray Wolf, could I run away?" The theme of the work does not let you focus on this. In the end, it turned out that the author himself felt that he couldn't grasp it and ended it hastily. In the final analysis, it failed to capture what the readers wanted to see. If you continue to be possessed in Hogwarts, using ancient magic as an excuse to write daily + posts (it is a pity that there is no emotional line in the end), and at the same time, as a dean-level dark wizard outside to accumulate financial resources and influence to assist the plot, and try to participate in and bring out the original plot, you may have better results. I look forward to the day when the author returns to HP again, and I also hope to find an unusual start like the diary. Best wishes! ps: Some people may want to say that he came here just for the Dark Lord and don't want to see the emotional line, but HP is ultimately a fairy tale. The background structure does not support your struggle for hegemony. Apart from Hogwarts, there is not much. If it is all original or has too many magic modifications, it will lose many readers like me. Besides, who can write a fanfic for you if originality can produce results... As for daily articles without a heroine, I think for a daily-themed article, unless the author does not know how to write emotional drama, there is no need to cut off such a large chunk of what can be written.

Let's talk about the resurrection article, which is a bit outrageous. Since you only need the resurrection stone to be resurrected, you are still causing trouble in the school. What does it mean to be resurrected in the school? You can always hide yourself, make resurrection stones in school, and be resurrected at Ginny's house at Christmas.

Just like the title, at first glance it looks like this, I'm still thinking about when I read this book

When I read Chapter 26, I didn't understand why it had to follow the original plot? Even the time and place are the same. Is there any help for the main mission of resurrection? If you want to be resurrected, just ride the basilisk from the secret passage to Brother Huo and eat chicken from outside; if you want to accumulate strength, don't do anything, use Ginny's body to read and study Why should you follow the original work? Even if you don't cause trouble, Old Deng won't know you are here. You, a good troublemaker, can only stay at Hogwarts for one semester and then run away. Your strength has not improved much. You are too slow to be resurrected. Why don't you occupy both ends?

Already cast a monthly vote for more updates. The author hopes this book is a harem.

There are thick dark circles under her eyes. Ginny should be a little suspicious again, or talk to the protagonist again, otherwise she would be too stupid. A serious lack of sleep is harmful.

The original plan was to resurrect by absorbing life force and killing someone. Author, who are you planning to kill? 🪖 There is also a question of whether the life of Voldemort will be tied to him after resurrection. It will be difficult to write about it later.

The first part is average, the second part is pretty good, but the ending sucks, I can't comment🙃

I read a similar book before, which also turned into a Horcrux in a notebook. As a result, the protagonist was very speechless. After going through all the troubles to be resurrected, he turned out to be a child to go to school again and fall in love with the little girl Hermione. I was so disgusted that I immediately abandoned the book. I hope this book can be written in a completely different style

I don't understand why the basilisk was released. Why can't you replace someone at school by secretly possessing someone through a diary. For example, Professor Harlot. Then he resigned after a year. The world outside is very vast. Doesn't freedom feel good to him?

After reading the first few chapters, I felt something was wrong. No one died in the basilisk incident because of luck. Ginny didn't die because Harry destroyed the notebook in time, otherwise he would have died. The author emphasizes that the setting of absorbing the wizard's life force and resurrecting it will not kill anyone is very wrong.

Toxic, I mentioned earlier that to suck life energy, you have to suck a little wizard in school. You said you can't beat a black wizard. But later, when you can possess someone, you can obviously leave the school and find someone to suck it. But you have to be afraid in school and don't go against the grain.

After reading all the crazy posts, I would like to say something nice. The only thing I can complain about is that the part about jailbreaking should be explosive, but it stopped abruptly, and there was no point where I could be poisoned and die, at least I haven't yet.

It's a rare gem among HP fics. It was a bit watery when I didn't resurrect in the early stage. After resurrecting, the rhythm is good. Come on, author.

It's good to watch, don't watch the harem, you're here for the plot, not the women.

Suddenly an idea came to mind. If Ginny were a passionate heroine, would she have this style of painting? When Ginny is in danger, she directly opens the diary and replaces it with dual cores. "I'm going to fuck you, Tom!". Jpg

The beginning was good. Under the pressure of the White Devil, Tom's identity kept making small moves. Later, with the tacit understanding with Lao Deng, the homogeneity with other fans became more and more serious. I would like to give the author an idea. Instead of breaking the wizard's secrecy law, make it one-sided and transparent, such as for purebloods before the age of 11. Carry out basic education instead of home education, and add normal middle school content to Hogwarts. After graduating from Hogwarts, instead of getting married and having children immediately, you can enter a Muggle university to continue your studies according to your wishes. The function of the Misuse of Muggle Items Office should be based more on preventing modified objects from being discovered by Muggles. Modification is prohibited. Weasley's car and Sirius's motorcycle are all very good ideas. By extension, there are many things that can be modified. For example, if various household appliances do not use electricity and are powered by magic, wouldn't it be a very good idea to make the wizarding world become a parasite of the Muggle world, rather than a divided community? It's obvious who is more exposed, a wizard who also watches The Big Bang Theory or a wizard who doesn't even know what women's clothing is. Similarly, in the military, they don't know how to counter modern weapons with modern weapons. How can a group of lower-level wizards who can't play anything except weapons withstand the assault rifles of the rebels?

It's so sad that it's over like this. The ending is so rushed.

I feel like Cyrus is full of charm

The last few chapters have been well written, and the dialogue has the style of the original. However, the pace may be a bit slow. With Cyrus's ability, Voldemort does not necessarily have to write in such a broad strokes. Voldemort actually lost when Bellatrix chose Cyrus.

This one that regards Death as the final BOSS reminds me of the one in Castlevania, where Death also ends up wanting to start a war and harvest all life in the world.

Finished with flowers🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸

This novel is well written, I give the author 10 points!

I have seen this book before, but I have no interest in dressing up as Voldemort. I read it in the past two days and found it to be unexpectedly good and super good, but it is a pity that it is too little for daily use. Judging from the small part of daily life, it is not that the author cannot write it, which is really a pity. But I couldn't stand it since I went to Ilvermorny. But the previous one is the most interesting fanfic I have ever seen. The three views are very positive. The protagonist is kind but not a virgin. He is good to good people and bad to bad people. For example, he punished Malfoy before and asked Malfoy to kill someone. When Malfoy vowed to kill someone, Malfoy refused and then began to change his view of Malfoy. This is really good.

I've only raised 4 chapters and I'm already a eunuch?

After all, it has a beginning and an end, and the goal is clear, just do it. Voldemort in the front - Death in the back. There are also foreshadowings of the buried pit, but it may be too fast. If there is more 20-30 chapters or something in the middle, and the death is introduced more, the look and feel will be better? But now it looks okay